Mort.
10.22.15 | not the sort of metalcore i like anyway tbh
but the drums sound really weak |
Mort.
10.22.15 | yeah and they lack punch
the melodies and that are cool but tbh im the wrong person to give feedback as i dont like this style of metalcore generally |
MattTD
10.22.15 | Yeah gotta agree, the drums are weak af, can barely hear them |
torts
10.22.15 | holy generic shit |
InFlamesWeThrash666
10.22.15 | it djents tho |
Snake.
10.22.15 | shut up you're making it worse |
torts
10.22.15 | ^ |
sspedding
10.22.15 | wtf is going on with the drums |
torts
10.22.15 | um gUYS its so abrupt because of the MATHHHHHROCK INFLUENCE DUH XD |
InFlamesWeThrash666
10.22.15 | -torts |
Snake.
10.22.15 | still better than being as an ocean i suppose |
Nocturnalize
10.22.15 | A few of those transitions were a little whack but overall I thought it was good and I enjoyed it. I'm actually a little surprised well done Snide m/ |
Final Origin
10.22.15 | Liked the guitar riffs, some good ideas in there. Thought the production let the track down and didn't make it as powerful as should be. The transitions between the clean and heavy parts also need to be smoother and more natural to me. Definitely your best track I have heard though. |
Angelboros
10.22.15 | Though the drumming is pretty weaksauce and the segues are a little on the unflattering side, basically everything else about this track was salvageable, regardless of how generic it sounds; I tend to fall in the camp that thinks generic =/= terrible, akin to how something catchy =/= enjoyable. I can get behind the guitar work here, as well. |
SharkTooth
10.22.15 | "akin to how something catchy =/= enjoyable"
ironically that's the exact opposite of how Snide views music |
BeyondCosby
10.22.15 | You have some interesting ideas right now but it seems a little disjointed. Work on your transitions bring the drums up in the mix. Your song needs more punch. |
BMDrummer
10.22.15 | where do you get your art |
SharkTooth
10.22.15 | his latest one was from some guy he hired |
InFlamesWeThrash666
10.22.15 | sounds more death metal to me than metalcore tbh
how |
ConcubinaryCode
10.22.15 | I'll be honest snide it wasn't terrible like your dubstep song, but it definitely needs more. This song felt like an intro into a longer song and it just ends all of a sudden. Work on your transitions like everyone else said too. |
SharkTooth
10.22.15 | probably due to the lack of vocals but idk |
rolereprisal
10.22.15 | i beg to differ
being as an ocean > snide |
alienobserver
10.22.15 | hm. |
rolereprisal
10.22.15 | anything* > snide |
Snake.
10.22.15 | shade thrown |
SharkTooth
10.22.15 | Prob still better than King 810 |
Curse.
10.22.15 | Yeah you need a way better sounding drum program. The individual guitar parts sound good, but like people said, you need to work on your transitions and how the pieces flow into each other. This almost sounds like a teaser of 5 different songs |
InFlamesWeThrash666
10.22.15 | Yes. |
ScuroFantasma
10.23.15 | Sup snide. Cool track man, I think the guitar riffs were cool (what's your tuning? Playing a 7?) but as some have said the transitions are a little abrupt. I also think some of the track is a bit unbalanced, you have phrases with a lot of stuff going on and then a vacant piece, and then you bring it back. To me the drums were pretty good too, they'd probably benefit from being louder but I think the overall pattern fits the song. Probably my favourite track of yours so far. |
magicuba
10.23.15 | I liked it, it was not bad. |
someguest
10.23.15 | throw all those cheerios in a bowl son |
Beardog
11.02.15 | I can basically agree with everyone, it has cool ideas, production is great IMO but it just doesn't go anywhere and it just sounds like some ideas thrown together... It would work as a demo but I would work on it more before putting it on the album |
Spec
03.19.16 | |
