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| Build-an-Album R10: Weaving a Web
There are four! And now there must be three... | 1 | | Noise Trail Immersion Symbology of Shelter
The genre was HOST CHOICE - METALCORE, the theme was "W, PALW?", and users had to grapple with a strict 30-to-40-minute album duration specification with at least six tracks included. The dumb rule further forced contestants to make sure each major metalcore decade (90s, 00s, 10s) was representated by at least one of those tunes. Considering how much I love the genre, I committed myself to being a very difficult judge for this round. Lyrics undoubtedly took primary focus, but can lyrics alone carry the day? Let's see. | 2 | | Converge Petitioning the Empty Sky
Sint's album: When it comes down to it, Sinternet has basically been the textbook model for consistency in this competition, and the trend continues to shine here. The flow, predictably, worked very well and was able to cross over decade boundaries without trouble. There was a consistent style of straightforward, more hardcore-driven instrumentation rather than especially melodic or chaotic displays, embodying the more 'classic' presentation of the genre. Lyrically, there were a treasure trove of strong phrases to be found. In some instances, they could be weighed down by their delivery--the cleans on the intro track were rather amateurish--or simply come across as basic, as was the case with Track 7's standard "rise-up" sort of fare. The chorus on the closer additionally sounded cheesy, especially when compared to the other lines found throughout the song. | 3 | | Converge Petitioning the Empty Sky
That being said, the highlights undeniably covered up the low points. Sometimes cryptic and sometimes straightforward, the majority of the lines here had purpose and were uttered with passion. Track 2 portrayed a striking scene of self-harm as a means of gaining attention, but it turns into an addiction; the repetition of "Shut up and pay attention!' really hit hard and made me miss when Tim's voice still had such conviction in it. The Disembodied cut, while not aesthetically pleasing, made up for that by just dealing out brutal, despairing honesty, which the band excelled at. As mentioned before, the instruments were on-point throughout, with tons of memorable leads. The lyrics got the win, but having good performances elsewhere sealed the deal. VERDICT: 4.2 | 4 | | Silent Planet Everything Was Sound
bg's album: A similar beacon of consistent quality, bg ended up taking this round a little further than others by crafting a loose concept to tie together the different tracks. While not necessary--the lyrics here were solid to begin with--it added an extra story sort of element to the mix that gave the disc more emotional weight. Instrumentally, there was a bit more of a mainstream appeal in play in terms of the driving, central riff melodies, with choruses being employed in a pop-esque manner--the inclusion of a band like Architects is evidence enough. Once again, the flow between the tracks progressed without a hitch. The lyrics here were much more of a back-and-forth affair when it came to their value, however, as some clearly outshone lesser lines. Track 2 undoubtedly stands out as the most flagrant offense in this case, as its lyrics become very repetitive from the get-go, featuring little content to chew on outside of the same phrases over and over. | 5 | | Silent Planet Everything Was Sound
There were two cases that stood out in a different manner because they were held back in a way: track 5 contained beautiful lines ("Don't let your boat be empty / Don't be a sunken dream / Don't let your boat regret thee / For what you could have seen") but the vocals were erm... odd at times. Then there was the closer, whose speech was incredible and grandiose--but the band didn't write it. It felt almost like cheating, in a way? But considering I didn't really make any requirements on the contrary, I didn't find issue with it, and it was indeed a fitting reversal from earlier negativity. Track 4's engaging imagery and interpretation of "drowning" as almost like a saving grace was particularly effective. Overall, this held up despite arguable low points. (SiKth being weird is kind of par for the course anyways, right?) VERDICT: 3.8 | 6 | | Botch American Nervoso
