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Old 10-22-2012, 08:09 PM   #22
kitsch
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Slight rhymes > hard rhymes

The latter is clunky unless done expertly

Im not too proud of the poem but it was the first one that i found in my archive that rhymed, shit is from 3 - 4 years ago, but i dont think its terrible
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