Why all the neg's? this review is just fine... Still have yet to pick up this album but it sounds pretty interesting
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suddenly my reviews are getting negged to hell go figure :/
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Album Rating: 4.0
Kettering was on Chuck last night. It was epic.
There was also another good song on that episode and I can't think of it... oh yeah! Bye Bye Bye by Plants and Animals.
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i dug the review alex, i'd keep the twinkle twinkle thing in even if no one else quite gets it because it is relevent to your opinion (childishness?). everytime i read about this i feel like i get one reason to listen and another not to.
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suddenly my reviews are getting negged to hell go figure :/ I checked them out and, unfortunately, they're not what would be considered anything I can delete for you.
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Album Rating: 3.5
sorry alex : (
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take me away now
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Album Rating: 3.5
well that wont last too long.
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no i dont really care very much about negs anymore so its fine rofl
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Album Rating: 4.5
this review was unnecessary, disagreeable, and poorly written.
;{
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disagreeable i assume you mean -you disagree with me- in which case ok; please tell me if im wrong
unnecessary means -there were already reviews for this- yeah yeah
poorly written? examples please? (not saying you are wrong but how will i know what i did wrong!)
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Album Rating: 3.0
review could use some revising/ analyzing of the album more but i pos'd since it doesn't deserve so many negs, it deserves nuetrals
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what are some revisions guys? help me help you help me
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pos'd because you are getting neg'd to the crapper, didnt read review
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thats more like it
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Album Rating: 3.0
Also important to the album's success is the fact that it sounds good
"sounds" italicized reads weird
tells the story of a man losing a loved one to cancer, not only having to deal with her complaints and unstable feelings towards him, but also inflicting on himself the pain of watching her die.
this part of the sentence reads weird
As well, integral to enjoying Hospice is recognition of the fact that it works brilliantly as an album,
"album" italicized reads weird
thereyago
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ok i dont mean to 'reject' your criticisms (i agree with the second one though) but both of those italicizedisms are because i wanted to accent those two and i'm not sure how else i would do it
because with the first instance ('sounds') i am directing attention away from the lyricism and towards its sound; i want to make a point that it sounds good (see?) as well as reads well (in terms of lyricism).
the second one ('album') is a little less obvious, so maybe ill go ahead and see what i can do with that, but it's kind of the same thing (though i am not directing attention really away from anything as much as -stressing- the importance of how well it works as a single work what with the narrative and those themes i described)
but thanks anyway, i'll probably end up fixing/changing that section of the sentence because it is pretty cumbersome
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Album Rating: 4.5
it reads weird? wtf kind of critisism is that they are fine. ill pos because people are dumb
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Album Rating: 3.0
yeah I understand, I would just suggest taking that sentence out though just because I don't like it. I mean, it's like saying, "In addition, central to the success of this painting is the fact that it looks good." Well duh
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