Album Rating: 2.0
It is actually pretty lol how they have a "half pentagram" on their cover.
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Album Rating: 3.5
massively...
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Looks like a paper airplane.
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DAMNIT! This is what I meant to pick up at the store yesterday!
Also, there's a reason for the "paper airplane".
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Do tell
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It's supposed to be a pentagram without it's "horns", i.e. Satan without his horns. Makes sense seeing as how this album is like a UFC match between God and Satan.
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Very clever, that does make some sense.
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I have no idea why I know that...
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One faithful boring Saturday morning...
*fateful
,, I wandered Sputnik as i do most days. Browsing artists that i currently dig and reading reviews of albums i"ve once had the hots for. And along came Oh, Sleeper's first EP "The Armored March EP". What a great album.. i thought. As i reminisced through old middle school memories,, i realized that i didn"t have Son of the Morning. And i HAD to get it. What kind of fan am i to not?
1) "I" is always capitalized.
2) You use a lot of double-commas (,,) for some reason.
3) You use quotation marks (") instead of apostrophes (') for some reason.
Reveries of Flight hit a soft spot in my heart. He sings of this someone who is deaf to his voice and that he needs to be close to them.
Who is "he"? I assume you mean the singer, but the way you worded it makes it seem like you're referring to the song title.
Those are some glaring mistakes that definitely need to be corrected, but they are by no means the only things wrong with this review. Don't get discouraged, though. Just make the necessary improvements and your writing will improve gradually.
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lots o words
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i like thrice + i like metal so duh i listened to this...
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Album Rating: 3.5
You use quotation marks (") instead of apostrophes (') for some reason.
I think those are just double apostrophes '' instead of a quotation mark "
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There's really no point giving her advice, she'll ignore it anyway. Learned that on her latest review.
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I think those are just double apostrophes '' instead of a quotation mark "
No. Scroll over them; it's one character.
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puts me to sleep
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Album Rating: 3.5
No. Scroll over them; it's one character.
Huh. I really don't get the doubling of characters.
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Haha, I remember talking to Enrico
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nice review Alice, esp for a 1st -- I musta missed this when you wrote it
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Album Rating: 3.5
Haha, I remember talking to Enrico
He lives on in my heart.
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I always kind of enjoyed Banquet for Traitors in all its generic metalcore goodness. Plus the quotable one-liners are just great.
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