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Inserting my input on the situation
Can't think of anything different Can't recall any better words Still not remembering what I really want balloon field flag boards |
you carry a red balloon like a gun
you cross a field like its a battlefield even when i carry a white flag all you seem to want to do is nail me to some boards crumbling ectstasy startled hazy |
the memories i had of you were crumbling in my head
you were my ecstacy and i was your Ambien it startled me how much you holding me resembled resting in a coffin my thoughts are hazy but i swear you wear satin a lot more lately ( i cant write to these words lately) someday you will understand |
Someday we will all look back on this and laugh.
You and I as one, together And I will hold you in a warm embrace, And we will understand each other. Few Memories compassion back |
a few empty bottles later
and we'll talk about our memories kiss me with all the compassion you can and then we'll talk about going back we'll be missed here |
We'll gather in circles to destroy our fears
Defeat all the powers that be. Know this, my love, you'll always be missed I hold your picture right here. belligerent knack destructive drugs |
belligerent losers
always have a knock for being destructive and after the world is nothing they will do drugs |
um he didnt post words, and i think its time people stop posting retarded sets, at least pick 4 words that you can make sense out of in 4 lines
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ok, here are four words
black hearts now reign that good? |
the night was black when you said goodbye
our hearts once connected were half neatly torn apart now my heart is impared and shards of it are stuck to yours letting you reign over me with your frowns and disappointed looks now im under your thumb Please Forgive Me Trying |
We should spice this thread upi because it is getting pretty repetative. we should start judging them by every ten and saying who has the best one out of the ten. Any thoughts?
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Pleased hearts bleed, blood you can't see
Crimes not forgiven on the crusts of the universe If they won't relent, they'll end up like me Trying to make peace with the holy few of us. Meaningless Rhymes Are Easier I'm all for making this more intesting. Bout time someone added a new element to liven up everyone. How about 2 words given for each line...? or something |
these times are meaningless
these rhymes are rhythmless are you awake, can you feel me would it be eiser if i died Blunt flash freak scream |
BMM, ive been thinking on that... we could set a theme and the next ten entries have to be about that theme, then we judge it, and the winner sets the next theme.... how does that idea sound?
blunt my mind with hazy shades and flash dark lights in this pale light you always seem to freak me in this darkness where i scream oh so bad... that was terrible, but it's all i got, lol ridge tradition dolls melt |
Up so high on this ridge
Like a twisted tradition watching little dolls in the inferno slowly melt Condescending Attitude Wisdom Anger |
[QUOTE=silverabsolution]BMM, ive been thinking on that... we could set a theme and the next ten entries have to be about that theme, then we judge it, and the winner sets the next theme.... how does that idea sound?[/quote]
oh you mean the lyrical challenges thread? go there... :rolleyes: |
your so condescending
"its not welcome, its attitude" but i love your wisdom "its not anger, its ignorance" not very good really |
im so not, what youre looking for
you dont like simple stuff, you like to explore it would be so good, to be with you i really wish my dreams would come true sitting book pencil nothing |
It's writer's block without the pencil,
simply nothing coming out. My book is blank, void of idea sitting in this shadowed doubt. spider man green goblin |
dont use stupid words
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lol way to go not using any of the previous words in order :thumb:
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[QUOTE=pskov]spider
man green goblin[/QUOTE] from rituals of feeding spiders the eyes of man typically take fright. yet behind her devouring of green-eyed prey, i derive a goblin's sadistic delight. choice tangle vein pure |
It was hard but a choice is not a simple task
As my fingers play, I tangle with the options Blood pumping faster through my vein It's pure, it's true but it's not for you Vessels Porcelain Beautiful Nothing |
from the disconnected vessels, my blood drains out,
but im too focused on the porcelain skies to even notice, such a beautiful existance, a beautiful night, nothing can take my attention from this, no, not even death. registration slumber built congratulations |
The registration draws a closer line,
As the slumber stirs from the sleep that binds. And as the built memoirs die, of past relations, I offer my congratulations. Slow Burnt Placid Scar |
I advanced, keeping my movements slow
My heart burnt by what had gone before My placid nature disturbed again A scar in place of what once was gore Evangelist Masturbation Simulation Mandela |
you yell evamgelist
you say masterbation isint a team sport is this life a simulation what is a mandela crap nice agree savoir |
Nelson Mandela? Uh duh!
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ok, im dumb
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Thats okay, I just like pointing out other people's flaws; makes me feel like a big man.
I wade through this thick crap. Nicety is out of the picture. I can't agree to salvation. With a Hipocrite as my savior Collapse Allowed (or Aloud) Self Belief |
collapsed onto the floor,
she screams aloud, she cant even hear herself, her belief failed her poo sandwich god fear |
He squatted over the table to poo
Onto his bread for a sandwich He remembered he was in the house of god And trembled with fear as the priest approached Cotton Christmas Tuesday Gandhi |
St. Nick's beard, in all its cottonous glory,
Blankets the world like snow on Christmas. Perhaps he was the namesake for Fat Tuesday; We know it couldn't have been Gandhi. Turkey Fresh Alarm Newspaper |
Cracked windows through where turkeys run free
Fresh from the exile of the man in the coat Begin to comprehend the alarm in this place Where unto ourselves only a newspaper speaks correction sideways guitar christology |
Correction left uncorrected
Sideways entomology Guitar bleeding emotional soul Unreligious Christology Meh. Havent written for a lllloooonnnngggg time. That was a bit of meaningless garbage to get back into the flow of things. Epitaph Clockwork Corruption Pseudonym |
He listened to bands on Epitaph
He loved A Clockwork Orange He ranted about corruption Living his life under a pseudonym Assessment Nixon Alliance Lancashire |
US democratic Assessment
Under Nixon, nearly impossible. With Kissinger and his "alliance" Lancashire seems plausible. That made absolutely no sense. Moving on.... Crack Cellphone Cadillac Johnny |
He called up the crack dealer
On his brand new cellphone The guy dropped off the drugs in his Cadillac And he swallowed a Johnny full of blow Linear Consciousness Angels Sewer |
Thinking on a linear plane,
Consciousness infiltrates my deepest thoughts. The clouds drift like angels, Into the sewer of conventional wisdom. WTF??? Legal Printer Laundry Mattress |
that stuff aint legal!
havin yoru face put through the printer. its like your worlds a laundry of crazy ideas and mental heirachies! and u sleep on taht solitary matress in the middle of this dark hall we call democracy! here are my words: cliché saddening, triumphant, institution. |
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