i rekon the first line was pretty kool

theres something lurking in my mind
slow as a sloth it's taking over
it's making me grow arrogant
someone stop the madness

protect
challenge
oust
lice

protecting my killer and the dove
isnt life a challenge just stay high
ousting perception of freedom and love
are lice with a license to burrow in deep

can
you
feel
anything

Can you see yourself through my tears?
The words you spoke confirmed my fears.
I wonder if you even feel emotion,
Or to anything you give devotion.

Surpass
Induldge
Quiver
Wail

try to surpass my rhyme
indulge in youre wasted time
and quiver in the name
wail from the pain, from my ruthless game

good
earnest
true
satan

i was in a good mood
to be honest--------was that meant to be that?
But my wish came true
all i had was satan

That was crap

Wet
dripped
slide
mud

Wet and i'm feeling fine
Liguid runs off me like wine
I want to slide forever
In a muddy river

Snake
Potion
Boots
Religion

As I don my snakeskin hat,
I down my prescribed potion;
And in snakeskin boots, at that,
I am defying my religion

Mouse
Homonym
Dave
Bubble Gum

Mouse
Homonym
Dave
Bubble Gum

I am but a mouse
My soul there, a homonym
I have no name, it is Dave
In their mouths, I am but Bubble Gum

Find
Dry
House
Abuse

this. what is there to find?
but a dry existance.
my house filled with my nothing.
not a thought to abuse.

regain
untidy
proportion
lock

In an act of desperation to regain what I never had,
I leave you with untidy thoughts in that unkempt mind.
But this proportion of indifference between us,
will keep the locks on the doors in use.

farther
until
dealt
clench

this is going further than i thought it would
and im scared until you're helpless in my arms
i've been dealt the cards i used to wish id get
watch me clench my fists with fear

wear
me
like
locket

You always wear that same smile,
leaving me to try and wipe away the facade.
But it's like they always try and tell me,
about lockets only being near the heart and not on it.

circle
mediocre
albeit
left

Grrr...this one is still up? Guess I'll have to solve it.

My search for perfection goes in a circle
Mediocre is the best I can acheive
Albeit my troubles use to bother me so
I've left them behind, much to my relief

(Terrible, I know. :lol: )

Eerie
Twilight
Gloom
Virtue

The night was dark and eerie
The twilight is fading quickly
The darkness fills my mind with gloominess
but in my heart I'm virtuous

Are we allowed to use different forms of the words?

What
Lie
Sting
Play

what do you mean when you say you don't know?
why do you lie to me and push me so low
sting with your tail to make you feel grand
play with my feelings and crush under hand

new words;
Fly
Fall
Cry
Tall

its hard to fly,
when your destinned to fall,
but its easy to cry,
when youre taller than all.

that was easy :D ....but it sucked.

felt
torrent
unscramble
miss

this pain that i've felt,
like a torent i've felt
unscramble the meanings
miss the feelings

life
eternal
strife
infernal

I stare at the shards of my life
My torment will be eternal
From the death of peace comes strife
And now my pain is infernal

I'm not too sure I used infernal right...

Color
Mind
Soothe
Tranquil

I was sure I was colorblind
Maybe it's all in my mind
give me the pill to soothe my pain
Beside tranquil waters I sit on this plain

Please
How
deem
shine

please give me something to lie on
somehow you will always be there
i feel i cant deem it possible
the way your life shine's into my life

sashay- walk ostentatiously with exaggerated hip and shoulder movements
thaumaturge- a worker of wonders or miracles
minion- a follower or underling of a powerful person especially a servile or unimportant one
demoniac- a person supposedly possessed by an evil spirit

the look in your eyes spelled out "sashay"
it would take a thaumaturge to stop you from walking that way
and as I am your sword, shallow's your minion
demonic as cold, for only ice's given

control
filled
untitled
why

holy crap u did that fast!!!!!!

i cant control my wandering mind
my eyes are filled with tears now
poetry untitled and undermined
why are we doing this now

thinking
about
flying
planes

Thinking about flying planes

I am eternally thinking of you
About every thnig you do
Flying high in my own delusions
The plane of my life has crashed

(Plane of my life has crashed? that was c.rap)

Ecstasy
Carcass
Doughnut
Oxygen

my body writhes with ecstasy, as i imagine your face smiling down on me,
the carcass of our love, white like a dove, fits like a glove,
a perfect cirle, like a doughnut, hold the sprinkles
as i gasp for oxygen between your arms i scream "not the wrinkles!"

sorry..went a bit wierd at the end there...you chose some hard words..."doughnut?!" where can i fit that in??

burn
dead
in
out

i let my life burn away,
soon me and the dead may meet,
its sad that when i look in,
that all i see is anger fuming out.

hmm....i didnt do that very well..didnt think about it enough..

point
thrive
minute
capacity

crush the point with the black of your eye
and thrive on the lives and pain of the free
but just one minute, isnt your expiration overdue
for even a barcode has a digital capacity-even a barcode has a digital capacity

satin
velvet
silk
tacs