Steak's album: Here again was an album that seemed to lean towards the mainstream sound of the 2000s - 2010s, although this comes across much more strongly here than in bg's album. This meant djent riffage was a reoccurring motif alongside previously discussed tropes and sparkly-clean vocals. None of that is necessarily bad, but when presented in excess and when using sub-par tracks to represent the sound, it gets tiresome. Tracks 5 and 6 are clear examples of this, where the central guitars felt so whitewashed that they could have come from any other 'prog' act and I would've been none the wiser. These instances essentially made it so the lyrics had to carry the entire load with minimal support. | 7 | | Botch American Nervoso
There again, unfortunately, this album was lacking. Tracks 5 and 6 bear mentioning once more for the latter's awkward wording and uninspiring narrative, the lackluster vocal performance only compounding those issues, and the former's juvenile reliance on cursing to build intensity. Track 7 got repetitive very quickly, making use of the same lines constantly, and the lines that were chosen were not really noteworthy. Not all was doom and gloom--track 2's take on a "rise-up" style was powerful while track 8 was chilling in its depressive reality--but the majority of the songs, sadly, faltered. VERDICT: 3.3 | 8 | | Converge The Dusk in Us
neek's album: Not unlike many other rounds, neek once again found himself in unfamiliar territory. Yet, if the past is proof enough, he tends to shine when even neek himself least expects to. The tunes found on this album meshed together well, just like those exhibited by peers, but the styles presented covered a much broader terrain: classic Dillinger chaos, electronic elements, hardcore intensity, and hints of rock were peppered throughout. It made for a varied listening experience, which does not in of itself make for a better time than albums possessing greater internal consistency, but it was a welcome deviation. Because of the longer track times, there was a lot of hope riding on those choice cuts putting in the right work. And, with the notable exception of track 2--Avenged Sevenfold were never very impressive, and the repetitive lyrics left no impact whatsoever--they did their job. | 9 | | Converge The Dusk in Us
The obvious centerpiece was embodied by the titanic third track, which dwarfed the lengths of any other song included this round. The lyrics captured the tragic sense of longing for a lost connection, one that cannot be forgotten. In the case of track 5, the words expressed are not themselves beautiful or stunning, but the way they are written and then presented is perfectly vitriolic. Despite the setback imposed by track 2 and the intro track's admittedly 'eh' lyrics, the body of this piece remained firmly grounded. Buttressed by commendable instrumentation, this equaled to a positive. VERDICT: 3.9 | 10 | | Noise Trail Immersion Symbology of Shelter
The chips have fallen where they may, and now the standings look like this!
FIRST PLACE: Sint (4.2)
SECOND PLACE: neek (3.9)
THIRD PLACE: bg (3.8)
This unfortunately means that someone's run is going to have to be cut short. It has been a memorable ride coming all this way, but cuts have to be made and the axe has to fall somewhere.
Steak (3.3) is ELIMINATED. Thank you for joining us through this competition and for your patience. You played hard and gave it your all, but it just didn't quite surpass the mark. | 11 | | Macho Man Randy Savage Be A Man
And then there were three. After battling it out over nine different rounds and nine different genres, you all have managed to stand out and survive elimination after elimination. Even when the eliminated players themselves tried to take a swing, you held fast. While the finish line is getting tantalizingly close, nothing is set in stone yet: two more rounds remain until a champion can be crowned. That means two more obstacles, two more genres, and two more ways I can make life hard. Or fun. Either way, it will be a really emotional time. | 12 | | The Hotelier Home, Like NoPlace Is There
So emotional, in fact, it seeped into the genre wheel! The genre is EMO boys and girls and aliens and bacteria. This is yet another territory firmly within the MarsMan's limited-but-occasionally-on-point-but-not-often area of expertise. That means a lot more fun for me, because I can continue to be a judgmental ass! I have to enjoy myself somehow, you know. | 13 | | Macho Man Randy Savage Be A Man
