Challenge 79 - Replies
 

There was a young lady named Brent
with a c[b]u[/b]nt of an enormous extent
and so deep and so wide
the acoustics inside
were so good you could hear yourself when you spent.

bring out the limericky irishmen in ye, lads.
:thumb:

the first 'and' should be 'twas. also you named the thread incorrectly. it doesnt need to contain the challenge word in it.

^n00b

Fixed because I do all the work around here.

i love you, subtle.

<3

I've got the start of my song:

What she saw aroused her groin
A ardor she felt in her loins

brent
 

there was a woman named brent
who was at once sent to kent
when she saw a man for rent
she was immediatly told to get bent
if only she knew what he meant
that stupid blond called brent

So, now that LCs are dead...Subtle would you like to play a round of blackjack?

sure y not

^--that some d[b]a[/b]mn good stuff

I hope this doesnt pis anyone off, but I posted actual lyrics in the challenge thread

[QUOTE=6945]I hope this doesnt pis anyone off, but I posted actual lyrics in the challenge thread[/QUOTE]
pffft. whatever

Posting lyrics on the lyrics forum is for fags.

faggery = in.

[url]www.stopwastingtimeandpostalyric.com[/url]

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Posting lyrics on the lyrics forum is for fags.[/QUOTE]

I thought this thread was a challenge... :confused:

U R A idiot.

:naughty:

The once was a guy called Mark
He frequently wacked off in the dark
One night he slipped on a pie
And shot cum in his eye
And now he sells his stories to Hallmark

Wow, I think you guys need to learn how a limerick is structured.

huh? whats wrong with that?

General syllable guidelines:
Line 1: 8-9
Line 2: 8-9
Line 3: 5-6
Line 4: 5-6
Line 5: 8-9

Also, there is generally a specific rhythm, but I can't be bothered to write the whole thing out.

rules were meant to be broken... except in the case of a limmerick

Teachers love dirty s[I]hi[/I]t when they are out of school. My dad is a teacher and he reads **** everyday.

there's rules for limericks?

aren't they irish?
if yes, contradiction alert.

i love you, guinness.

Guiness is good Irish shizzle, but it's no Amstel (is Amstel Irish?)

Proper limerick form:

There was a fat lady from Ryde
Whose shoelaces once came untied
She didn't dare stoop
For fear she would poop
So she cried and she cried and she cried

meh, i'm going through writers block AGAIN.
and i'm in one of my first depressed moods in centuries. usually i look at all the positives in my life... but now i've turned into a self-confessed and self-loathed emo guy.

my song will probably be quite **** because of all of the exaggerated malodramatic emotions i will plague it with, but i'll try and convey those false feelings as well as i can :D

might not finish tho

Well..................... I haven't had much luck with lyrics lately but I think maybe I have something going for this one....

When does this one end???

soon i think

we dont stand a chance against you tho... even if you are writing a quickie

oh well my emo song is done now
first challenge in a while... it feels... good, to be back in the game

thanks dopedog... *blushes*

My songs up now. It's simple but I like it... we'll just have to see how it goes down



.................................on your girlfriend (Hahahahah... that was lame)

Hm. The Rowdy Ruff Boys Jurial?

apparently the red and purple and black hair with a dark background makes them Gofik PowerPuff Girlz... or something...


it gets me in with the under-10 crowd....................


.........maybe i should stop talking

jurial = fattymattk?

[i]***sighs[/i]

noob :D

No I'm not FattyMattK.. Just plain old Jmunk.

I like your avatar Subtledagger.. Mmmmmmm Babies...




:rolleyes: Yes, I should have heeded my own advice..

[QUOTE=Subtle Dagger]jurial = fattymattk?[/QUOTE]

Are you an idiot?

:lol: :lol: :lol:

If you want to hear a song I recorded then check out this song I co-wrote with the singer in my band. (Its NOT the song in the challenge) :p

[url]www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=274107[/url]

Then follow the instructions.

That is really great. Not what I was expecting from you, but still really great. (I see a large Radiohead infulence in your writings so.)

Thanks.. We are pretty proud of it.

It's alot more mellow and melodic from our usual stuff... This is the sort of stuff myself and my singer Jak write while we are sitting around in our house with accoustic guitars. The stuff we play in our band with our drummer gets more of the scream treatment and gets quite heavy in some parts.

Our biggest influences are:
The Cure, Mars Volta, Nirvana, Fugazi, Pretty Girls Make Graves, Deftones, Sonic Youth, Tomahawk, The Dissociatives, The Locust, Glassjaw, Pixies and The Flaming Lips.
So mash all that up with some peas and potatos and thats what we sound like.