Comatorium.: Comatorium Collective

Comatorium. 05.27.10	I'd really like to start reviewing more often. Not "Bulldog Often," but between one and three a week depending on how school and work pan out this summer. Henceforth, more than just whoring myself out, I'd really appreciate it if some site vets would take a look at these and give me some pointers to improve.
porch 05.27.10	hey man i'm a vet delete all your reviews
Comatorium. 05.27.10	Hey man youre funny.
Counterfeit 05.27.10	"Not "Bulldog often"" lol'd at that.
Comatorium. 05.27.10	I made a funny.
porch 05.27.10	I'm no reviewing expert but i glanced at the first one if you want my two cents: starting a review with "Sorry for the long review" just looks kind of unprofessional, plus that review is basically track by track and kind of fanboyish. haven't looked at the others, if they're more recent then i assume they're a lot better. Ask MJ to critique them, he seems to enjoy doing it
porch 05.27.10	the final line of your BTBAM review "you won’t be able to help clamoring for the repeat button." final line of your Number 12 review "But you're more likely to hit the "repeat" button" stop using cliches like that for starters
alachlahol 05.27.10	you rated Snowing - Fuck Your Emotional Bullshit a 5, it's time to stop reviewing or listening to music in general your ears are broken