its not constructive advice if this is something i did in 5 minutes to get down a rough framework

less gain

no shit derp

thats like telling me i need to play cleaner

double derp

you do need to play cleaner

and you need less gain

clearly you're having difficulty heeding this advice

but i'm glad it has registered

may i point out that there's very little point in 'getting down' a 'rough framework' of a track you don't want people to criticise

demoing a song i just finished writing with 2 parts i just learned how to play

[i]beter get my tone perfect[/i]

Havent posted my new album here in a couple pages.
[Url]http://assimilation.bandcamp.com/[/url]

Playing my debut solo show this Saturday
[url]https://www.facebook.com/events/266333550127541/[/url]

mail order
[url]http://slaysfordays.bigcartel.com/product/assimilation-untitled-cdr[/url]

okay im done with the shameless self (butt)plug

[QUOTE=publicastration;18855361]demoing a song i just finished writing with 2 parts i just learned how to play

[i]beter get my tone perfect[/i][/QUOTE]

perfect/listenable

if you cant listen to that you really are a pretentious music school faggot

i can listen to it

but i can give you better criticism if you turn down the gain

and it would also just generally sound better because you're not in control of your technique so muting goes out of the window whenever you do a position shift

i can mute better than that

here u go lucky i was in a good mood

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQyF1ntfF0c&feature=youtu.be[/url]

https://www.box.com/s/e79f7b73c331de8b0184

noon have you had a chance to listen to my record yet? interested in your opinion, some of it has beatz (esp the first two songs)

Have I posted enough to shamelessly promote my band yet?

Grandmother sounds pretty great, Berkay!

And I'm liking dem riffs, Luc.

EDIT:
Also, had an excess of energy yesterday so I felt like screaming along to sum Lamb of God:
[url]http://www.box.com/s/84a833a1124e3fa3403d[/url]

played my first solo show last night

gf taped it:

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=05Nu3PiFodI[/url]

turdzinthetoilet

did you even watch the vid

if not you are just another turdinthetoilet


waiting
to be flushed

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Finally finished recording my band's new record, we've been writing this shit for ages.

Here's a track off it, its post metal stuff. Recorded/mixed at Rain City Recorders in Vancouver (Archspire, Antichrist [CAN]), mastered by Jens Bogren (Opeth, Enslaved).

[URL]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2159465/07%20Belzec%2C%201942.mp3[/URL]

[QUOTE=TommyOfArabia;18857629]Have I posted enough to shamelessly promote my band yet?[/QUOTE]

yea u cool man go for it

https://www.box.com/s/4b37075491e6478d60ee

[QUOTE=Morumbar;18857688]Grandmother sounds pretty great, Berkay!
[/QUOTE]

cheers dude

[QUOTE=christsimpson;18860281]yea u cool man go for it[/QUOTE]

okay well it's not necessarily my style but i have fun with it.
just a warning the vocals came out a bit choppy and the guitar tone is a little muddy but for our first EP it came out alright.

http://encompass1.bandcamp.com/

rerecorded vocals on this unfinished roxanne codone song

very empire! empire! (i was a lonely estate) influenced.

the full lyrics are:

[I]to go on my own
would cost far too much
my throat gets dry
my hands get wet
my knees are shaking
i'm weary by 9pm

and there's no hope for
anyone or anything so listless

i worry far too much
i'm needy as fuck
i need to relax
subconscious fuck off
leave me to some sort of peace

you must gather your party before venturing forth[/I]

[url]https://www.box.com/s/1a83beda1b1dd8c45a36[/url]

mappy writing lyrics about his panic attacks, awesome!

you're stupid

[IMG]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/image.php?u=296409&dateline=1336067484[/IMG]

Your lyricz are beginning to grow on me

Last line is silly and absurd and it so fits

there's vomit on my sweater already
mom's spaghetti

meatballs
pitfalls

first live show (solo, ive been in a few hardcore bands) any helpful commments

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=05Nu3PiFodI[/url]

[QUOTE=kitsch;18863473]Your lyricz are beginning to grow on me

Last line is silly and absurd and it so fits[/QUOTE]

it's from baldur's gate

duh i know

and its been copied in a lot of rpgs like kotor

that's because the same team worked on them

I always just figured it was an homage to a classic

[QUOTE=adbforever;18863196]mappy writing lyrics about his panic attacks, awesome![/QUOTE]

hey dude, when's the next carbonized gnawing mandible release? can't wait!

is carbonised gnawing mandible about bugs surviving a nuclear apocalypse or something

[QUOTE=robertsona;18863573]hey dude, when's the next carbonized gnawing mandible release? can't wait![/QUOTE]

hey, the pot and kettle are both right

[QUOTE=fingers mccoy;18863575]is carbonised gnawing mandible about bugs surviving a nuclear apocalypse or something[/QUOTE]

no, it's about brent showing off his sick guitar chops

yo juddy you ever listen to my metal band

[url]http://soundcloud.com/dharnyk/marijuana-featuring-mic-price[/url]

shame on any one who hasn't heard this

thirty seconds of that was too much

did you even get to my Harsh Vocals lol

MARIJUANA, MARY JANE THAT GANJA