You've had to construct concepts and you've had to focus on lyrics. Now, the two activities must be combined: the theme this round is SHOW AND TALE. The album that you create must be within the random genre pick, obviously, but it cannot be just an album: it must tell a story. Every track must cooperate, musically and lyrically, to craft a reasonably coherent narrative that you string together. Make it happy, make it sad, make it crush my soul or bring about an existential crisis--doesn't matter. Ensure above all else that it makes sense to the best degree and comes together as best as it can. Give me all the details you can as it can only help you more than harm. | 14 | | Macho Man Randy Savage Be A Man
No track limits are to be imposed this round, but a duration limit is once again in place. For the purposes of this trial, at least 45 minutes of material need to be presented in your album. Make that happen in whatever manner you successfully can, but don't even think about going under time! (I'll know). | 15 | | Macho Man Randy Savage Be A Man
Emo is a wide genre, after all, which means it shouldn't be hard to find inspiration. What might make matters a bit harder to navigate will be the "dumb rule" that forces you to pick tracks longer than three minutes. Yep, in a classification replete with tunes under that time limit, I'm gonna force you to go higher because I can. "Point of no return" rules remain as per usual. | 16 | | Macho Man Randy Savage Be A Man
SUMMARY:
Genre = Emo
Theme = Show and Tale
Requirement = Over 45 minutes of content
"point of no return" = no repeat songs; can only use an artist in your album once
"Dumb Rule" = tracks must all be three minutes or greater | 17 | | Macho Man Randy Savage Be A Man
Contestants:
Sinternet | bgillesp | neekafat | |
MarsKid
06.25.19 | And here... we... go! | neekafat
06.25.19 | Steak noooooooo :(
Me yessssss (:
And luckily emo is a genre I've only recently gotten more into lol | SteakByrnes
06.25.19 | wack, I knew it'd be me | SteakByrnes
06.25.19 | I just don't get your metalcore taste, we're opposites | neekafat
06.25.19 | I just don't get metalcore tastes :/ | Uzumaki
06.25.19 | Loved your write up, Mars. Boyos, good luck to you! | bgillesp
06.25.19 | I’m alive!! Too bad I just started a new job and have about 5% of the free time for this I used to have. I’ll try to work on it soon though | neekafat
06.25.19 | Given the timeline as of late, I wouldn't rush it bgill (; | MarsKid
06.26.19 | I'm trying to stay consistent, sorry.
As for this round, I figured a reasonable extension of time would make sense considering the central requirement. I'm hoping to see some pretty rockin' stories. | bgillesp
06.26.19 | You're not the one holding it up. Besides, you're actually gonna finish this thing it seems unlike some other people | neekafat
06.26.19 | [2] I was just teasing MarsDude (: | Drifter
06.26.19 | This is really cool | MarsKid
06.26.19 | Well people seemed to like it Drifter, so I will probably run it again. An alternative could be to have rotating hosts so someone else can have a turn running the comp. I would kinda like to play myself to be honest haha. Judging is entertaining but I'd like to get time on the other side of the field. | Drifter
06.26.19 | Yeah this is a super cool idea but I would not be qualified at all lol. Now, if we were talking making very specific playlist albums in different niche subs of west coast hip hop, then I'd be qualified. But looking at the first entry in this (Industrial) I know absolutely nothing about industrial lol. | MarsKid
06.26.19 | Well that's the fun part to be honest. If I was playing, I would be in a rough spot too since industrial is a weak point of mine. Same with stuff like jazz fusion, partially because it's such a vague tag. The randomness makes it exciting | SteakByrnes
06.26.19 | Yea this was a good comp | Drifter
06.26.19 | Honestly I'd just look up "best _____ songs" on YouTube and go from there lol | MarsKid
06.26.19 | I think someone did that for one of the genres lol, forget which round that was | neekafat
06.26.19 | Drifter I did that for grind and almost one (to be fair I did put a lot of thought into sequencing them)
But yeah a rotating judge thing would be rad | MarsKid
06.26.19 | When this is all over, I'll see if anyone else would be interested in doing another iteration. I definitely still have a lot of ideas that I never used. If I were to do it again, I'd nullify anything previously done in this game's proceedings so as to ensure max randomness, especially if some contestants return to play again. So no metalcore, folk, etc., leaving the door open for any genre that remains to be picked. | Uzumaki
06.26.19 | That... would be interesting to try. That’d be like an overarching “dumb” rule.
