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k.s.e. 05-17-2005 12:59 AM

even better than me? dopedog.. i'm hurt.

super deluxe 05-17-2005 01:31 AM

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]all i'm saying is that if you write a song for a chick... they're not gonna care about the clever subtleties or figurative language you use to convey your message, and they're even gonna overlook the fact that you have used every overused cliche in the idiots guide to songwriting (my mate actually has that book!)... its the thought that counts.

[/QUOTE]


If someone wrote me a crappy song, I'd be forced to ridicule him until his huevos shriveled up to whence they came.

super deluxe 05-17-2005 01:32 AM

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]its pretty self explanatory when u say this to a mod




gaslight only won 2 challenges?
he was the best out of all u nunces[/QUOTE]


Ha! Way to contradict what you said earlier! Gaslight is totally a girl.

d0ped0g 05-17-2005 01:41 AM

yeah but super_deluxe, you're a songwriter yourself... and therefore you arent ignorant to what makes a good song. The comment was generalized to the typical female.

also... contradiction? where?
considering i am god therefore perfect in every way if you prove me wrong it shall deny my existence

gaslight 05-17-2005 02:51 AM

Always with the me being a girl.

super deluxe 05-17-2005 03:26 AM

[QUOTE=gaslight]Always with the me being a girl.[/QUOTE]

I knew mentioning you would draw you out of hiding!

:-*

That means you have to enter the next challenge, along with me and DFelon and whoever else. For all we know, Minos, kse, and toddcotham will enter, too!

It's like a party!

d0ped0g 05-17-2005 04:12 AM

you didnt mention him... i did!
dont take credit for that! the glory's all mine~!

gaslight 05-17-2005 07:40 AM

What's the next challenge word? I might have a go for a laugh.

6945 05-17-2005 12:24 PM

[QUOTE=DFelon204409][b] [b]RunAmok[/b] - I feel you and bowl of oranges should stay away from the whole storyline narrative strategy to lyrics. Let Bob Dylan do it in your place. Seriously.

Oh I completely disagree. His stories are original. He just needs more time to develop that delevery. I see improvment

toddcotham 05-17-2005 12:35 PM

[QUOTE=super deluxe]That means you have to enter the next challenge, along with me and DFelon and whoever else. For all we know, Minos, kse, and toddcotham will enter, too!

It's like a party![/QUOTE]

Did I hear my name?

super deluxe 05-17-2005 12:55 PM

[QUOTE=toddcotham]Did I hear my name?[/QUOTE]

Whoa, I have, like, demonic summoning powers! :wave:

You have to enter, too! DO IT.

And perhaps if I say BigBadBob, he'll pop out of the woodwork and join, too!

Dfelon, we should have a contest to see who can get the most vets to come back.

super deluxe 05-17-2005 01:38 PM

Maybe if we have a seance we can get joshmay and benbaker and jurial back, too!

WhatILivefoR 05-17-2005 02:09 PM

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]2. xWhatxIxLivexForx!!!!11!!!!!one!!!![/QUOTE]

I am tempted to say something about prejudices...


But, just so you know (for the future): when I made the stupid username that I have back in 03, I wasn't talking about straightedge. (I no longer like my username, but it's the one that I have).
I'm not the 'scene hardcore girl' that you may be thinking. No black eyeliner; no stupid attitude towards others... and I don't shop at salvation army. I just don't do drugs or drink. I love music and lyrics. And I love writing music and lyrics. And a lot of the bands I like are not "straightedge" bands, they just have a good message.
So, say what you want about my writing, but I think that it is fair to not make fun of me for obeing the law in my country, and keeping myself substance-free.

no hard feelings.

super deluxe 05-17-2005 03:18 PM

[QUOTE=WhatILivefoR]I am tempted to say something about prejudices...


But, just so you know (for the future): when I made the stupid username that I have back in 03, I wasn't talking about straightedge. (I no longer like my username, but it's the one that I have).
I'm not the 'scene hardcore girl' that you may be thinking. No black eyeliner; no stupid attitude towards others... and I don't shop at salvation army. I just don't do drugs or drink. I love music and lyrics. And I love writing music and lyrics. And a lot of the bands I like are not "straightedge" bands, they just have a good message.
So, say what you want about my writing, but I think that it is fair to not make fun of me for obeing the law in my country, and keeping myself substance-free.

no hard feelings.[/QUOTE]

Yeesh, he's just joking!

pixiesfanyo 05-17-2005 03:26 PM

[QUOTE=super deluxe]Yeesh, he's just joking![/QUOTE]

Don't talke to the sXe fag.

/me joins next challenge.

toddcotham 05-17-2005 03:45 PM

Yeah...go ahead and consider me in for the next challenge. Oh and could somebody please remind me to write my song by the deadline, feed my fish and to not disappear from the challenges for 6 months. Thanks.

gaslight 05-17-2005 03:47 PM

If I enter the next challenge, is it mandatory to participate in the S&L bitc[size=2]hfights[/size]?

