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pixiesfanyo 10-16-2004 11:35 AM

[QUOTE]Boy that sure sounds like somebody else in this forum. Now who could that be...?[/QUOTE]

First off, all my responses (except for a few random ones) are mostly jokes.

[QUOTE]I see no one who has been here since 2001...[/QUOTE]

Dfelon has been here since 2001 and all he really was doing was suggesting some better bands for APS. Makes sense to me.

A_Perfect_Sonnet 10-16-2004 03:36 PM

actually, what he did was insult me based on the band i listen to, then suggest i listen to thrice, which i already do...

yeah thats sooooooooo helpful

ATC 10-16-2004 04:08 PM

nice work on the sarcasm. :thumb:


/sarcastic

pixiesfanyo 10-17-2004 07:06 AM

You've got balls.
I like balls.

Permanent Solution 10-17-2004 01:35 PM

Meh, I was thinking more emo than Green Day meself...

YDload 10-17-2004 08:40 PM

Oh, DFelon, that's just mean! Wait, is it over yet? Can I still squeeze one in?

A_Perfect_Sonnet 10-17-2004 08:47 PM

no, you still have time

BMM 10-17-2004 09:27 PM

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger][url=http://www.hxcmp3.com/bands/16880/]Is it OK to make an entire hXcmp3 page for your metalcore riff dealies? Ah well, I did anyway[/url].[/QUOTE]
thats pretty cool

A_Perfect_Sonnet 10-18-2004 06:34 PM

does the thread close tonight at midnight?

SubtleDagger 10-18-2004 06:59 PM

To my knowledge, yes.

A_Perfect_Sonnet 10-18-2004 07:24 PM

i was just wondering, for the sake of the children :)

Dancin' Man 10-18-2004 08:29 PM

Wait.... did that song actually win?


Oh wait... voting hasn't happened yet.

Permanent Solution 10-18-2004 09:25 PM

Probably...but then again I can't be mistaken about what I was thinking can I? :p

Permanent Solution 10-18-2004 11:16 PM

Maybe, maybe not, I did after all simply state the truth of the matter, it is not my fault you don't like my answers. Besides...cutting yourself is the stupidest way to seek attention ever, just actually kill yourself and save the world the trouble of dealing with miserable attention whores :rolleyes:

YDload 10-18-2004 11:24 PM

oh crap, I missed the deadline. Oh well, I'll use pious someday anyway, because it's a cool world.

Permanent Solution 10-18-2004 11:29 PM

That it is...though I like piety better for everyday use personally :)

YDload 10-18-2004 11:33 PM

I said "world" instead of "word." I like what I said anyway.

Permanent Solution 10-18-2004 11:42 PM

It is a cool world indeed :rolleyes:

SubtleDagger 10-19-2004 09:34 AM

Getting anrgy at DFelon and/or myself has never helped anyone on this site.

By the way, the world sucks.

sketchyjoe 10-19-2004 09:37 AM

[QUOTE=zeppelinfan2k3]Probably...but then again I can't be mistaken about what I was thinking can I? :p[/QUOTE]
This is emo:
[url]www.fourfa.com[/url]

SubtleDagger 10-19-2004 09:43 AM

Kid, you just got on DFelon's good side.

If you would have linked to CTTS, he'd be in heaven right now.

Permanent Solution 10-19-2004 10:08 AM

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Getting anrgy at DFelon and/or myself has never helped anyone on this site.

By the way, the world sucks.[/QUOTE]
I never got made at anyone...he started the attack and I defended myself, but I never went on the attack to do so. I don't see where I got angry at either of you...

ATC 10-19-2004 11:47 AM

in the spirit of brotherhood, both of you can put in each others butts.
ps: green day is not emo.

while noobs should know better than to needlessly pi[b]s[/b] off older members, it doesnt mean anyone is infallible. coughsubtlecough. heh, nazi mod.
seig heil.

SubtleDagger 10-19-2004 01:21 PM

That's pretty good.

ATC 10-19-2004 02:06 PM

that poem reminded me of a bunch of haiku verses, since the last word of the first verse gets split halfway.

ling,
-ering a kiss.

who woulda thunk it?

hotcod32 10-19-2004 03:03 PM

so with the voteing....... which way round do the list go....... best at top to worst at bottem....... or worst at top to best at bottem.... i'm confused

6945 10-19-2004 04:38 PM

keep the same order as entered. Much easier to total votes that way.

sketchyjoe 10-19-2004 04:40 PM

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Kid, you just got on DFelon's good side.

If you would have linked to CTTS, he'd be in heaven right now.[/QUOTE]
That site gets constantly referred to in the punk forum.

