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Album Ratings 0
Last Active 11-15-13 7:25 pm
Joined 10-23-13
Review Comments 8
| My Debut Rap Album
I've spent a good amount of time on Sputnik over the past couple years,
but just decided to make an account now. So, even though this is
gonna sound like another spammy (which, admittedly, it is) "new user
promoting his music" list, for what it's worth I have been a regular visitor
of this site for awhile. Anyway, I've only uploaded the first 2 tracks
from my debut so far on Youtube, but the rest of the album will be up
shortly. Any feedback and listens are greatly appreciated! | | 1 | Decibel
Jaws
www.youtube.com/watch?v=J47iS_LwmOU | | 2 | Batten the Hatches
www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRkEoszEBw8 | |
asdfjkl
10.23.13 | I'll just get it over with now and bring up the '97-'00 Em comparisons myself. Yes, I'm aware of them, but rap's kind of my side project, I do have some original alternative/acoustic stuff I'm working on that's far less similar to others' work. | dsroka005
10.23.13 | who does your beats? check mine out on soundclouddotcom/urbanassaultmusic | asdfjkl
10.23.13 | I do my beats. I actually play all the instruments too (except the drums, obviously, which i still program). But, yeah, I'll give yours a listen man. | StallionMang
10.24.13 | Not bad at all, impressive lyrics and props for playing your own instruments. Keep up the good work! | tempest--
10.24.13 | gd username bro | MosesMalone
10.24.13 | It's his stage name don't hate. | tempest--
10.24.13 | dude i said it was gd can u even read | MosesMalone
10.24.13 | No, I can't. They said plowing was far more important than reading. | LambsBread
10.24.13 | Honestly:
album cover looks dumb.
the first song's chorus is bad, and so was the beat.
the chorus was a little better in the second song and the beat was way better. But overall the chorus' just sounded pretty bad (I only listened once though).
The lyrics were pretty good/funny, there was about five times I laughed when listening to this shit lol. however some of the lines didn't really stand out at all and your subject matter of just talking about violent shit over and over got boring after the first song | LambsBread
10.24.13 | first song 6.8/10
second song 7.1/10
| dsroka005
10.24.13 | @lloyd do you even vowel? | UrbanAchiev3r
10.24.13 | man, your style reminds me more of recent celph titled than any eminem. keep doin your thing | asdfjkl
10.24.13 | Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I've never heard of Celph Titled, but apparently I should check him out. Also, promise not to spam too hard, but maybe when the full CD's up, I'll post the updated links. | Uranium
10.24.13 | Some of the lyrics are pretty creative so nice job man. I think you need to adjust your tone so your songs have a little bit more personality. Also, the jaws chorus is pretty bad. |
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