As soon as the next iteration of this competition starts up, I am so fucking down for it... | Drifter
06.26.19 | For fun I might try going through the requirements you've made and to the best of my ability make different g funk playlists/albums. The hardest part of the first one will probably just be song title lengths having to be the same lol | neekafat
06.27.19 | Your folk opinions made me so mad ): | MarsKid
06.27.19 | If you had picked "The Greatest Bastard" that round you would have been substantially boosted lol
It does surprise me that people tended to stick to what they knew and didn't try to pander to me much at all. | SteakByrnes
06.27.19 | His metalcore opinions made me so mad lol | neekafat
06.27.19 | You're right that song would've been stronger for the theme, but the one I picked was the better song and fit the flow better, which I thought was more important :/
If it makes you feel better I thought about it a lot
I'm sorry steak :c | Uzumaki
06.27.19 | @steak, welcome to de other side, my brudda. You have been shown de way... out.
Help me heckle the remaining contestants through to the end as we eagerly await the next contest. | MarsKid
06.27.19 | You were fully aware of my stance on mainstream core my man. Invent Animate is among the few that I can get into and they sadly seem to be MIA as of late.
And flow ways matters, naturally, but it was not the way to clinch the round. Strong emotional numbers connected by a subpar flow could have carried on a lot of points on their own. | neekafat
06.27.19 | Clearly | MarsKid
06.28.19 | I try to do the best I can to judge this. Can't please everyone. | SteakByrnes
06.28.19 | It's okay I still love you | MarsKid
06.28.19 | D'aww, that warms the heart | SteakByrnes
06.28.19 | :] | MarsKid
06.28.19 | I'm eagerly anticipating what people come up with for this round. It's arguably the hardest to pull of thus far but the door's open to creativity. | SteakByrnes
06.28.19 | Where the albums at people :] Give this man his emo stories | Uzumaki
06.28.19 | Let’s get on this faster than last time! | MarsKid
07.10.19 | Status report, gents. Where are we? | Uzumaki
07.10.19 | I’ve been here, waiting. Pull up a chair and I’ve got some coffee on brew, if you’d like. | neekafat
07.10.19 | does emo include screamo here? | MarsKid
07.10.19 | Correct | neekafat
07.10.19 | niceeee | SteakByrnes
07.11.19 | how about freeform jazz | neekafat
07.11.19 | ya like jazz? | neekafat
07.14.19 | Okay so here’s my album:
1. Brand New - “Okay I Believe You, But My Tommy Gun Don’t”
2. Sunny Day Real Estate - “Seven”
3. Sorner - “Different”
4. The Hotelier - “Your Deep Rest”
5. Citizen - “Jet”
6. State Faults - “Clairvoyant”
7. American Football - “Uncomfortably Numb”
8. The World Is a Beautiful Place… - “Getting Sodas”
9. Pinegrove - “Rings”
10. Foxing - “Nearer My God”
Spotify playlist: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/7uzcgBbbC09Xlouc2sjFjn?si=LG7pp5S3SdGepgOlJjDIIg
(it’s exactly 45 min again somehow so if I need to change something plz let me know instead of failing me) | neekafat
07.14.19 | Also with most concept albums I prefer those with a looser narrative and it to be whittled down to themes that explicit characters and plot points, but since that’s the name of the game and I know how you love your details, here goes… Since It’s an emo album I went all out and crammed a break up, death, and the 5 stages of grief into it but I’m pretty happy with the story/flow I’ve concocted. I also included some modern themes of corporate distrust and anti-consumerism. Here goes:
“Okay I Believe You, But My Tommy Gun Don’t”:
The introduction to our protagonist. The lyrics here were written sarcastically, but don’t take it as such for this guy. We all know him. He’s an anarchist, he’s a hipster, he’s got a huge ego and thinks he’s right about everything and anything, and is prone to feeling pretty much everything he can to the full extreme of the emotion.