If anyone can't be bothered to read that site. A quick definition of emo is:
Emo stands for emotional hardcore. Like when you're watching porn and the girl gets fu[U]c[/U]ked up the arse so hard she starts crying.

SubtleDagger 10-19-2004 05:09 PM

Haha, that's pretty good.

Dancin' Man 10-19-2004 06:00 PM

I hate anal. It's so unappealing. Especially after I read Tucker Max's experience with it. [url]http://tuckermax.com/tuckertriesbuttsex.html[/url]

Permanent Solution 10-19-2004 08:05 PM

Oh man..I am so confused, Pixies said he had no idea what the meaning of mine was, and Subtle said it was too blunt...isn't it either one or the other? :/

A_Perfect_Sonnet 10-19-2004 09:34 PM

i have this feeling that everyone gives me bad scores just to spite me, which is probably supported by the fact that subtle thought my words didnt rhyme ;/

SubtleDagger 10-19-2004 10:44 PM

Sorry, kid, your rhyming is awful.

Need examples?

hotcod32 10-19-2004 11:10 PM

heh mine was god awulf even for me... i find geting slated funny... epsicly when its not done well

Permanent Solution 10-19-2004 11:20 PM

Wait Subtle, do you have an answer to my earlier question? (like 6 posts up)

ATC 10-20-2004 03:39 AM

subtle, have you ever listened to evanescence? fu[b]c[/b]k, man, thats a stupid statement. lemme know exactly how my song sounds like evanescence. i'm curious.

'if the doors of perception were cleansed, everything would appear as it is. perfect.' -william blake 'the marriage of heaven and hell'
that is far removed from evanescence territory.

and APS, you dont need to rhyme to make a song. if everyone wrote songs that way, we'd all still be in the third grade.

sketchyjoe 10-20-2004 08:27 AM

[QUOTE=addicted_tochaos]Punkrawka!! While i agree with the tirade, I like songs that have layers instead of it all thrown bare. It's hard hitting. Recommend me some songs in that genre. 9
[/QUOTE]Anything by Dead Kennedys or Propagandhi

SubtleDagger 10-20-2004 08:34 AM

[QUOTE=zeppelin]Wait Subtle, do you have an answer to my earlier question? (like 6 posts up)[/QUOTE]
Yes. Pixies is wrong and I am right. Also, pixies is dumb for not getting the song. (Luv ya pix :-*)
[QUOTE=atc]subtle, have you ever listened to evanescence? ****, man, thats a stupid statement. lemme know exactly how my song sounds like evanescence. i'm curious.

'if the doors of perception were cleansed, everything would appear as it is. perfect.' -william blake 'the marriage of heaven and hell'
that is far removed from evanescence territory.[/QUOTE]
Oh, now I see why your metaphor was completely random and had nothing to do with with the song; it's because it's Blake's.

Anyway, the rest of the song is boring, generic pronoun usage that doesn't say anything. What do you want me to do, go stanza-by-stanza like I did with DD's last one, saying, "This has too many pronouns and doesn't say anything profound"? (Hint: I'm not doing that again.)

SubtleDagger 10-20-2004 08:40 AM

[QUOTE=atc]too many pronouns in the first and third person plural. What are you? Karl Marx? You sound like Linkin park with an education or a socially conscious Manowar. [/QUOTE]
By the way, you're way out of line here. You're undermining my entire song because I'm speaking in a specifiic person (which has to do with the meaning of the song)? And I barely used any pronouns, I only used "we" a few times.

Your ratings have severely gone downhill. You're always comparing people's songs to bands and styles of music, and I seriously have no idea why you rate some of the people so highly. It's disturbing.

ATC 10-20-2004 09:06 AM

subtle, your person usage has nothing to do with the song.
you might notice, i put stuff in your crit in italics. were they meant to be taken seriously? i was generally pis[b]s[b]ed at the way i got compared to evanescence so the whole manowar thing is meant to annoy you.

ps: i have nothing against the usage of the third or first person. what i have an objection to is your belief that pronoun usage is a bad thing. while i agree it should not be overdone, it doesnt necessarily make a song bad or boring as you seem to think.

i compare people's work to music because i like to think at some point, someone would want to turn these into songs. i rate a lot on mood and emotion and other estrogen-ish things. All i have listened to for the last month is Tori Amos, Sarah Brightman,Jason Loewenstein,Loreena McKennitt and a bit of funk. Think of it as just another perspective, brutha.

I'll probably change when my next PMS thing happens and i switch to black metal.

Meanwhile, i want to encourage alternative non-metal musicianship.


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