shut up cygnatti
Album Rating: 2.5
if you say so
Digging: John Wiese - Deviate From Balance
dude bro because i dont [i]love those immaculate beautiful albums
'probs the weeknd'
y u do dis bro
so is there any reason for that 17% approval past butt sore whining?
Album Rating: 4.0
yeah bad opinions
Digging: Nicolas Jaar - NYMPHS II
Album Rating: 2.5
"dude bro because i dont love those immaculate beautiful albums"
it's okay a 4.9 is an acceptable score easily
you write in a style that demands more expansive prose but you keep it to a single, albeit, lengthy paragraph, so the review comes off as saying almost nothing
It says all that's needed, it just doesn't dwell on it too much
it seems as though you arent saying anything
do you get what i mean or do i have to write an essay about "simplify your language if youre writing a simple review"
you have to decide between treating reviews like writing exercises and treating them as journalistic
enterprises. trying to combine the two like you do here just makes them seem awkward and devoid of
I'll keep it in mind
Although I never thought my writing was that long winded
this is fun OuO
well the point is the way you write and the word choice you use isn't suited to these short reviews. tbh i cant remember reading another review of yours
Man I hope John never notices one of my reviews
why? i dont remember your reviews being bad
Someone else review Lil B with me
Well, I just don't want to get frogstomp'd in such an intelligent way :]
I prefer something along the lines of review is shit lol butts etc
This is my shortest review to be fair.
What exactly is it about the word choice?
well the reason to write a review this short would be, at least supposedly, to make it accessible to read and a quick fix. your word choice goes against the basic tenants of journalism which is essentially the smartest pieces are the ones that use the least complicated wording to convey a meaning. now there is of course room for a detailed, expository work especially in the realms of sputnik reviewing, but you don't do that here.