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Nightvision 10-09-2006 06:46 PM

I am indeed. And contrary to what you might read in this thread, I'm not dead.

How's it going? I remember critting your stuff, it was usually pretty enjoyable. :)

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 06:59 PM

He writes good pop-punky type of stuff, if I remember right. I like it as well. Sup Jason. God knows if you remember me, but you use to crit me back in my early days as Mitch2oo6.

You should look at my latest(hint) :rolleyes:

Eliminator 10-09-2006 07:05 PM

i haven't written a song in a long time

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 07:07 PM

This is my first in like three weeks.

Nightvision 10-09-2006 07:08 PM

Yeah, I remember you Mitch - I still read your stuff when you post - I just never seem to get round to critting anything these days. Or writing, for that matter. I think 'seconds and years' was the first piece I've posted in about three months. :-/

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 07:09 PM

Yeah, it gets a bit repetitive after a while, I know what you mean. But nevermind, sometimes real life has to take priority :p

pixiesfanyo 10-09-2006 07:38 PM

I'm just drained.

I've been tossing around this stanza

"And this is no Howl
Just a quiet whimper
To match your senile art"

for a month now.

Eliminator 10-09-2006 07:38 PM

i only bother commenting on stuff that sucks

slack 10-09-2006 08:01 PM

^first two lines are pretty good.

third one not so much.

FA 10-09-2006 08:03 PM

I donno if I should post my new piece or work on it a bit more...cuz I'm not fully satisfied...whaddya think slack?

Sloth 10-09-2006 08:03 PM

[QUOTE=pixiesfanyo;13413048]I'm just drained.

I've been tossing around this stanza

"And this is no Howl
Just a quiet whimper
To match your senile art"

for a month now.[/QUOTE]

I hate when that happens... but it also sucks when you know you have a cool idea, but whatever you put it with sucks

slack 10-09-2006 08:06 PM

lol, shutup. anything you post is like 10x better than everything else. :)

pixiesfanyo 10-09-2006 08:07 PM

Yeah, I just don't have any ideas. slack, the third line makes the whole thing make sense.

FA 10-09-2006 08:07 PM

Thanks...I may post in a few minutes; methinks I'm gonna make some minor changes..



edit: were you talkin to me or pixies?

Sloth 10-09-2006 08:09 PM

[QUOTE=False Advertising;13413243]Thanks...I may post in a few minutes; methinks I'm gonna make some minor changes..



edit: were you talkin to me or pixies?[/QUOTE]

both of you.. it doesn't matter who really...

I think you should wait FA... just for your own closer

slack 10-09-2006 08:11 PM

[QUOTE=pixiesfanyo;13413241]Yeah, I just don't have any ideas. slack, the third line makes the whole thing make sense.[/QUOTE]oh i thought it was something like 'and your art is no howl' so the third line sounded redundant

= |

edit, you

pixiesfanyo 10-09-2006 08:12 PM

no. reference to ginsberg.

slack 10-09-2006 08:14 PM

yeah yeah yeah

i never actually finished that poem, though

hmm

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 08:16 PM

[QUOTE=pixiesfanyo;13413048]I'm just drained.

I've been tossing around this stanza

"And this is no Howl
Just a quiet whimper
To match your senile art"

for a month now.[/QUOTE]

"And this is no Howl
Just a quiet whimper
Complimenting your insecurities"

"And this is no Howl
Just a quiet whimper
Exacting your tasteless self"

Do you like those two as alternatives?

slack 10-09-2006 08:17 PM

both try too hard

that song of the month thing worked ou pretty well huh

-___-

tojes?!

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 08:23 PM

But Claudio has the craziest hair ever. I like the original one, personally.

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 08:31 PM

Claudio does have the craziest hair. I love it.

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 08:34 PM

Imagine brushing it.

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 08:39 PM

I wonder if he uses a pick?

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 08:46 PM

Ask him at the next show you go to.

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 08:48 PM

:upset: I've never seen them live and they aren't coming here anytime soon either, I believe.

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 08:50 PM

OIC that is not good then :(
Ive never seen them live either though. :upset:

FA 10-09-2006 08:51 PM

oy, I posted it:

[url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?p=13413652#post13413652[/url]

:p

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 08:59 PM

I like it a lot. As I said in there, I'll critique it, but there's more good than bad to say most definitely. =)

pixiesfanyo 10-09-2006 09:04 PM

CO & CA would suck live.

Especially since their new material is so bad compared to SSTB.

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 09:07 PM

PLUS Mike and Travis left :upset:

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 09:07 PM

C&C's setlist choice and order is always really sh[i]i[/i]tty so I actually can't argue with that first point.

Plus Claudio's way too shy, he never talks.

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 09:10 PM

Yeah there needs to be some crazy stage antics, blink style.
Or maybe not Blinnk style, theyre not that crazy, but you catch my drift.

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 09:17 PM

It's rumoured that they'd get really drunk though and make sexual innuendo jokes with each other.

I'd want to see that.

TheBigMachine 10-09-2006 09:24 PM

It'd be funny but kinda ewwy to. Still, it'd be good to see...

pixiesfanyo 10-09-2006 09:30 PM

I wish mx, would comment on getting a new mod for this forum.

Storm In A Teacup 10-09-2006 09:47 PM

I agree on both points.

Nightvision 10-09-2006 10:41 PM

[QUOTE=pixiesfanyo;13414002]I wish mx, would comment on getting a new mod for this forum.[/QUOTE]

Meh, you know as well as I do what will happen - Jim will say "it doesn't really need one", then a super like Gav will offer to take care of things for a bit, and after two weeks everything's back to square one again.

Sloth 10-09-2006 11:26 PM

true

SubtleDagger 10-09-2006 11:28 PM

Jim isn't an admin anymore


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