“Seven”:
The fight. He gets into a fight with his girlfriend about her spending too much time at work (which she really cares about) and not with him. Even though he realizes he’s in the wrong, he refuses to back down from his high ground and the relationship ends. The song is rambunctious but foreboding, highlighting the superficial frustration he’s feeling but also the pain he’s soon to face: “You'll taste it, you'll taste it in time / The right words in time”
“Indifferent”:
This mournful emo tune highlights his loneliness now that she’s gone. He’s still not even close to admitting his wrongdoing in the conflict, and the whole thing feels exaggerated as if he’s putting on a show to make people feel sorry for him. Still, the song grows and moves on as he plays it over in his head and comes dangerously close to the realization that it might be his fault after all. Still, he ignores the final message she leaves on his voicemail, (which ends the song).
“Your Deep Rest”:
The next morning he realizes that she’s died in an accident at her job, a giant tech company that’s been branching out into more experimental research. He grapples with his own guilt with the experience (“The sight of your family made me feel responsible”) but ultimately decides that the company is more to blame when a work friend makes mention of some mysterious workings behind the scenes… | neekafat
07.14.19 | “Jet”:
This song features his deep dive into the anger of the situation, planning his vigilante-like attack on the company to get revenge on those responsible for her death. His paranoia is increased, (“All of our ears to the floorboards / My eyes are falling everywhere”) and he begins to uncover more and more dirt on the company and what they’ve been doing under their employee’s noses.
“Clairvoyant” :
This is his battle cry as he engages in his vendetta against the company. The lyrics are a bit on the nose for this one (“No excuses / No mercy” “Kill the old ways”), but the oppressive, violent, and ominous tone of the music sets the stage for the ambiguity of what he’s doing here. He begins to believe himself as a lone bastion of the people against the corporations taking over the world, but it’s not long before things collapse onto themselves.
“Uncomfortably Numb”:
Finally cornered, the man gets badly wounded in a gunfight with security. Hallucinating on the way to the hospital due to blood loss (“I’ll make new friends / In the ambulance”), he imagines a conversation with his deceased ex who he believed he was doing all this for. He comes to terms with the fact that all of this has been just a cover-up for the grief that he feels over her death, and that it just covered up how he was feeling, which was, you guessed it, “Uncomfortably Numb.”
| neekafat
07.14.19 | “Getting Sodas”:
This serves as the emotional climax of the record, in which he escapes with his identity intact and returns to his old house, which still is filled with the memories of her. He finally comes to terms with the end of their relationship and her death, (“This house weighs heavy on my mind” … “Took down your pictures and your belongings”). He realizes the full gravity of what he’s done and decides to turn himself in to the police, but to stand for positive change in the world (“The world is a beautiful place but we have to make it that way / Whenever you find home, we’ll make it more than just a shelter”).
