Do it up
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What objectionable punctuation in the latter? It may just be my fatigue, but I don't see any unnecessary commas, and will wait to edit before I hear what may be the case here.
I don't know about you, but that latter sentence reads very abruptly and could be rephrased to be much better
for example, 'So where in this stagnant pond of screamo music does Killie lie?'
The way you have it seems very roundabout and annoying to read
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I fixed those you show me, and will run through others later when I can think. :ty:
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Album Rating: 4.0
album is great. good review, also.
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thanks, iranscam.
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Thankees for the rec, I'll definitely check these guys out when I get home tomorrow : D
I'm excited :o
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Adventure
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oh god do all of these tracks start off with 5 minute long samples?
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the samples get a bit annoying. wish i knew what they were saying. the music is great though.
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Album Rating: 3.5
people deserve to hear this
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