lol

Anyway, this week has been a very, very sh¡tty week, so my writing should be awesome.

If I wanted a syntax lesson from Burt I'd think of a joke to place at the end of this sentance.

You're so witty and dreamy.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]If I wanted a syntax lesson from Burt I'd think of a joke to place at the end of this sentance.[/QUOTE]
*sentence

*fentence

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]*sentence[/QUOTE]

I'm gonna say:

"Hey, you corrected the joke he was trying to display."

and you're gonna say:

"Duh, I know, I was just being a smart-a[size="2"]s[/size]s."

then I'm gonna say:


"Whatevs."

Uh huh, a joke, sure

riiiiiiiiight

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine]Big Burt makes APS feel insignificant.

APS: come back, we need someone who gives out solid crit's again. Like slack and yourself, and Tojes. But Jason seems to have buggered off.[/QUOTE]

Nope, I'm still here. I'm just busy with work throughout the summer. Never underestimate the ability of sunshine to turn otherwise normal people into dribbling idiots.

With the added affect of alcohol it's worse. :p
Yeah, no worries though. If you get a minute...my latest. TMATW: Transformation. :)

And I'll remember to crit the next thing you put up.

Anyone ever get the feeling that they just wrote a lovely piece and that they, themselves, are very proud of it, but more than likely won't post it here because it won't make sense and it will sound lame to everyone else?

[QUOTE=False Advertising]Anyone ever get the feeling that they just wrote a lovely piece and that they, themselves, are very proud of it, but more than likely won't post it here because it won't make sense and it will sound lame to everyone else?[/QUOTE]

Yea, I just did, actually...

I sat down and forced myself to write last night, please remind me never to do it again...it's scary!

Then again, I did actually get something right at the end of the session. After two hours of sitting and writing a load of absolutely rubbish, inspiration finally hit. It looks like it'll be a bit of an epic, so I won't post it at the moment, I'll let it run some of it's course first.

Bit different to what I usually write, little bit quirky.

Hope you're all well, good to hear that you haven't dissapeared of the face of the earth Jason. FA, try us...

Timmy

My last song just came out of my heart, and I was a pretty desperate man while it was being written, so good times.

I'm starting to go to the gym today, I hope. :cool:

Although buff songwriters don't exist, really.

<_<

I actually got told to stop exercising so much...I'm nearly dangerously underweight, though I don't really look it; I don't think so anyway.

I reckon I live a healthy lifestyle, balanced diet, no fast food, plenty of exercise, but apparently I've really got to put some weight on. Cutting down on exercise has been really wierd! I'm only doing about 12-15 hours a week rather than my usual 20 or so!

Exercise rules :p

Timmy

Yeah, I know.

It might as well kill me because I haven't moved in months.

:-|

haha!! I couldn't just sit around doing nothing...doesn't appeal to me in the way it seems to do to so many!

Timmy

[QUOTE=False Advertising]Anyone ever get the feeling that they just wrote a lovely piece and that they, themselves, are very proud of it, but more than likely won't post it here because it ... would sound lame to everyone else?[/QUOTE]All of the time.

Only at the moment I'm too busy sponging off my heros to do anything remotely creative.

Sentence has two e's? Ooo.

Before Burt says it: 3 e's*

Asterix goes at the front :p

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine]Asterix goes at the front :p[/QUOTE]

*Asterisk. Silly Aussies. :p

Heh, lol @ me for spell asterisk like the french cartoon character Asterix.

[QUOTE=TheBigMachine]Asterix goes at the front :p[/QUOTE]
[IMG]http://www.asterix.co.nz/asterix_box2.jpg[/IMG]

Yeah I see what you did there.

Asterix is awesome...I've still got loads of the comic books. I never understood half of the jokes and playing on words when I was younger...I was a bit dumb back then.

Timmy

I saw one of the old Asterix cartoons a few months ago - I was sick as a dog that day with tonsilitis and remember sitting there watching it thinking 'I haven't seen this for years'.

Isn't it funny how stuff tends to come round a few times if you see it for the first time in ages?

Uh, I'm rambling. Stupid flu.

Especially at the internets, Jason.

haha.

Anyways...M. Ward is god....

I have every single Asterix comic that I know of, and most of the game books. W00t!!

Yeah so... Widerstehen Sie is very full of wrath huh?

Uh, who?

Hey...not sure if this is the right place. But I'm looking for someone to collaborate on some lyrics with. I've written pretty much everything in basic form, and I really like the idea of the lyrics, but I need someone to help me express the idea better.

The lyrics are about the 7 deadly sings, each verse is about the different sins...and it's also in a bluesy format..I'll give you one verse and the rest follow the pattern.

[QUOTE]
I know that it's a sin,
to feel such greed within,
But seeing you walk away,
I cannot help but feel,
that nobody else deserves to even look at you,
You belong only to me,
Your heart will stop only for me,
And so if they don't let me in,
for commiting one deadly sin,
then I guess we'll both be swimming down the lake of fire[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]Yeah so... Widerstehen Sie is very full of wrath huh?[/QUOTE]I guess.

Just so everyone knows, S&L was better back in the day. Nobody knows when that was exactly, but man was it rockin'.

:rolleyes:

It's occured to me that the average number of crit's has gone down...Meaning, that people are posting songs with out critting enough..

best crit ever:

[QUOTE= some thread]You need to work on the lyrics, other than that good job[/QUOTE]

maybe its a good thing some people aren't critting

That is so good.
Maybe Timmy needs to finnish his crit guide...
Maybe people need to stop flaming each other when they get bad crits, and then stop retalliating when they get flamed(yes Im guilty of that, unfortunatley...the second bit I mean...)

But yeah. Methinks Im gonna throw up part four of my epic, and Im still working on part three.

Maybe Timmy needs to start crit'ing more himself :P

A friend and I have just started up a new forum for our school, due to being joint creator I'm also a Moderator. This means that I spend every minute I'm online on the forum. It's doing ridiculously well considering it's only been online three days, we already have over 600 posts.

But yeah, I should hopefully get around here a bit more now that all the creation is done, and once the initial increase in members slackens a little I shouldn't need to spend so long on there...that's the problem with having only three Mods on there!!!!


I'll go crit something now.

Timmy

Widerstehen Twatface is on a roll :rolls eyes:

Seems like a real nice guy :sarcasm:


Edited my new piece...take a look if you get the chance. Surf, I'm heading to yours now.

Timmy

i'll have a look at your revised one; i've got all evening, so i should be able to find something

I've just finished your crit...really enjoyed it :)

Thanks a lot!

Timmy

thanks man. i'll probably be revising it tomorrow, so thanks for the comments.

Widerstehen is starting to push it, but i find the people who leave a two or three word crit more annoying; at least Widerstehen does say the occasional releveant thing. i'd like to see him post something though (i.e. lyrics)

also, to anyone, What's up with the Lyrical challenges? i tried working out the scores (subtledagger won), but it seems to have been dead for the last few days..........

Waiting on Subtle to put a new word up, I think.