“Rings”:
He stands by his new declaration (“I draw a line in my life / Saying this is the new way I behave now”), and moves forward with his life trying to keep his heart open. He runs out a short prison sentence for good behavior, and another woman becomes interested in him as the song’s 2nd person “You” fluctuates from this new person and his ex. He grapples with her loss still, but wonders if it should still hold him back from feeling love again: (“Am I forgetting how it felt?”) We leave him with her on a hopeful note: “If you sing along do I remember? / Mark this feeling in the simplest shape / Let me finally let it fall away”
“Nearer My God”:
I always imagined this an extremely powerful end credits music. As such, this acts as an epilogue to the film. The protagonist has admits all his faults, he need for affirmation and attention, and wonders if he’ll ever really deserve the love he hopes he’ll find again in that goddamned beautiful bridge: “At hallowed ground, holding hands / Ashing cigarettes on gravestones / Pin photographs on cork boards / Unfollowing my dead friends / Someone's gonna love me.” But we have a feeling through that lovely acoustic outro that things may very well work out in the end. | MarsKid
07.14.19 | Definitely excited to delve into that! | neekafat
07.14.19 | Excited to hear your thoughts, I'm really proud of this one, was fun to flex my storytelling through music (: | neekafat
07.25.19 | :c | SteakByrnes
07.25.19 | who will win the dunkin donuts coupon | bgillesp
07.27.19 | Just got married, gimme some time | Uzumaki
07.27.19 | pssh, you should've prioritized. | neekafat
07.27.19 | Oh my god congratzzzz | Uzumaki
07.27.19 | @neeka, if you’re trying to guilt trip me into congratulating him... it’s working. FR bgill, congrats!
Dammit neeka... | neekafat
07.27.19 | I was/am very drunk I'm sorry ): | MarsKid
07.29.19 | Bumping to keep relevance
To onlookers/audience/those concerned, the contest is still underway; people just live busy lives, and this should naturally not be their first priority. There will be a winner crowned in time, and then I'm sure Build-an-Album will return for a Season 2! | bgillesp
07.29.19 | I plan to set aside some time this weekend I hope. | neekafat
07.29.19 | plz | MarsKid
07.29.19 | Let the man enjoy himself first, that is more important. | MarsKid
08.07.19 | Bumping for relevancy. | bgillesp
08.07.19 | Officially starting to work on this today. Sorry for the delay. Life is finally beginning to settle a bit again. I’ll still finish before sint though. | MarsKid
08.07.19 | Dayum, shots fired! | bgillesp
08.07.19 | Going for a “leaving home” type theme with some maths emo songs. I should have a good list of songs by the end of the week and an order this weekend. | SteakByrnes
08.07.19 | Just eliminate sint and let gilly and neeka battle it out in the finals | Uzumaki
08.07.19 | Sint’s under the gun now. | bgillesp
08.11.19 | Heh, so uh, here’s the thing. I just got in all my secondary applications from medical schools, so that’s what I’m doing this weekend. I’ll do my best to have it done next week. Sorry for backing out on my word. | neekafat
08.11.19 | You do you man, if I had to do this now I certainly wouldn't have the time either! | SteakByrnes
08.11.19 | This contest started in December | Uzumaki
08.11.19 | So it finishes in November, everyone has a month off and we begin again in December. Easy peasy. | neekafat
08.11.19 | Don't remind me holy hell | bgillesp
08.12.19 | If we hadn’t slowed down right before I graduated I would’ve had more time but it is what it is. | bgillesp
08.19.19 | 1. Have Mercy- The Ancient West (gonna leave home cuz he is there)
2. Tiny Moving Parts- Minnesota (leaving)
3. One Hundred Year Ocean- Hospital Town (am angery song)
4. TTNG- If I Sit Still, Maybe I’ll Get Out of Here (regretting angery)
5. Dear Pines- Live There (sad)
6. Tawny Peaks- Bring Back the Mountain (really sad)
7. Edaline- This Fabricated Town (can i go back?)
8. Free Throw- Pallet Town (gotta go back)
9. empire! empire! (i was a loney estate)- I Am a Snail, and You Are a Pace I Cannot Match (angery again cuz wasn’t my fault)
10. American Football- Honestly? (how does it end?)
I have (loosely) outlined the story but I will leave the rest for interpretation since that's always more fun. Sorry again for the delay.
