I'm not pos'ing because he told me not to
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Don't be a pushover
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Intro para is lame yeah but the rest of the review is demonstrably fine.
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"Track after track the band bombards the listener with a myriad of crushing drums, demonic vocals and mind-bending riffs. It feels heart-warmingly familiar, which normally could be considered an issue, but given the bumpy road preceding this record, it’s rather a refreshing feeling."
"The production, while undeniably heavy, makes the music sound somewhat samey all the way through. And there are far fewer solos. Admittedly, guitar solos weren’t always a prominent tool in Morbid Angel’s shed, but they at least made an appearance at a large portion of cuts of their albums."
That's just from the second paragraph. Demonstrably fine?
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Yeah, those are both solid pieces of writing. The second para is a well-written para.
I don't see any issue with the writing there, and if you do, you're unnecessarily nitpicky over absolutely nothing, because even if I were to edit this, those two examples would remain exactly the same.
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@Sitar: I mean if anything, if we want to talk about sloppy writing, I could go to town with edits for your last review.
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This is amusing
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Fuck off, I'm not getting paid. Why would I edit for free?
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Sure, if you know my email, paypal me $10 and I'll edit Sitar's last review.
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This wasn't a bad review, but I will admit that whole intro para was incredibly unnecessary. There is some...odd structuring but you actually do a really good talking about the content of the album so pos'd.
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Dede gets it. Review isn't a masterclass of writing but it serves its purpose fine and isn't hard to read.
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Agreed. I deserve it.
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Lol! I'm not saying the review is terrible either. It's just clearly rushed and very sloppy. Saying it's fine and dandy is lazy at best and patently untrue at worst. If you want to start whatabouting then go right ahead. It don't change a damn thing.
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I mean you aren't wrong as Unique even admitted it was hastily written, but still I do think this does a solid job actually getting into the meat and potatoes of the album, which in the end is what matters. If you don't like the review however that is understandable.
Honestly, im not even a fan of Morbid Angel haha.
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Butttt ALTARS
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of madness
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Listened to a couple tracks and man it just didn't grab me. Might have to try listening to this in full, idk.
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That album is a major grower lol it takes a lot of listens to get it
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Stay clear of this if you don't like MA
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