[QUOTE=slackjaw]I thought that was what the In-Depth thread was for. :([/QUOTE]

Hmm, yea it's both lyrics and poetry. My idea has been flushed. I wish more people were active in the In-Depth thread though. My piece has been sitting there for ages.

I'd comment, but it'd be mostly babble. :)

Socrates is back. Put the Jesus down.

[QUOTE=xKONRADx]Socrates is back. Put the Jesus down.[/QUOTE]

I remember you.

i wish i could rock a pink sweater like kanye.
i'd just look like some dipshi[FONT="Verdana"]t[/FONT] whiteguy.

Yeah pink doesn't suit the average white guy.

It's been adopted by chavs etc over here in the UK. It's quite amusing watching a skinhead with an IQ of approximately 6 wandering round threatening smaller people in a pink polo shirt.

[QUOTE=Jason101]It's been adopted by chavs etc over here in the UK. It's quite amusing watching a skinhead with an IQ of approximately 6 wandering round threatening smaller people in a pink polo shirt.[/QUOTE]
I have a pink polo Aeropostale shirt.

Just thought that fact would come in handy.

Pink's the new craze with the guys that wear [I]Hollister [/I]clothing.

I used to have a pink t-shirt (as in proper pink, bright and lurid) but I grew out of it :( Then pink came into fashiopn with all the chavs and I decided I wouldn't bother replacing it.

I do have several bright pink hair bands and stuff though. Always looks good in science lessons!!

Being ill really does suck. I haven't been able to come on here in about 3 days because I've been in bed. Though it does feel quite good when you get about 10 people phoning up because I hadn't been online!!

Timmy P

[QUOTE=Jason101]It's been adopted by chavs etc over here in the UK. It's quite amusing watching a skinhead with an IQ of approximately 6 wandering round threatening smaller people in a pink polo shirt.[/QUOTE]

There was a big fight last night between the larger louts and the chav gangs in the town centre alst night and I swear the whole high street had just turned pink. There was not a single one of them without some sort of pink polo shirt or knitwear or something.

Is everyone here from the UK? Or is chav an american thing I'm not aware of?

Chav is slang for chafe.

The chavs usually have itchy inner thighs.

Yo.

Just because I'm dismal and bored, I'll suggest a listen.

[url]http://www.myspace.com/runehome[/url]

My band. I do bass and voice. I just put up a new song, with lyrics that I posted on here. "Eviscerate."

[QUOTE=Sade]Yo.

Just because I'm dismal and bored, I'll suggest a listen.

[url]http://www.myspace.com/runehome[/url]

My band. I do bass and voice. I just put up a new song, with lyrics that I posted on here. "Eviscerate."[/QUOTE]

Not really my kinda music, so it's hard to comment on it.

[QUOTE=justinhughes2]Not really my kinda music, so it's hard to comment on it.[/QUOTE]

I can believe that.

Hey, new member here. Am I in the right place or am I about to get flamed?

Just wanted to 'Hello' to everyone. Hello.

You're in the right place. Good start.

You'd have only got flamed if you'd have made a thread about it. Also, just as a suggestion, have a look round the rules thread and read a few songs/critiques by the guys in this thread just so you can get an idea of what the place is all about - we're all pretty laid back if everyone stays sensible. Sadly, that doesn't always happen. :-\

haha, rarely does it happen. Like jason said, read the rules, be considerate...etc.

Welcome to the S7L Forums.

S7L forums!!!

Yeah. Welcome. Critique well and we will love you.

Haha, indeed!!

Welcome to the forums! Hope to see some of your writing up on the board and a few crits from you as well.

Timmy P

Thank you all.

I have read all the rules and looked over a few posts. I'm trying to be extra careful after that albino-midget-porn-posting-in-a-Harry-Potter-community-thread incident.

I'm an awesome critic. My mom tells me that all the time.

My "****" is deeply influenced by Aria Giovanni and Briana Banks getting it on.

I'll post something right now and I hope you guys have the patience to go through it.

Good to be here.

And please, no nude pics of yourself in my PM.

Hey, the censor actually made it better. Lets throw a little bestiality in there.

The "****" didn't come out right.

I'll stop now and post something.

Watch out for me though, I'm angry and probably senile.

Amanda Woodward rules. Discuss.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]Watch out for me though, I'm angry and probably senile.

Amanda Woodward rules. Discuss.[/QUOTE]

It's teen angst, isn't it?

Go on, admit it.

Haha!!!

Justin; two can play that game... [url]http://timmyjp.deviantart.com[/url]


I have a question for you all...I want to show my mum the poem I wrote about my dad after he killed himself. Thing is I don't know how to do it, I can't exactly walk upto her and thrust it in her face and say read this like I do with most of my work can I?

Last time I showed her something I wrote about my dad (a piece of prose) she cried, I know she'll cry when she reads this piece. I don't really want to upset her all over again. Should I just keep it for a later date?


On a slightly happier note I'm moving house soon, back to a rather larger citadel :D I've been thinking about my bedroom, I don't really want all my posters on the walls again, they're all getting a bit old and tatty now. I've decided on doing some cool black and white photos and a couple of coulered as well.

I also want to incorporate some of my poetry into the room, preferably something that isn't permanent so no writing on the walls!! Any ideas?


Timmy P

[QUOTE=drumass04]Haha!!!

Justin; two can play that game... [url]http://timmyjp.deviantart.com[/url]


I have a question for you all...I want to show my mum the poem I wrote about my dad after he killed himself. Thing is I don't know how to do it, I can't exactly walk upto her and thrust it in her face and say read this like I do with most of my work can I?

Last time I showed her something I wrote about my dad (a piece of prose) she cried, I know she'll cry when she reads this piece. I don't really want to upset her all over again. Should I just keep it for a later date?


On a slightly happier note I'm moving house soon, back to a rather larger citadel :D I've been thinking about my bedroom, I don't really want all my posters on the walls again, they're all getting a bit old and tatty now. I've decided on doing some cool black and white photos and a couple of coulered as well.

I also want to incorporate some of my poetry into the room, preferably something that isn't permanent so no writing on the walls!! Any ideas?


Timmy P[/QUOTE]

Perhaps get a photo-frame sized piece of glass, and etch the words onto the back of it? (Just remember to write backwards!)

That would look awesome, I could get some clear acrylic through school, and then use the laser cutter or router to engrave it. Would look kinda cool :)

Thanks!!

Timmy P

Haha, I've done my good deed for the day. :p

*flies off into sunset*

Haha :p

I've still got mine to come...Does helping disabled people count?

*enters silly ramble for the sake of it*
I'm out tonight helping at D of E (Duke of Edinburgh Award Scheme for those who don't know about it, visit [url]www.theaward.org[/url] ) They run a Mixed Abilities course for mentally and physically disabled teenagers and young adults. It's not only a great experience for them but also a great experience for the leaders involved in helping them through it.

It can often be quite challenging, persuading someone with the mental capabilities of a 6 year old, and the physical capablities of a 3 year old, to light a camp stove and cook over flames can often be fairly daunting!! As I said I help at the centre with the MAs at Bronze and Silver level.

Very interesting experiences to be had!! Great fun though, and gives you a great feeling of satisfaction at the end as well!! (I'm only a leader because of my skills in the outdoors - an Ex-mountain rescue leader I used to walk with gave up trying to teach me the necessary skills because I knew everything he could throw at me. I could also keep up with him on a week long expedition :D)

Right I'm going now, before I totally lose the plot.

Talk later!!

Timmy P