no problem, I love listening to stuff like this, it gives people inspiriation, and who knows if someone on here will eventually make it somewhere.

[QUOTE=Squirrel]thanks, powertab is great for me


ive only transcribed the last bit of this song, the outro classical part.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for liking it. Im eventually gonna tab the rest out whenever i finish the Kalmah song im doing now so ill keep you guys updated :thumb:
[QUOTE=IheartSP]no problem, I love listening to stuff like this, it gives people inspiriation, and who knows if someone on here will eventually make it somewhere.[/QUOTE]Same here, i want to listen to other's material so i know how others tend to approach composing. Then if, say, you make it i can say "Hey, Ultima, great band. yeah i knew all those dudes since day one" :D

You still need to upload the stuff

I just did...
I just downloaded them myself and they work. whats wrong? :confused:

I feel stupid, wehre is it? I don't see it here or on the hatecrew site

nvm I found them on teh hatecrew site.

They're on the hatecrew site under original songs thread
EDIT: Congrats you found them :amaze: :thumb:

Ok I just listened to the first and here are my thoughts...

The Bad: The acoustic I wasn't really feeling. I don't think it quite fit in. The rythyms also seemed to need a bit of spice to them. One thing you need is some more leads. Also, a fill for a bar or 2 wouldn't hurt.

The Good: When you did have leads, I loved them. Some of the riffs also had a nice feel to them, and the solos were great. Overall, I was really feeling the song and felt like it had some good potential. I liked the whole layout too, I thought it seemed pretty thought out.

Onto the next one...

Thanks. Its my first song i wrote so i didnt expect much.
And on the next song (5) the verse sucks so you dont have say it :p

IheartSP, i'm really liking your songs. You use some great phrasing.

Yes the verses did suck on the 2nd :lol:

Although, I loved the solos. There were many parts it needed work though. I thought there were times where you had leads but no rythym and it could use some. Also, in the intro whe it turned to distortion, you had the whole note with the 9 and 10, but it woulda sounded better with just the 9. Overall it was about a 6 out of 10, I wasn't quite feeling it in some parts, but the solos I really liked.

It does sound better with the 9. I really need to touch up my older stuff; i only downloaded that one for the solos :p

Its nice to know your judgement is truthful :thumb:

I'm listening to the 3rd song now. I like all the electric parts a lot, the acoustic isn't bad but there is way too much of it.

On the end where it fades in w/ the electric, its supposed to lead into the next song. I always wanted to do that.

Ok the last song...

Wow man, this song is just amazing! I love all the riffs and it just has a great thrash feel to it. I have 2 parts to complain about. On 1 of the leads, there were a lot of out of key notes, it was the lead that repeats 4 times and has some legato. Also, the clean part just didn't fit. Besides that, you just did a great job and it was a great mix of rythym and lead, and the composition was great.

TSAI thanks a lot for the compliment, and I'd be very pleased if you elaborated a bit.

Thanks a lot for the reviews. Did i review yours yet? I forgot...but they were really good! If i didnt ill do that now :D

Should i upload my better stuff later?

Well, I am leaving tomorrow for the week. Next saturday remind me about them. And no, you didn't review mine yet.

Alright i remind you then...on to Ultima!

Okay first song (66) was very nicely done. Iron Maiden-esque leads, which were nicely harmonized and cool riffs throughout. Only one minor problem was during the solo end of bar 78 and beginning of 79 the 10 8 7 thing could have been something different; like on 79 instead of 10 8 7 have 7 trill on 8 or something like that. I liked the solo as a whole though. Also just an idea, the last time you harmonize in the song change the melody so its a little different so one the second time you go thru the melody you can have an awesome harmonized trill or something like that. Good job though

On to the next one

Ok thanks for the criticism. I'll keep that in mind.

Okay i like the cool little intro and the little fills in the rhythm guitar. I love the lead starting at bar 33, good thinking making it go higher. Then at bar 45 i loved how you changed it a little bit and when you harmonized it, it sounded really cool. I liked how you approached transitioning into the solo as well(kickass solo by the way). The bass sounded better in this song too. The thing i liked about the outro is it seemed complete. I liked this a lot

That was potential I'm guessing?

[QUOTE=IheartSP]That was potential I'm guessing?[/QUOTE]Yup

Solid intro on this one. Cool riff after it, but the lead kinda bothered me. But when the drums kicked in it, everything sounded better. I like the verse and what seems to be the chorus(the slower part). Then you blast back in with the heavy riff and i liked the addition of fills here. Dude, awesome solos! I like the trills :p And back to the intro. Well thought-out song but the one lead i talked about before sounds odd. The song's good none the less. Killer outro by the way :thumb:

Once you write more stuff let me know :thumb:

I have half a song done, I just sent it to tsai. If you have aim I'd be glad to send it, my aim is AcesHigh616. If not, I'll upload it.

Thanks a lot for the reviews, I have both yours and Leah's saved for when I go to revise. I also noticed the lead sounded a bit weird. I think it has too much of an "evil" vibe, I should change that. But I like your feedback, and I'm glad that my songs are so good. TSAI even said I have potential in the music business, and when I start recording things with my band, MX is gonna be the first place I go. I'll get back to you guys when I start recording some stuff, because you could all be my first fans.

I dont have any IM's :upset: I really need to get recording equipment so my songs dont sound like a friggin machine; then ill get some better ideas...and im already a fan! :thumb:

We are gonna go to the studio soon and record a 4 or 5 song demo, depends if I finish my latest yet. I'll upload the song for you...

dude i just realized! If my band wins battle of the bands we get studio time! We need to practice. Now!

Well, not now since its almost tomorrow but when tomorrow comes...

Cant wait for the song.

[url]http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1DU6I8LJOMM5Y0FYVG2UEZC0PE[/url]

I like this...At the end i know you're wanting to transition into some crazy fill/solo thing right? Work on it a bit more(and finish it) and youve got another cool song

Also i just finished a short little instrumental if your interested :D

Sure, I'll look at it. My plan for riff 4 is to add a solo instead of a long drawn out interlude like all my other songs.

Yeah i can kinda tell by the end...
Alright hold on
[url=http://s45.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1MBBQZ1LO87V30KDFMOQ5CZFA]Instrumental 2[/url]

My first instrumental is like 12 minutes long :p But still pretty sweet

I'll check it out tomorrow before I leave, I have to get off now. Later.

Well my fellow Hate Crew members, this is it. I'm leaving down south and I'll be gone for a weak. It's going to be hot as hell and hurricanes at every turn, so praise thy vehement gods for my safety. Try not to post too many times while I'm gone, because I hate being lost in the middle of a conversation. *Sniff* I'll miss you guys. :upset: Save all the fun around here for my return. *Sniff* I hate long goodbyes...

Hey you're coming down here in the hurricanes with me, eh? Haha.

Bye Ben! Hope you have fun, and we'll miss you too. :)
I'm with the hurricanes too. :angry:

Remember to bring a lifejacket... :p

Don't have too much fun without us.

Listen to Shattered Future. I just got ticketed for not having a lifejacket on a paddle boat. The friggin guy didnt even know where we were. Dam n00b.

I have been trying to learn some bodom songs on the guitar but it just sin't ahppening, anyone know any exercises or anything like that would help me? (at the moment im trying to learn red light in my eyes part 1).

I'm a newb to this thread.

Anyone recommend me a good CoB album to start with? Also, did they just release or are about to release an album? Because I saw a song on launch that was called trashed, lost, and strungout. It was pretty cool. Thanks guys

I think they are getting ready to release a new album.

to start with i would recomend 'something wild or 'Hate crew deathroll'