Here's another one that has really no interest, maybe for good reason. Time will tell all.
Death black folk metal or whatever they shall prefer to be called isn't really my cup of tea, but a solid review. Have a pos.
Seems like you're improving little by little with every review. Keep up the hard work.
Digging: Obliteration - Black Death Horizon
Thanks guys- hawks, yeah i have tried to pay special attention to wording and such.
Listeners must carefully look ‘Into The Archaic’.
As opposed to, what; dangerously?
Where black metal is needed, heavily influenced by the folk style comes Appalachian themed but United States made, ‘Falls of Rauros’.
This doesn't make any sense either
This is first full-length release made
*the first full-length
coupled with a poor production.
Lose the "a"
When listeners first try out Into the Archaic it can be assumed that they will first look for the positives.
This isn't exclusive to just this album
While there are some interesting combinations between differing elements i.e. the sweet melodic wind instruments that dance above and below the typical aggression of distorted guitars and moderately fast drum patterns
You start this sentence with "while there" you fail to include an alternative before you end it. Example: "while there is a large amount of ____ and ____ you will also find....." etc
for a longer period of time.
Long period of time
(whom could be considered a couple of the genres heavyweights)
The tone colour provided here
Purple, magenta? What are we talking about here?
feed some of the natural themes
*feed off of; or, "combine with the natural themes...."
These themes are a rough mixture of nature and the bands belief in returning the world to a ‘before Christian times’, a radical upheaval of the modern world.
Truthfully this whole sentence is a little iffy
The vocals add contrast
add a contrast
Before listeners tumble head first into this record, they should be aware of the quality to make sure they are not blown away by hype
What hype? You haven't exactly been singing its praises
The music this time around may not receive many repeated plays.
Lose this and conclude the review with the previous sentence
Digging: Logos - Cold Mission
Review makes me want to read Hatchet at Starbucks.
Man I love that book
"yeah i have tried to pay special attention to wording and such."
Or not as much as previously thought. Cheers Dev you can always spot that kind of crap.
Oh, that could be out of context there. It's an aural training description, it refers to sound sources or 'media' that is used within a sample or song. Can be described through instrumentation, or effects or similar,yet still different instruments i.e. an electric guitar vs. an acoustic guitar.
"Review makes me want to read Hatchet at Starbucks."
Kid stuck alone in a forest, but has one tool; a hatchet?
I really think you're trying too hard to sound eloquent and in turn you end up writing stuff that makes no sense whatsoever.
Maybe i should go back to a 'to the point' style of writing.
Some straight to the point reviewers are amazing, you don't need to drench your work in these obscure metaphors for it to be a good review.
Hmm..barring all the mistakes pointed out by Deviant., the review is decent...
Noted, and if you're thinking about giving these guys a listen, you are probably going to like them less to Appalachian Winter.
I've heard these guys before and they are okay but nothing I've revisited since the first time I've spun them.
Then its probably not going to change your mind.
I'm hoping this will get a few more ratings
ya duud hatchet is metal m/
mm ipod you should get rid of the summary man
Nice review once again, have a pos maine.
So, is there really any point in me going through your review if the changes aren't going to be implemented?
Sorry man, I'm just commenting on a phone from work,