the fallen leaves lie on his grave
it was a child taken away
his life is over, he is safe
in a timber-coffin today

pretty dark and last line sucks because of the ******* timber

door
frustration
beautiful
easy

Sorry about that, he said as we walks out the [B]door[/B]
[B]Frustration[/B] builds as his goals were thwarted once more
To finally capture the [B]beautiful[/B] bird of his deepest desire
[B]Easy[/B] he succumbs to what his nightmares had inspired

Stand
Made
Save
Gone

all you ever wanted was to stand on your own feet
but evrything i find here was made in china not the states
you feel pretty save there in your country, but in deed
your paranoia lets you even suspect your classmates

NO I DONT HATE AMERICA, even if i am from germany

smoking
remote
control
cigarettes

[QUOTE=justinhughes2]ur supposed to use "not" in the last line[/QUOTE]
I did, last line has the word [b]not[/b]hing in it.

Anyway.

Oh baby in these teenage days of smoking,
And drinking, remote controls do our thinking.
Control the world, control our life,
Cigarette cries illustrate this knife, that's in me.


Hat
Muscle
Torch
Cell

i never wear a hat on my head
you cant see a muscle because i am so fat
i sit in the dark, have nothing but a torch
and hate every cell of my body

good
will
hunts
dogs

For the Good of us all
The Humans will start
The hunts for humanity
against the dogs of war

Jump
Digest
Rule
knockout

will i [B]jump[/B] when they say?
can i [B]digest[/B] their lies?
will their numbers [B]rule[/B] me,
to [B]knockout[/B] all they despise?

Systematic
Fever
Palate
Placate

im sick of the game where i [B]jump [/B]through fire for you
i try to [B]digest[/B] the painful words that fill my heart
the [B]rule[/B] has been broken, now you stare up from the sea of blue
[B]knockout[/B] everything about you, your words will burn for eternity


the third line sucks because of rule, i couldnt think

find
never
forget
break

crap i when i replied, i didnt click refresh to see if anyone posted that that one before i did. sorry.

You'll find the time to run,
But never the time to hide,
Forget what you've read,
and break for the horizon.

Travel
Song
Soul
Napoleon

I'm back and rested from my travel
My slowly dwindling pain goes up in song
The soul of every person ever
Should be watching Napoleon battle - with teenagehood

Hark!
Alert
Mission
Raquet

Hark my darling, your cab is here,
I'll try to stay alert till you return
And we're always on a mission or another
Raquet-ball with schedules and our hearts

Card
Bright
Indulgent
Won't

Blank card so pale
But bright with possibility
To fill you with indulgent lines
That won't mean a thing to me

Gentle
Clocks
Rocking
London

Gentle how the blood rolls down your cheeks.
Clocks tick as you wince and I can see those red eyes bleed before me.
Rocking back and forth I know you are in pain. But what can I do?!
London Is calling me. I must leave you to die. Wipe those bloody tears and destroy the evidence for me; I have no time.

War
Want
Cape
Stupor

I heard you cry about the war
You never want to deal with death
Just wrap a cape around your heart
To leave God in a stupor


Incarnation
Holy
Mother
Church

upon your lovers death
a holy incarnation
so don't hold one regret
or take no hesistation

pure
time
crime
eskimo

no not eskimo maybe

home

so pure is my love,
it withstands the tests of time,
what I have done here I can't say is a crime,
now the fatal eskimos will shine,

group
stoop
mope
dope

this is a really good songwriting exersize, shiiiit. now im going to rush home from school every day to see the new posts

[QUOTE=metaliq]I'm ****** cold, you ******* whore
So ****, make this **** hard or ill ****
Your ***** so **** fast bitch
**** *** lips **** ho *** bitch

Digital
Alive
Demand
O'matic[/QUOTE]

oh my god dude, that was great

[QUOTE=JMDavis07]so pure is my love,
it withstands the tests of time,
what I have done here I can't say is a crime,
now the fatal eskimos will shine,

group
stoop
mope
dope[/QUOTE]
I am in a group
Sitting on a stoop
I'm not going to mope
because we all have dope.

\m/

emo
fag
hardcore
homo

I'll find you kids of emo
You know are all a fag
You are seriously hardcore though
...HOMO

Headed down the river edge
Opium on my mind
My mother said this is where she'd be
On the warm September nights

Shine
Mantle
Forever
Shambles

So the earth's core will shine,
As the mantle burns away,
Last's forever or until the test of time,
Shambles broken into the fray.

And that's a ****ing copyright mother****ers.

Quote
Satan
Messiah
Jimmy

damn, noone wants to do this thing anymore?

someone needs to make a new one. lol

Quote
Satan
Messiah
Jimmy

A quote slipped through her lips,
as Satan clasped her by the wrists,
whispering in her ears, "the messiah",
Jimmy's eyes rained until dry.

f[COLOR="White"]u[/COLOR]ck the word jimmy you c[COLOR="White"]u[/COLOR]nt..:P

you
may
post
replies

This might be the day where you and i finally play
or it may just be the opposite of my dreams
where you'd be tied to a post and i hear your screams
but you'll get no replies, even though i try, to set you free

Guilt
Marker
Case
Closed

So my guilt was shown,
Through a railway marker,
The case was dropped,
And so my story closes.

Sorry that sucks so much.

In
The
Evil
Tenderizer

In the fray of it all i can only see
the apple of my eye, amongst an infinity
Of evil shrouds that cloud our views
So rub this tenderizer upon you and become numb

Ramble
Forest
Nights
Hold

robin hood was rambling
with his buddies through the forest
at nights they partied, drank much beer
and planed their next hold-up

that one's really bad :)

go
home
or
die

As I go through space,
Looking for a place I may call home.
As or say what?
That we may die in poopness. < and that's exactly what this one is

fragile
clouds
gunshot
stanza

your brain must be so damn fragile
the clouds go by your still senile
a gunshot from the tv, it is bonanza
now you wake up at the end of the stanza

halo
popular
sugar
dog

with this halo, save me
from popular tyranny
I know i'm no sugar tree
or some dog comforts thee

Summer
Apple
Dictionary
Lake

last summer you and me
Were sitting by the apple tree
with only a dictionary in between
with a flash we were in the lake

date
late
tomarrow
come

On this date i really never saw it coming
Or how late you would answer with replies
Will i wait for tomorrow to hear, "i love you"?
Come Sunday, will you leave me with sunken eyes?

Frost
Bark
Step
Inside

Frost covers the land
It is destroying the Bark
Step inside this wholesum realm
Inside you shall find divine power

Slave
Frankton
Santana
Gnomes

I am a slave, but not for long, oh you will see.
I'm gonna leave Frankton, and run away to my baby
To Santana, where she is and waits for me
Craving gnomes out of stone until, until I come home

Shambles
Train
Lovers
Waters

This thread has fallen into shambles
Like a trainwreck on display
Songs of lovers and hatred
Run like water, once again today

killer
filler
thriller
Credit

[QUOTE=Littlejohn]This thread has fallen into shambles
Like a trainwreck on display
Songs of lovers and hatred
Run like water, once again today

killer
filler
thriller
Credit[/QUOTE]

The killer slipped slow behind the pillar,
With silence as his filler running out
And killed the miller in this psycho thriller
Cut to credits, this drama is all played out.

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