| bgillesp
08.19.19 | Also Hospital Town is exactly 3:00 on spotify, idk about other sources, but where I found it, it was not under 3 minutes | neekafat
08.19.19 | thank god | MarsKid
08.19.19 | All up to sint now. | bgillesp
08.19.19 | Yup. Have you shoutboxed him? | MarsKid
08.21.19 | Hmm, no response from Sint in a while. This might end up being the showdown round if he's not in it anymore. | EclipseInYourEyes
08.21.19 | how did I miss this awesome challenge?! | Sinternet
09.09.19 | sorry everyone to keep you waiting, have had an extremely busy summer at work
will do the writeup as soon as i get a chance, but the tracks are:
1. Mineral - Gloria
2. Imbroco - The Rain That Falls Won't Slow Me Down
3. The Exploration - I Guess, I'm Leaving
4. For Everest - Reasons #2-7
5. The Newfound Interest in Connecticut - Okay, You Can Be Tigers But No Crashing
6. Pool Kids - Borderline
7. Football, etc. - Safety
8. Texas Is the Reason - Back and to the Left
9. Deer Leap - To Moscow and Quickly
10. Don Martin Three - Transistor
11. On the Might of Princes - For Meg | Uzumaki
09.09.19 | OK Mars, time for you to get to work!!! | neekafat
09.09.19 | thank f u c k | MarsKid
09.09.19 | I'll get started soon. Let's heat this up! | Uzumaki
09.09.19 | I’m excited to see how this progresses! | neekafat
09.09.19 | We all know who win (; | Uzumaki
09.09.19 | And if you do, Neek, then you’re the next judge. (: | Sinternet
09.10.19 | cool forgot to post the writeup - won't get too elaborate
the general theme is of a bipolar man running away from his home and a relationship he thinks is abusive but isn't, and ending up dead.
"Gloria" is how he feels about his girlfriend, how he thinks she's uncaring and dismissive. "The Rain That Falls..." is him making his decision to leave his apartment and runaway, written on a letter he left out for his girlfriend to find. "I Guess, I'm Leaving" is the text he sends his parents to tell them he's going and not coming back, and that he loves them. The next few tracks are kinda back and forth messages. | Sinternet
09.10.19 | "Reasons #2-7" is his girlfriend's message to him when she finds the note - he's done this before in an emotionally abusive way and she's fed up of having to cope with the situation. "Okay, You Can Be Tigers..." is her feeling guilty and telling him to stay anyway because he's never gonna get better by running off. "Borderline" is his angry response believing she's just out to get him, and in the end convinces him to carry on running away for good this time, as before he would usually turn around and head home. "Safety" is later that evening, when he would usually be back but he still hasn't returned. Worried about him, his girlfriend sends him this message promising everything will get better and she's there to support him. "Back and to the Left" is that message continued, with her trying to reason with him and understand his troubles, again assuring him he's not alone in this. "To Moscow and Quickly" is his brief and alarming response, having fully convinced himself that he can't go on any longer. "Transistor" is his death as he ties himself to the train tracks. However as the train comes closer he starts regretting it all, frantically trying to untie himself in time and failing. He screams "I love you" into the air but no one's around. "For Meg" is a personal eulogy/mental breakdown from his girlfriend after she hears his body has been found.
deep subject matter and cliche (well it is emo), but hey, I had to rush something in | SteakByrnes
09.10.19 | nice | bgillesp
09.11.19 | Ooh, excited to see how this turns out! (unless i lose) | MarsKid
09.11.19 | Alright, quick life update: been doing student teaching + working at a deli + working at a separate restaurant. So free time and energy have been scarce resources. However, I've got some space coming up in the next few days where I can hopefully buckle down and get this wrapped up. Appreciate everyone's patience; the end is near! | Uzumaki
09.11.19 | Yay! | MarsKid
09.30.19 | You all are amazing, wonderful people and I'm tired of being a disappointment to you all and everyone else. https://www.sputnikmusic.com/list.php?memberid=1059132
You made it far enough, you earned the prize. Hopefully this competition can be done again by a competent host. I can't apologize enough. |
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