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 | taxidermist Saw your list. Just talk to a friend and vent, man. Listen to some awesome/uplifting tunes. Let go of all that ****ing negative, **** feeling 'down.' You'll feel a lot better if you do. Stay up.
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 | devious Don't get too proud, I'm just dnor in disguise.
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 | FromDaHood Yeah, that's a good way of articulating it.
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| FromDaHood I'm not sure if I can to be honest. I wish I could point to something like 'I don't like your sentence structure' but I don't know if I can without lying a little bit. If I had to diagnose it, I think that the way you write is inaccessible to some extent (as in, it's not always clear what you're trying to say), and the jumps between sentences are occasionally illogical. That said, you're a great writer; but sometimes reading your stuff requires thought, and that's off-putting to lazy readers.
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