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|The poor man's cure for the issues in his head,
Can be found in his incessent need to displace, deny...
...displace, deny, project.
When you're invariably honest, lashing out is passé.
Remember when you were fourteen? How awkward was that?
The lack of responsibility was not rewarding.
Is upholding the attitudes of your pubescent days
Supposed to guide you to stability in anyway?
My educated guess is that it will not,
and so I'm asking all of the twenty-something man-children:
Disarm your artillery, the heat for heat's sake is not working.
List is major influences on my writing style.|
|I remember when I was fourteen, and it was awkward.|
This line is awkward. Good lyrics overall, though.
|yeah, I would use some clever word play instead of flat out saying awkward|
|^ , also good stuffs.|
|I shall ponder how to fix said line, thanks bwos.|
|the lyrical subject is really great man, i'm starting abnormal psych on wednesday, defense mechanisms will control you unless u act upon it to realize it and change. It's a great concept and i like where your going with it man. those albums are awesome btw.|
|the edit of that line still seems weird to me.|
|theres a thread for this in the forums prob with more knowledgable people|
|yeah i posted it on the forums, of course i'll probably only get a response form NEEDTOPOST that says "this sucks"|
"the edit of that line still seems weird to me."