6945 05-17-2005 03:58 PM

As promised, May 17 here is the tally:

whatilivefor 2.00
Dfelon204409 2.50
RunAmok 2.67
6945 3.00
addicted tochaos 3.83
bowl of oranges 4.67
d0ped0g 5.00
Corupt2057 6.67
eleventeen 7.57
Kevbud 8.17

Looks like fresh blood picking the "TOPIC" word. The sharks they are a circling!

super deluxe 05-17-2005 04:30 PM

[QUOTE=gaslight]If I enter the next challenge, is it mandatory to participate in the S&L bitc[size=2]hfights[/size]?[/QUOTE]

Yes.




Bitch.

WhatILivefoR 05-17-2005 06:55 PM

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]Well voting ends at midnight tonight so you gotta wait for it.[/QUOTE]
^very true.




but oh the taste of fresh blood...



and, DFelon (and anyone else that mentioned it), I know that you were joking...

RunAmokRampant 05-18-2005 12:06 AM

dfelon - you didn't give me a score out of ten. I don't really care but im just wondering

gaslight 05-18-2005 01:24 AM

[QUOTE=super deluxe]Yes.




Bitch.[/QUOTE]

I'd argue, but she'd hit me.

:upset:

pixiesfanyo 05-18-2005 01:01 PM

Dfelon wins with a score of 2.

6945 05-18-2005 01:24 PM

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]Ya, so 6945 include kevbud's and dopedog's.[/QUOTE]

ok but first I'm going to disqualify S-daggers votes cuz he's totally biased and thats not fair to everyone who entered.

c0nart 05-18-2005 01:30 PM

<---Corupt

although he may be, his votes still count

[edit]
and I don't see the point in having prejudice as a rule because it can't be proven if one is against a certian person..

super deluxe 05-18-2005 02:48 PM

[QUOTE=6945]ok but first I'm going to disqualify S-daggers votes cuz he's totally biased and thats not fair to everyone who entered.[/QUOTE]

I'm curious about this. He gave justifications for all his votes. :confused:

pixiesfanyo 05-18-2005 05:01 PM

[QUOTE=6945]ok but first I'm going to disqualify S-daggers votes cuz he's totally biased and thats not fair to everyone who entered.[/QUOTE]

SD isn't biased in anyway.

Dfelon wins.

6945 05-18-2005 05:06 PM

Nothing you can say Pixies can change my mind. Just look at his posts not only here but any every dam forum he's in. He shows nothing but contempt for everyone save a precious few. His crits are exacatly what these challenges are NOT about. He's a throw back to Trooper if anyone here remembers that POS. We dont need him!!!

WhatILivefoR 05-18-2005 06:41 PM

I see no reason to disqualify subtledagger's votes... They are backed up with real criticism, both positive and negative. To grow as a writer, you must be able to accept both warm and cool feedback.
also, I tallied up the votes myself (I believe in the correct way...) and DFelon is the winner. I don't know if I'm "not supposed to" post the tallies that I found, but oh well... I don't know if I did them correctly; if someone has two rankings at their lowest number, do you drop both? Keep both? Drop one? I did the latter, because I wasn't sure. But I think DFelon wins. Congrats

WhatILivefoR 05-18-2005 09:07 PM

not at all...

this is what I have (dropping one lowest score for each):

final avg.......name..............all rankings
6.125........corrupt........8, 7, -, 9, 8, 5, 6, 8, 6, 1
3.75.........addicted.......4, 4, 7, 5, 1, 6, 3, 4, -, 3
4.25..........bowl............2, 5, 9, -, 6, 3, 5, 7, 2, 4
DQ..........eleventeen.....7, 9, 8, 7, 5, 9, 7, 10, 8, 9
2.5...........DFelon.........1, 3, 2, 4, -, 4, 4, 1, 1, 5
5.25........dopedog........-, 6, 3, 3, 7, 8, 9, 5, 3, 7
3.375.......runamok.......6, -, 4, 2, 4,1, 2, 3, 5, 8
8.0..........kevbud........9, 8, 6, 8, 9, 7, 8, 9, 9, -
2.875........6945...........3, 2, 5, 1, 3, -, 1, 6, 7, 2
2.875......whatilivefor....5, 1, 1, 6, 2, 2, 2, -, 4, 6

so, yeah. I'm pretty sure that's right.
that puts the list:
1 DFelon (2.5)
2 6945 and whatilivefor (2.875)
3 runamokrampant (3.375)
4 addicted tochaos (3.75)
5 bowl of oranges (4.25)
6 d0ped0g (5.25)
7 corupt (6.125)
8 kevbud (8.0)

eleventeen DQ'd


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