i wish i had a coconut
downloading porn off KazaA
readme this and show me that
but i ended up with a nude jabba the hutt.....

lol

god
lair
faith
sin

dude nude jabba is not cool.

i use to believe in god
and when i entered satins lair
i kept my faith with me
and i have just sined again if u you what i mean. =D

someone
crit
my
song!

lol

[QUOTE=AnsonChew]someone
crit
my
song![/QUOTE]

Someone please gather 'round
Get out your pen and paper and start to crit
This is my song and its about the ground
Always remeber that this song is the ****.
:thumb:


Reduce
Serious
Injury
Comfort

[QUOTE=Doink07]Someone please gather 'round
Get out your pen and paper and start to crit
This is my song and its about the ground
Always remeber that this song is the ****.
:thumb:


Reduce
Serious
Injury
Comfort[/QUOTE]

I think you should reduce the trust
You really cant be serious
If you carry on you'll cause an injury to your heart
Its a shame i wont be the one you fall back on for comfort


Gold
Beautiful
June
Man

your eyes are like gold,
theyre as beautiful as the sun,
blazing across the summer sky in june,
i want to be your man,
i want to hold you hand.

i could go on, but i wont. lol.

finish
insert
forever
three

the finish line seems to close
as I insert my digital brain
forever into the mechanical system
of the three lone survivors of.... technology

I dunno....

savage
betrayel
incarcerate
infliction




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Maggotfelon
POST COUNT:783

the savage scratching of pen on paper
smells distinctly of betrayal
i'm incarcerated already in a windowless cell of doom,
and all this is stupid self-infliction

(exam results come out today)

vibrations
earth
surrender
holy

felt vibrations from,
under the earth,
voices telling me to surrender,
youre not holy.

void
strangle
forge
project

i live in my void.
as i try to forge a new heart.
mending my own is my hardest proect.
after you strangle it with your cruel words of rejection.

broken
after
why
down

lol, that probably makes no sense what-so-ever to some of you lol

this air i breathe feels broken.
this dream im after seems so far away.
why does my fate product like this?
im falling down, falling down.


amidst
pretend
failure
forever

amidst the pure anger
of pretending to be a success
my failure's compound
on top of my ego forever


sadistic
tragically
fallen
radical


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Maggotfelon
POST COUNT: 812

would it be sadistic were i to appraise
you, so tragically beautiful
an angel fallen from the sky
illuminating the path to a radical nightmare.

(9/11)

--

label
overrated
driven
material

as i saw the label of my viagra
i knew it was overated
guarenteed to get ur driven is how it starts
given you have the right material

dang that sucked.

Twit
cotton
clock
bag

Twit
cotton
clock
bag

i know a person who is a twit.
all he wears in cotton.
he carries a miniature grandfather clock,
in a paper bag.

dispair
angst
poison
peach

(i gotta see how this one turns out lol)

Endless despair, I scream
a stream of angst towards your face
my words poison, I the fruit of your labours
A melodramatic peach.

perception
distort
correction
rectify

[QUOTE=shadedlife]
perception
distort
correction
rectify[/QUOTE]

my perception is blurred.
as you distort my vision.
in my own correction.
i rectify an answer.

love
pain
anger
rage

There was a ragged band we all loved
They sung about pain and stuff
Then St. Anger cursed them
Now showing false rage they pretend they're tough


Long
Live
Mighty
Zeppelin

they were around a long time.
they played live.
their music was mighty.
all hail led zeppelin

they were around a long time.
they played live.
their music was mighty.
all hail led zeppelin

all
hail
iron
maiden

As the idiot song rolls on and on,
"All hail Iron Maiden!" they cry
As the singing crowd of people roasts under the sun
And we wait for the song to die

Soliloquy
Phoenix
Effect
Theory

wishing for you i write this sililoquy
something grand as the presence of pheonix
i could never admit the effect
in theory it works but it's all in my head


goodbye
faithful
death
deranged

goodbye to virginity
my faithful dog made sure of that
i must not comit death
i am not deranged jsut desperate

poop
smelly
gay
sweet

Picking up poop is really bad
Its smelly and makes me real sad
But the gay guy that lives across the street
Says that picking up poop is really sweet

?.....lol

Rough
Bedsheets
Ticks
Ocean

rough ***** makes my anus bleed
my bedsheets covered with cum and blood
i got tick all over my scrotum
the ocean cleans my bloody asshole like a baday

******
cunt
jason becker
paralyzed

The words you gave me are bad, but I'm a serious man
I won't use the "******" one, I'm Anti-NeoDexer
"Cunt" is a bad word to use, I'm sure you can do better
And I really wanna know who the poop's Jason becker,
for I'm the paralyzed tester and I am wearing a sweater

Ummm riiiiiight. This is the worst rapping you can ever witness. Anyways, next:

food
banana
rest
bandage

dont give me just any food
give me a banana
leave the rest to rot away
and bandage up your broken arms

why
use
words
like

that??

he'd never tell her why or where he's gone
and she uses all that time she's got to try to love him more
with his promises and pretty words on repeat in her head
it's obviously a farce, but at least it makes her feel like she's alive

scream
out
ragged
sighs

blood dripping from the inside... my eyes - i scream...
i shout... out to the world... the world behind me...
and i tear at my already ragged clothes... lost and psychotic...
sighs of relief... as i cry... my demons exorcised...


blasphemous
traitor
faith
erasure

first off I gotta respect

"There was a ragged band we all loved
They sung about pain and stuff
Then St. Anger cursed them
Now showing false rage they pretend they're tough"

niiiiiiiiice, man

oh, and my post:

A blasphemous word that was taken lightly
A traitor in every way that has been living rightly
Faith fades to black as the real world enters
So many years what we believed, in need of erasure

Traffic
Soul
City
Sodomy