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Old 01-01-2007, 07:52 PM   #17
Abandon all hope
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The concept is good and there are very good lines, but there are also very bad ones.

My favorite line: "but the phone is cordless
yet its strangling grip makes me wordless"

Strangling grip isn't too strong there.
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