Inserting my input on the situation
Can't think of anything different
Can't recall any better words
Still not remembering what I really want

balloon
field
flag
boards

you carry a red balloon like a gun
you cross a field like its a battlefield
even when i carry a white flag
all you seem to want to do is nail me to some boards

crumbling
ectstasy
startled
hazy

the memories i had of you were crumbling in my head
you were my ecstacy and i was your Ambien
it startled me how much you holding me resembled resting in a coffin
my thoughts are hazy but i swear you wear satin a lot more lately

( i cant write to these words lately)

someday
you
will
understand

Someday we will all look back on this and laugh.
You and I as one, together
And I will hold you in a warm embrace,
And we will understand each other.

Few
Memories
compassion
back

a few empty bottles later
and we'll talk about our memories
kiss me with all the compassion you can
and then we'll talk about going back

we'll
be
missed
here

We'll gather in circles to destroy our fears
Defeat all the powers that be.
Know this, my love, you'll always be missed
I hold your picture right here.

belligerent
knack
destructive
drugs

belligerent losers
always have a
knock for being
destructive and after the world is nothing
they will do drugs

um he didnt post words, and i think its time people stop posting retarded sets, at least pick 4 words that you can make sense out of in 4 lines

ok, here are four words

black
hearts
now
reign

that good?

the night was black when you said goodbye
our hearts once connected were half neatly torn apart
now my heart is impared and shards of it are stuck to yours
letting you reign over me with your frowns and disappointed looks
now im under your thumb

Please
Forgive
Me
Trying

We should spice this thread upi because it is getting pretty repetative. we should start judging them by every ten and saying who has the best one out of the ten. Any thoughts?

Pleased hearts bleed, blood you can't see
Crimes not forgiven on the crusts of the universe
If they won't relent, they'll end up like me
Trying to make peace with the holy few of us.

Meaningless
Rhymes
Are
Easier

I'm all for making this more intesting. Bout time someone added a new element to liven up everyone. How about 2 words given for each line...? or something

these times are meaningless
these rhymes are rhythmless
are you awake, can you feel me
would it be eiser if i died

Blunt
flash
freak
scream

BMM, ive been thinking on that... we could set a theme and the next ten entries have to be about that theme, then we judge it, and the winner sets the next theme.... how does that idea sound?

blunt my mind with hazy shades
and flash dark lights in this pale light
you always seem to freak me
in this darkness where i scream

oh so bad... that was terrible, but it's all i got, lol

ridge
tradition
dolls
melt

Up so high on this ridge
Like a twisted tradition
watching little dolls in the inferno
slowly melt

Condescending
Attitude
Wisdom
Anger

[QUOTE=silverabsolution]BMM, ive been thinking on that... we could set a theme and the next ten entries have to be about that theme, then we judge it, and the winner sets the next theme.... how does that idea sound?[/quote]

oh you mean the lyrical challenges thread? go there... :rolleyes:

your so condescending
"its not welcome, its attitude"
but i love your wisdom
"its not anger, its ignorance"

not
very
good
really

im so not, what youre looking for
you dont like simple stuff, you like to explore
it would be so good, to be with you
i really wish my dreams would come true

sitting
book
pencil
nothing

It's writer's block without the pencil,
simply nothing coming out.
My book is blank, void of idea
sitting in this shadowed doubt.

spider
man
green
goblin

dont use stupid words

lol way to go not using any of the previous words in order :thumb:

[QUOTE=pskov]spider
man
green
goblin[/QUOTE]

from rituals of feeding spiders
the eyes of man typically take fright.
yet behind her devouring of green-eyed prey,
i derive a goblin's sadistic delight.

choice
tangle
vein
pure

It was hard but a choice is not a simple task
As my fingers play, I tangle with the options
Blood pumping faster through my vein
It's pure, it's true but it's not for you

Vessels
Porcelain
Beautiful
Nothing

from the disconnected vessels, my blood drains out,
but im too focused on the porcelain skies to even notice,
such a beautiful existance, a beautiful night,
nothing can take my attention from this, no, not even death.

registration
slumber
built
congratulations

The registration draws a closer line,
As the slumber stirs from the sleep that binds.
And as the built memoirs die, of past relations,
I offer my congratulations.

Slow
Burnt
Placid
Scar

I advanced, keeping my movements slow
My heart burnt by what had gone before
My placid nature disturbed again
A scar in place of what once was gore

Evangelist
Masturbation
Simulation
Mandela

you yell evamgelist
you say masterbation isint a team sport
is this life a simulation
what is a mandela


crap
nice
agree
savoir

Nelson Mandela? Uh duh!

ok, im dumb

Thats okay, I just like pointing out other people's flaws; makes me feel like a big man.

I wade through this thick crap.
Nicety is out of the picture.
I can't agree to salvation.
With a Hipocrite as my savior

Collapse
Allowed (or Aloud)
Self
Belief