i think not! i reread it and liked it even more then the first time!

i'm suffocating, though my airway is free
trying to breathe while nothing chokes me
and this metaphoric obstacle, its way to hard to see
when im cringing in a corner of my dark, distraught mind, all your hatred rhymes

word
counts
are
overrated

your violent words are something new
so dont let up, im counting on you
and this honesty you are, it lets me see
just how overrated it is, to be me

peace
bliss
lucid
this

I live a life in peace
Of ignorant bliss
I'm tired of lucid news
Tired of this ****

See
Bright
Light
Ahead

falling through the empty
see the light at the end of the tunnel
so bright it burns my eyes
just ab eternity ahead


broken
twitching
toilet
blood

I've felt about as broken
And constricted to twitching
As a goldfish facing their toilet doom
At least my blood will be washed clean


Wow, that was weird, haha anyways...

Answer
Destiny
Truth
Conspiracy

answer with your false intricasies
with our destruction and destiny near an end
and while we sip novicaine the truth and not contend
to continue sublime conspiracy

sleeping
at
the
slaughter house

you can't hurt me when i'm sleeping
at that point my eyes are closed
i can't see the devastation
like a calf at the slaughter house


veteran
tornado
chaser
growth

I am a veteran of this pain
That was caused when the tornado threw me here
You are the chaser of my old life
But too many years in the dark has stunted my growth

wealth
king
roam
stranded

oh your such a blimp of wealth and resourses
king of candyland lane
roaming gold streets on race horses
stranded in depression and pain

clear
one
bleed
forever

Clear your eyes
Up to one sky
And bleed them away
Where forever you stay

bellwether
ignor
assume
ergo

the bellwether led you astray
telling you to ignore this fray
to assume that everyone is wrong
ergo, we all drop the bombs

mediocre
subsequentially
engulfing
inclination

this existance is so mediocre
subsequently death ensues
and as it takes pleasure engulfing the hollow
i'm still inclined to think of you

cheating
again
never
rmind

Cheating your life away, you fall from your feet
You've searched for years, and found your defeat
Never wish for something unknown
Mind to these words or die all alone

Too
Late
For
This

never too many lives wasted
kind of late to make amends
clouds of death for the hell of it
this torture to your people ever ends

cliche
temptation
collaborate
inane <--------(don't mix this up with insane)

Why always one cliche after another
Why always gripped with absent temptation?
Our ways of life will never collaborate
We're wasting away with inane validation

wait
discomfort
scull
random

we wait for everything to decay
our discomfort rises like the tide
hold the scull through the sea dismay
a random thought to find our own mind

absinthe
obscurity
rage
red

as though inebriated by absinthe
i search for an obscurity in my soul
and wading through the rage i find
red. red. red. gold. last symbol of hope in my mind

insane
in
the
brain

You want to see me free the insanity inside of me?
We all know its true, the things you love, you do, in you
The lost all want to play if they have a price to pay
Whatever, **** 'em all, no brain, you stall, you fall

they
travel
in
herds

its the 'how' in 'why im they'
and why i travel blindly, week after day
its the 'how' in 'why im they'
and why 'they' hunt the herd from which i stray

seraph
licentiousness
vicinal
cherub

You dare defy the saraphim
Your licentiousness reveals your soul
Stay away from the vicinal grounds of Heaven
for now the cherubim is in control

feeling
religious
are
we

i cant help feeling myself
oh such a religious experience
this is what real humans are
and who are we to judge

estrogen
siamese/siam...and dirivation
cataract
blow

Extra estrogen for
my siamese sex goddess
Apple or cataract of my eye
either way...blow me baby!

that
was
tasteless
sorry

That which consumes me
Was all that entombed me
Tasteless desires of insidious pleasures
Sorry if these were not your long awaited treasures

Once
Again
I'm
Horrible

I once wrote some good 4 line verse in this game
but again, I throw down something seriously lame
I'm sorry that I can't be more creative like you
I write another horrible game post like I usually do

I
smell
cherries
tasty

I don't know what to feel,
the smell, the sound... so surreal.
Is it a cherry or is it gone?
Was tasty at one point, now undone.

I
feel
chicken
tonight

^^^ I like.


Sitting on the lawn tonight, I watch the moon rise
I see the light diminish, I feel the change of tides
An undercooked chicken, raw to the world
Escaping myself tonight, let my dreams unfurl

That
was
total
bullsh[COLOR=LemonChiffon]i[/COLOR]t

My six stringed savior is all that I need
I was dying slowly, no use for my greed
Playing those strings, brings me total revival
I have to write bull**** like this for lyrical survival

I
ate
a
baby

I once had a lollipop that was flavored cherry
I ate it quick, I ate it fast, or my name isn't cheri
Toddcotham has rubbed off on me and changed me quite a lot
I am writing like a baby, high on a bowl of pot

Rediculous
Yet
Utterly
Satisfying

I've battled with this ridiculous dismay
But the last of my dignity has yet to decay
I'm utterly spoken my senses are dying
Still I find all this prudence remotely satisfying

Defiance
tool
engaging
continue

The defiance of men to become involved
Because they are afraid of becoming the government's tools
Yet by engaging in this act of arrogant folly
They continue to please the monarch fools

Politics
aren't
my
forte