That line doesn't really come off satanic at all, I though. Put it up, and Ill be sure to get to it, only because your a good poster on D&P :p

NEWSFLASH: I'm not dead.

'sup community thread. Discuss having three weeks off from work and how awesome it was.

You don't get paid, and money is important to be happy, so good times at writing.

*gets sad and writes a song about the rain*

[QUOTE]'sup community thread[/QUOTE]

[SIZE="7"]sinuous cum[/SIZE] according to one song

[QUOTE=Surf;13300553][SIZE="7"]sinuous cum[/SIZE] according to one song[/QUOTE]
S&L meme lolol

Ah, but I do get paid. It was paid holiday. :D

And I feel I'm missing out... linkage, good sirs?

[URL]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=493235[/URL]

I'm out. I don't really feel like getting feedback on my newest piece. I'll save feedback for a serios song.

<_<

Haha, good old Sloth. One of my favourite writers on here. :)

Hahaaaa!
Surf, love how you keep bringing that up!
Makes me laugh whenever I see you mention it.

Why thank you Nightvision.
It's good to see you again.

its the best description of semen i've ever read.
and i really like your song - do not edit that part out. nor the part about pissing on the ceiling

And you, good sir.

I wish I was still writing as well as you seem to be. I've been the antimidas recently.

well you better get on that man!
If/when you post your next piece (which should be SOON), mention it on here, just in case I don't catch it on the forum page.

Everyone should mention new pieces. :-0

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine;13299777]That line doesn't really come off satanic at all, I though. Put it up, and Ill be sure to get to it, only because your a good poster on D&P :p[/QUOTE]

Haha thanks, but ya I edited it a little last night and there is some editing still left to be done, and I am working on a new one that I'll call "My Friend In The End (The Light In The Tunnel) "

The one I am editing is called "The Great Deception" so look for a thread with either one or both of those in the title

Ok i'll mention my new 'piece'... Seriously, everyone should totally check it out. It's called 'The Nothing'. Venture inside you may find out why. God it feels like I'm still rhyming. Blegh, get it off! But seriously, DO NOT DELETE IT. It ain't a joke song, just a new method of beating the writers block. Even though I didn't really have it anyway. Check it out!

done. but i think you stopped free writing too soon. then it became a bit too post-modern-y. anyway, read the thread, rather than me posting the crit in here

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan;13302173]Everyone should mention new pieces. :-0[/QUOTE]

I have a new piece....

Will I post it?

Maybe...soon...maybe...I'm not really that happy with it for some reason...I may later tonight...we see..

I have a new piece, called Pools. Sloth and Surf have seen it, but yeah I'm still after some more opinions.

Someone come pick me up and drive me to Minneapolis on the 29th...I'd like to get to a show but I can't drive atm due to the law...and such...Anyway, you pick me up and I'll pay the 10 bucks or whatever to get into the show...it'll be a glorious time...None of my friends are free and those who are don't like the music I like or are as fond of concerts as I am..Furthermore...

Playing:

LUCERO
ROCKY VOTOLATO
WILLIAM ELLIOT WHITMORE

In closing...I will now have missed 3 shows I wanted to see this month...:( Yet I still hit the big one with seeing Dylan..wooo

Is that a real ad?

having just read 'Rapture' by Carol Ann Duffy, i demand that all who read this immediatly go out, purchase, read and worship everything she's written. Definitely my favourite poet ever.

[SIZE="1"]also i have a new piece up if anyone wants to take a look[/SIZE]

I recognise very few people in this threads last few pages :(

Unless you've all changed your names. Im suffering the worst writers block ever!!! Hence why i haven't been around. I should probably crit even though i'm not writing though, but when i sit on mx it eats up whole days. It's an addiction. Sad really,


BTW Hi all:wave:

Hello.
I am Mitch. How goes?

:wave: s'up i'm Surf. i'm not a noob, i'm a newbie. nice to meet you

Wrong, your a newb not a noob. There a difference :thumb:

Edit: lawl this is my second account, because my old one (mitch2oo6) stopped logging in all of a sudden, much to my despair. I've been here since April.

damn, newb mistake

You are a NEWBIE. That's the word that isn't despective at all and good and stuff. Anyway sup man, I hadn't seen youn in quite some time.

Posting any time soon? :)

When does one cross the line from newbie into...normal?

Time and postcount, mostly.

Hey i'm Josh, i've never posted in S & L but i've read quite a few threads and hung around for a while.

I don't doubt this may have been done before but i was thinking we could get a lyric/poetry interpretation thread going. Like someone post lyrics or a poem from an artist/poet they like, the next person analyses it as they would with a user posted lyric, pointing out uses of good imagery..what's good and bad about it..the structure, flow etc etc etc I'm thinking it may help some people with recognising good use of these techniques that they can incorporate into their own writing, kind of like a practical "putting to use" of the better songwriters thread.

Has this been done before/failed...if so what happened? If not think it could work?

It fails constantly because most users around here are not literature majors, so they don't give half a rooster about poetry or lyrics by others, others than their own, and FAST FEEDBACK OTHERWISE people get very annoyed and bump songs 10,000 times and never understand they don't get replies because they're bad at writing.

So you could try making one, but it'd fail miserably. I'd try to post in it anyway. :)

I thought that may be the case, dang. Ah well i may make one later if i can be bothered keeping it going.

I'm Matt. Hi. I've been here since March (matthew121) but had to change my account for reasons. Still newb.

/hello

You know me...I think. I've been here for a year. Welcome back, dude.

I DON'T GET CRITS BECAUSE I SUCK?!?!?! OH NO! Hah.

to what jo said.

i think that might fail when you use song lyrics; its too subjective a subject, and people can take things like that very personally. e.g. someone postssomething about oving a bands lyrics, others disagree, ensue flamefest and pointless arguements.
but if you ue poems, you would stand a better chance of objective and more meaningful posts, but i doubt you'd get much response. probably not enough people read poetry around here, and it would be kept afloat by several regular posters. but i'd post there, so it may be worth a try, i may be very wrong.

like tojes said, most posters are apathetic towards other's work, focusing mostly on their own. which is slightly annoying.
edit: i can see about six threads on the first page where i don't believe the ts has posted a crit on anyone else's work

And that's we need a local mod, because a regular mod (or a super) wouldn't understand the machanics of the forum.

:-0

Where art thou, BURT REYNOLDS!

[IMG]http://shakti.trincoll.edu/~jkinsman/booyah/images/burt.jpg[/IMG]

there he is! there he is!

A few more familar names now:)

Tojes: dunno if i'll post soon but i hope so. I've got to get my act together because i've got lyrics and music to write and a band to get together. I've been procrastinating since the last time i was here regularly.

I'll probab;y write something for a lyrical challenge soon. That always helps me think.

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]I'll probab;y write something for a lyrical challenge soon. That always helps me think.[/QUOTE]

which reminds me, should someone make a voting thread for this one?