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Lowridenn 11-08-2005 07:37 PM

Ask and you shall recieve. Sorry these aren't in quite the detail I did above, but I am short on time.

[b]TojesDolan[/b] - Above.
[b]RunAmokRampant[/b] - Imagery was quite exquisite, and I am a sucker for imagery.
[b]MMPR[/b] - Absolutely beautiful. It was tough to decide between you and RunAmok for first/second.
[b]Dancin' Man[/b] - As others have said, the structure was the downfall.
[b]Bowl of Oranges[/b] - I like the way the piece plays with a wax firgure. It is consistent, but a little bland.
[b]SubtleDagger[/b] - Solid work, as always. It just didn't jump out and grab me like some of the others in this challange.
[b]Pixiesfanyo[/b] - The imagery is outstanding. The piece just doesn't seem to affect me in the way some of the other pieces in this challange (as well as some of your other work) do.
[b]ATC[/b] - Both of the "I want to..." stanzas were appealing to me. It was a fun read.
[b]Silenceevolves[/b] - I actually really enjoyed this piece. It feels complete and makes perfect sense to me.
[b]xKonradx[/b] - It seems mechanic. I can't feel any emotion in this at all.
[b]Scared4Life[/b] - Above.
[b]KeepingtheBlade[/b] - Some of the delivery seems a bit off. I did like the last stanza, but overall, it just didn't do it for me.
[b]CrimsonPunk[/b] - Emotion that needs direction. Very clunky and contains some grammatical errors.

Crimsonpunk 11-09-2005 05:01 AM

Whats clunky, Awkward ?

Dancin' Man 11-09-2005 09:49 AM

Masterpiece Theater sounds like some sort of food. Like fancy TV dinners.

TojesDolan 11-09-2005 09:52 PM

Argh shoot...

It's been ovre a week already? :(

I forgot to edit... :(

I had it al ready, though.... I'm disqualified for the next one, right? :(

dammit.

CSD & the Soul Machines 11-10-2005 12:43 AM

Ooopsy, me too. I think I did quite well too, owell.

SubtleDagger 11-10-2005 04:36 AM

You probably would have won.

Someone tabulate votes, I'm in the mood for writing.

EDIT: Nevermind. Pix won.

pixies - 4 (7) 2 7 2 2 1 2 2 2 ; 24/9 = 2.667

RunAmokRampant 11-10-2005 05:27 AM

Dam[I]n[/I] it you beat me to it. Well here's the rest of the placings if you're interested.

TojesDolan [B]DQ[/B]
RunAmokRampant 5.7 [B]5th[/B]
MMPR [B]DQ[/B]
Dancin' Man 10.4 [B]10th[/B]
Bowl of Oranges 8 [B]8th[/B]
SubtleDagger 3.1 [B]2nd[/B]
Pixiesfanyo 2.7 [B]1st[/B]
ATC 5.2 [B]Equal 4th with Keepingtheblade[/B]
Silenceevolves 8.9 [B]9th[/B]
xKonradx 6.7 [B]6th[/B]
Lowridenn 7 [B]7th[/B]
Scared4Life 4.4 [B]3rd[/B]
KeepingtheBlade 5.2 [B]Equal 4th with ATC[/B]
CrimsonPunk [B]DQ[/B]

SubtleDagger 11-10-2005 05:30 AM

Yup.

Scarred [i]should[/i] have won though. You dumbfaces.

Crimsonpunk 11-10-2005 08:33 AM

why the **** am i dq'd??

SubtleDagger 11-10-2005 08:40 AM

Because you didn't finish voting.

pixiesfanyo 11-10-2005 04:20 PM

hey see deez nuts.

Crimsonpunk 11-10-2005 05:32 PM

I assumed I didn't have to, as I did the same thing last time and no one said anything.

SubtleDagger 11-10-2005 07:16 PM

Hey, thanks for bring that to my attention.

Now you can't enter for [b]two[/b] challenges!

A_Perfect_Sonnet 11-10-2005 07:55 PM

Oh no! That's four weeks out of your life you'll never get back.

Crimsonpunk 11-11-2005 07:46 AM

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Hey, thanks for bring that to my attention.

Now you can't enter for [b]two[/b] challenges![/QUOTE]

At the back of my mind, I knew this was going to happen. Can't you just reserve a special last place for me one number below the amount of people that enter??

SubtleDagger 11-11-2005 07:50 AM

[QUOTE=Crimsonpunk]At the back of my mind, I knew this was going to happen. Can't you just reserve a special last place for me one number below the amount of people that enter??[/QUOTE]
No entering or I ban.

xKONRADx 11-11-2005 11:41 AM

Harsh.

Crimsonpunk 11-12-2005 08:00 AM

'Is silenced', Although considering the actual implications of a banning, it might be beneficial to me. Hmmm
Youv'e won this round, subtle ...


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