[QUOTE=machinegunfunk]yup...you and dancin' man. if that's not unanimous i don't know what is. i don't look for trouble, but when people are pompous and condescending, i take affront very quickly. i have real problems with e-tough guys who think that calling people noobs and flaunting their longevity/e-standing on a messageboard makes them awesome. dancin' man's critique is in no way what should be deemed acceptable for a forum concerned with the improvement of songwriters; a supposed audience of peers. his review was rude, sarcastic, caustic, and moreover totally useless and inane, i see nothing wrong in taking offense to it and pointing out the fact that the he was in essence being a douchebag. if people want to critique my writing, by all means go ahead. but when he says, I HATE POLITICAL MUSIC AND SINCE YOU WROTE A POLITICAL POEM YOU'RE A LOSSSSSSSSSER AND YOUR PIECE SUUUUUUCKSSSSSS AHAHA, then he can shove it up his ***, plain and simple.

and towards you, you're not much better. you're extremely condescending, show a tendency towards disparaging "noobs" rather than being a firm, yet guiding hand, and just seem like a dick.

so if i piss you two off, you know what, i don't care.[/QUOTE]
I'm not condescending because of my join date or postcount or yours for that matter. I'm condescending because you're a moron who can't take criticism.

[QUOTE=machinegunfunk]yup...you and dancin' man. if that's not unanimous i don't know what is.[/QUOTE]
Actually, you're pissing me off as well. Just stop.

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]Your add date is lame anyway.

I'm pissed off people are giving me crits saying "I didn't expect this to suck so much." Neither did I. The close date snuck up on me.[/QUOTE]
I told you you could edit it.

Ah well. Too little too late.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]I'm not condescending because of my join date or postcount or yours for that matter. I'm condescending because you're a moron who can't take criticism.[/QUOTE]

good comeback. i can take any criticism that is written lucidly and seems to have some foundation. i "couldn't take" dancin' man's criticism because his "criticism" amounted to him saying, "i hate political songs and this is a political song so you suck." if i'm wrong on that, please, enlighten me. as for addicted to chaos, it seemed like he was saying that my song didn't fit a formula for political songs, and as such, wasn't good. when he clarified it for me, i had no further complaints.

[QUOTE=Necroses-bass]bisnotch: stop bull****ting man you know my piece was ****, i wasn't actually questioning your crit, just questioning the fact that everyone thinks that apocalyptic lyrics have to belong in the death metal genre.

Dfelon: could be quite interesting considering heaney's age[/QUOTE]

This is an expansion on my vote: I dont take lyrics by genre, and when I gave you such a blunt statement, it was only to tell you how I really felt. There wasn't much along the lines of depth in that song, it just felt like a juvenille piece, and I know I've seen better from you. It wasn't the worst of the bunch though, so it still has room to make something of it.

I didn't say you suck until yoiu asked for a reason I rated your piece so low. You are a stupid ***.

Burt - why/how am I banned? They were all in legal threads and seemed legit.

Disco, blame the movie piece on me having to put up with a romance-movie obsessed girlfriend. She likes the idea of meeting someone by accident and then being torn apart by circumstance. It's big in the romance movie business, apparently. Hence the accidental savior stepping to the wings, waiting for the next act in the play/movie.

Everything I do has already been set to music and the 'cos' just fit. It was a pretty chorus :upset:

In other good news, I get to see Anthrax instead of Dream Theater for the Gigantour. Yay.

If the 'cos' helps with the music, then that's cool. I just don't like seeing it with lyrics, it kinda takes me out of the song.

I'm the only one who has said that i suck

I don't think you suck. That would imply that there is no hope for you.
All I thought was that you're trying too hard and that you'd probably get better with time.

PS: Don't try to get people to say you suck. Doesn't look good for either party.

yeah i hope i'll improve, well i should, i've only been writing since november '04,
and i do not take offence in any of the crits, as i fully understand the views and agree with most of them.

F[I]u[/I]ck it, I'll say it......you suck. There, are you happier now?

yay someone agrees

I have the runs.

Yes, I do get it better now, thanks for explaining it. I still thank the language is ultimately too dry/morose, but at least it has somewhat of a purpose now. I might change your ranking a bit.

I agree that the titles are rediculous.

All things must.


I'm a little offended that I never get any crits in the S&L forums. I think I'm going over their heads. Here's hoping some of you decide to pity and humor me.

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=363105[/url]

I critted your piece ATC and I know what you mean. I don't get too many crits in the S&L either or I just get people who don't get my lyrics at all.

Thank you heaps,man. I lub you.
I was beginning to think I'd never get a crit there.

unless i'm a complete and utter d!ckhead RunAmok won so pick a word mate

He's probably in bed. It's 5 am Aussie-time.

[QUOTE=addicted_tochaos]He's probably in bed. It's 5 am Aussie-time.[/QUOTE]
thats not an excuse

challenge was lame, everyone could've done a lot better

i found this somewhere not sure what to think of it but it is good for a first time

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=360263[/url]

when is the new challenge starting?

im thinking up a word atm. should be up in a few minutes

****it... I had to go to cape cod... I missed the voting..

Sucks to be you.