Yes, much better, pos'd. I hope I wasn't being too nit-picky. Also, I'm pretty sure that "tandem" would still work with the sentence if you just put "and John-Mikael Hellqvist’s rolling guitar work acting tandem with Nick Meredith’s drums." I think that works contextually if you had meant for it to read 'acting simultaneously with...'
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Thanks. Nah, not too nit-picky, an error is an error and it should be resolved.
Hmm, I suppose so, ah well, works fine this way as well.1
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