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clercqie
Contributing Reviewer
November 13th 2011


6515 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

If you pay my ticket, I'd like to come along :p

Tyrael
November 13th 2011


20971 Comments


Maybe if I was rich ^^

DaveyBoy
Staff Reviewer
November 13th 2011


20858 Comments


Solid review Thomas. As a few others stated, there are a few long sentences there, but I get the feeling that's your writing style. I wouldn't call it informal, but I practically can see you sitting down next to me telling me about the album. That can be a positive too... Just keep working on those sentences, I guess. You definitely continue to improve though, so well done.

Tyrael
November 13th 2011


20971 Comments


Thanks Davey, I wanted to try out a more personal approach with this one, but it didn't work out all that well I think :]

DaveyBoy
Staff Reviewer
November 13th 2011


20858 Comments


Nah, it's fine... & sort of works as a compromise, as it doesn't come off too personal.

Tyrael
November 13th 2011


20971 Comments


Gee, thanks a lot ^^. You should definitely give this a listen, I think you'd enjoy it

Maniac!
November 13th 2011


26257 Comments


fuckin neggers. They should have their own water fountains

Tyrael
November 13th 2011


20971 Comments


Haha thanks Brandon ;]

Xenophanes
Emeritus
November 13th 2011


10663 Comments


To compliment what others have said, your sentences do tend to meander a bit, but only in the first paragraph. The first para maybe could have been focused a bit more, if that makes any sense? I too often write way too long of sentences, because it makes me feel smart haha. My English teachers have always given me shit for it.

But yeah I really dig your style here, like Davey said, it seems as though you've hit the perfect balance between conversational and professional writing. Really like it a lot. Excellent review Thomas. So excellent, that when I get home I think I'm going to get my hands on this ; ), which means you've ultimately achieved your goal for this review!

Pos

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clercqie
Contributing Reviewer
November 13th 2011


6515 Comments

Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off

I would love to see this popping up in one of the official Year-End lists (Staff or Users).
Spread the word, gentlemen!

Tyrael
November 13th 2011


20971 Comments


Thanks Xeno, ilu ^^

Xenophanes
Emeritus
November 13th 2011


10663 Comments


No problemn baby ; )

Irving
Staff Reviewer
November 14th 2011


7321 Comments


Solid review Ty my boy. Some parts were a bit too conversational for my liking, and I always disagree with placing a "recommended tracks" section in a review, but you are definitely getting better at finding your voice. Keep it up.

And for God's sake review KH before we start throwing things at you ;)

scissorlocked
November 14th 2011


3511 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

just a POS man

the others said it all

keep on reviewing!!!


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Tyrael
November 14th 2011


20971 Comments


Wait... So Irving says that this is too conversational, while Davey and Xeno say it's well balanced between professional and conversational... *confused*

Oh well thanks Irving and scissorlocked (nice rating man ^^).

pizzamachine
November 14th 2011


12572 Comments


- Last sentence in the first paragraph doesn't fit there. Put it at the start of the second paragraph.

- 'so perfect it's almost silly'

Change to: so-perfect-it's-almost-silly

- In second paragraph's last sentence, delete "even though".


All in all a good review! Sentences should be shortened, and this can be accomplished by being more succinct, and writing with bigger words.

Tyrael
November 14th 2011


20971 Comments


Fix'd, thanks Pizza, I'll continue to work on those sentences :]

Nagrarok
November 24th 2011


8316 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Goeie muziek maken ze in Belgie ;)

I really like this, been wanting to check out dEUS for some time, will have to get to In A Bar... and The Ideal Crash as well. Curious how those compare since this I'll be moving chronologically backwards.

DoubtGin
November 24th 2011


6754 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

In A Bar... and The Ideal Crash


Their best two. Get those!

Nagrarok
November 24th 2011


8316 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Their best two.


Yeah, so I've heard. Even though they're our southern neighbours dEUS is the only Belgian band I ever recall specifically hearing about.



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