Hurricanslash: Anyone wanna review a tape by me?

Hurricanslash 10.27.15	Inb4 20 comments that just say "No". But really, yeah, I would appreciate any in-depth response to my music, because, like I said, I really, really, really want to improve. And maybe someday release something that people could give an honest shit about.
zakalwe 10.27.15	I'm cringing before I've even listened to the stuff. Here goes.
Hurricanslash 10.27.15	Why are you cringing? Because of the album art?
zakalwe 10.27.15	You know what. I can appreciate it, it's not as horrendous as I hoped. Fair fucks to ya, I just hope you're not in your late 20s.
Hurricanslash 10.27.15	I am 20. So, yeah, don't worry bout that. And thank you for finding it tolerable!
initforthelisten 10.27.15	Listened to Nothingness. I find it interesting. I'm unsure if you're attempting to come across as otherwise, but you should attempt to exude some more confidence. It's fine to come off as reserved to make it a bit more captivating, but at least be confident in your own abilities. For instance, in the first track you come across as somewhat timid towards your own work; I levitate much more towards the comparatively aggressive or confronting 'e.G.'. Apart from that, I imagine it's all practice. Practice staying on beat, your singing on the hooks, and avoid cliches in your lyrics. Otherwise, you seem rather passionate about this, so good luck. Was a fun listen.
Hurricanslash 10.27.15	Ay man, thank you so much. Considering my confidence, it's mostly because I'm not really confident as a person, but I'm working on that day by day. And again, thank you. I'm practicing as much as I can.^^
Final Origin 10.27.15	Been hearing your mixtapes for a while man, they get better every release you make and I think you have got a lot of potential to improve even further. I agree with the comments saying that your confidence as such doesn't shine through as much as it should when you deliver the lines. I feel that a bit more conviction and belief would be a good starting point to improve your work, keep it up!
SharkTooth 10.27.15	you need to work on your flow when your rap in German, it sounds like you're mumbling at times, you also slur your lyrics a bit too often, so you might wanna try rehearsing your raps or recording multiple times before making your final recording to put into the mixtape your English rapping is rather simple and basic lyrically, but that makes sense as English is your second language otherwise the tape itself isn't too bad I guess
SharkTooth 10.27.15	I haven't heard your other stuff but judging from this you do have the potential to get better
granitenotebook 10.27.15	ditto to what Final said. love your lyrics/subject matter, just need to work on your confidence in your delivery a little. you seem nervous. it's hard to get past that but keep working on it and I know you'll get there. also seriously amazed that English isn't your first language
Hurricanslash 10.29.15	I want to thank you all for taking the time to listen to my music and give me some advice, I will definitely work on everything that you all brought up. Thank you so much!