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TojesDolan 12-13-2007 03:24 PM

meh people

Monticello 12-13-2007 03:33 PM

[QUOTE=Ghoul Hunter;15679801][url]http://youtube.com/watch?v=D3K-mrlYG7Y[/url]

Watch this and laugh until you die.[/QUOTE]

He can't be serious? :confused:

TojesDolan 12-13-2007 03:33 PM

Apparently he is!

Kill Everything V2 12-13-2007 03:42 PM

[QUOTE=Deth;15679821][url]http://youtube.com/watch?v=x8YzeJhOmq0[/url]

Always good for a quick laugh.[/QUOTE]
Thats hilarious

Josh's yardtard is just ****ign stupid

Monticello 12-13-2007 03:44 PM

[QUOTE=TojesDolan;15679913]Apparently he is![/QUOTE]

guy should be detained.

TojesDolan 12-13-2007 03:45 PM

Meh laws.

Monticello 12-13-2007 03:47 PM

Meh fatal/sterilising injuries

gmoneyguy 12-13-2007 03:47 PM

meh living

TojesDolan 12-13-2007 03:48 PM

meh meh

gmoneyguy 12-13-2007 03:49 PM

meh Mexico

Monticello 12-13-2007 03:49 PM

meh you

TojesDolan 12-13-2007 03:50 PM

meh brians

Riva 12-13-2007 03:51 PM

mehmo

I've just finished watching all of the Monty Python's Flying Circus episodes at least twice. :p

[I]Salad Days[/I] and [I]The Spanish Inquistion[/I] are probably my two favourite episodes.

gmoneyguy 12-13-2007 03:53 PM

[QUOTE=TojesDolan;15680028]meh brians[/QUOTE]

meh brains


Just and hour left of work. :)

How are you Jason?

i am the robots 12-13-2007 03:53 PM

meh to brains? some zombie you are >:(

TojesDolan 12-13-2007 03:54 PM

Wow Jason you mus be really proud of yourself. Celebrate by analyzing an australian stalagmite.

Riva 12-13-2007 03:54 PM

I am good. Just enjoying my holidays and desperately wanting more hours at work. :(

gmoneyguy 12-13-2007 03:57 PM

[QUOTE=Riva;15680048]I am good. Just enjoying my holidays and desperately wanting more hours at work. :([/QUOTE]

I can give you some of mine. Are you still working in a grocery store?

Riva 12-13-2007 03:58 PM

Sure am!

I need food money for Europe. :(

ATM 12-13-2007 04:02 PM

Can I just say that Bewitched by Candlemass is the greatest video ever?

FatalEnergy 12-13-2007 04:38 PM

Dead's in it, so it couldn't be bad.

TojesDolan 12-13-2007 04:41 PM

[QUOTE=Riva;15680073]Sure am!

I need food money for Europe. :([/QUOTE]
meh I think I'll ask for the german scholarship where I get 400 euros a month for staying a semester in europe

I'll cross my fingers

Riva 12-13-2007 05:01 PM

That's still not that much though. I'd earn A$300 a week normally, and living expenses eat up a lot of that.

ATM 12-13-2007 05:24 PM

[QUOTE=FatalEnergy;15680285]Dead's in it, so it couldn't be bad.[/QUOTE]

Is he one of the "zombies"?

Nostalgia 12-13-2007 05:31 PM

He's DEADWALKING. Messiah bumps into him when they start doing it, but I can't remember at what time exactly.

ATM 12-13-2007 05:32 PM

The video is so awesome, I need hair like Messiah.

Permanent Solution 12-13-2007 05:36 PM

[QUOTE=Riva;15680048]I am good. Just enjoying my holidays and desperately wanting more hours at work. :([/QUOTE]

This makes me feel sort of bad for leaving work after only 8.5 hours today and only 7 yesterday.

AA-12 12-13-2007 05:38 PM

[QUOTE=Monticello;15679988]guy should be detained.[/QUOTE]

lol He's just an awesome and hilarious MMA guy. I really want the full dvd of that self defense video.

i am the robots 12-13-2007 05:58 PM

[QUOTE=FatalEnergy;15680285]Dead's in it, so it couldn't be bad.[/QUOTE]

Newsflash: Dead sucked, horribly.

AA-12 12-13-2007 06:03 PM

Mrh?

NemesisDivina 12-13-2007 06:04 PM

Dead is the one that gets pushed around 5:04... I think.

Permanent Solution 12-13-2007 06:15 PM

[I]When I opened the bottle and began pouring the poison in my veins
I didn't imagine I'd end up with the bottle lying broken on the floor
With confessions floating in the air about how I'm so insane

Those honest eyes disarmed my lies when they walked through the door
Stimulating a subverted desire to rant about chemicals in my brain
But once it started there was no end, you always wanted more

That’s why tonight I’m thinking of dying
Sometimes the truth is worse than just lying
Death is my constant mental companion
But to be honest I’m not actually thinking of trying
[/I]


Too cliche? Worth completing?

NemesisDivina 12-13-2007 06:19 PM

It's worth re-working. Some of the lines sound sorta awkward and don't flow with the rest of the poem, first verse especially.

AA-12 12-13-2007 06:19 PM

[QUOTE=NemesisDivina;15680754]It's worth re-working. Some of the lines sound sorta awkward and don't flow with the rest of the poem, first verse especially.[/QUOTE]

This was what I was going to say.

It's definitely worth keeping though.

Permanent Solution 12-13-2007 06:23 PM

[QUOTE=NemesisDivina;15680754]It's worth re-working. Some of the lines sound sorta awkward and don't flow with the rest of the poem, first verse especially.[/QUOTE]

Yeah I edit at the end. Hmm, I suppose 2 positive reviews means I'll at least finish it. Thanks guys.

Liberi Fatali 12-13-2007 06:37 PM

Scrap it I say, and come elope with me!

>_>

Permanent Solution 12-13-2007 06:39 PM

you would say that.


ps sup dan?

i am the robots 12-13-2007 06:40 PM

[QUOTE=Permanent Solution;15680788]Yeah I edit at the end. Hmm, I suppose 2 positive reviews means I'll at least finish it. Thanks guys.[/QUOTE]

I'm in the same boat as the others bb.

And since S&L won't help at all, could you guys critique for me as well!

[I]He slept through a madness of countless years.
He dreamt of towers and auburn skies.
Of raindrop opals and her coral bows.
His self-denial brought things so damn close,
To the resurrection, of all those simple things;
The rainless mornings and the restful sleep,
Nurtured faithfully in her pristine ways.
The foolish coward, yeah, he bit his tongue,
His realization; it's thrown away,
And through his fingers, he'll gaze in time,
To the dancing, of his swan,
Wrapped in plastic, and dressed in want.
It feels rewarding to know in days,
He'll wake up breathless inside a grave.[/I]

NemesisDivina 12-13-2007 06:48 PM

Cool poem, Mappy. (or are those lyrics?)

I think you could omit 'yeah' from the line [I]The foolish coward, yeah, he bit his tongue[/I] it disrupts the flow and doesn't really add anything.

Glitterati 12-13-2007 07:30 PM

I'd say replace the first few lines with "skeet skeet mother****er"


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