[QUOTE=letmypeopleho]It didn't save what I had.[/QUOTE]
audacity does for you temporarily if you are working on it, but if you close and dont save it then eyr screwed

Okay, I got done with the second chorus, so here's my ****.

[url]http://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2B7DGVIKA6XTS3P0P28W200LMC[/url]

Please critique with anything you want to say. Whether you like my vocals or not I'll take what you say into consideration.

The double tracking annoyed me in the verse, I'm sorry :(

Your voice sounds very good pitchwise, it just lacks the aggression the song needs. Try to really push through and project your voice, in the chorus you sort of mumble. You may also need ot open your mouth a little more...

I apologise for the harshness, but that's what i picked up on, i thought you were on pitch most of the time, you just need to be clearer and more aggressive...heh you can slate me when i post tomorrow :)

Oh that wasn't harsh at all. I'll definately fix the double tracking in the verse. Also after I finish the song and do touch ups on 46 & 2 I'll probably redo the chorus in this song. Right now it's not too much of a problem. Thanks clearvision you're always my best critic anyway.

IMO opinion clearvision has said it all, but really you need to fix the agresivity

WTF!?!?!? i missed 2 days and 8 pages.... anynews on lateralus (me cant record anymore) my drumtrack seems to line up pretty darn well over here, im not sure why its off.

Hey moses.. Was it you that suggested that clearvision held his mic away from his mouth to not make it clip?.. Because if you're doing that in the chorus, that would explain why it sounds kind of distant.. I would suggest finding other ways to make it stop clipping.. Unless you like the distant sound

[QUOTE=faith+1]WTF!?!?!? i missed 2 days and 8 pages.... anynews on lateralus (me cant record anymore) my drumtrack seems to line up pretty darn well over here, im not sure why its off.[/QUOTE]

Yeah, it isn't, sorry for causing a needless ruckus!

[QUOTE=Knifeboy]Hey moses.. Was it you that suggested that clearvision held his mic away from his mouth to not make it clip?.. Because if you're doing that in the chorus, that would explain why it sounds kind of distant.. I would suggest finding other ways to make it stop clipping.. Unless you like the distant sound



Yeah, it isn't, sorry for causing a needless ruckus![/QUOTE]
I did suggest that but I'm not really holding it away.

Faith check out my vocal track up there.

Oh ok, in the chorus it just sort of sounds like that

[QUOTE=PageCobain]I just saw that Morse Code thing on Toolband....It's not Morse Code.....It kinda stands for a date.

***-**--*--

***M**DD*YY
or
***D**MM*YY

It's just Blair ****ing with us.[/QUOTE]
no wonder i couldn't figure it out at all :upset:

[QUOTE=letmypeopleho]Okay, I got done with the second chorus, so here's my ****.

[url]http://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2B7DGVIKA6XTS3P0P28W200LMC[/url]

Please critique with anything you want to say. Whether you like my vocals or not I'll take what you say into consideration.[/QUOTE]
Its missing something. You're vocals are good. They are hitting the right notes. It just seems that you aren't pushing them hard enough. Try singing louder, first of all. And possibly add a little rasp? I can't think of the right word. Just make them a little more aggressive I guess.

Well it is missing bass.....

Okay. I am going to use the whammy effect on my effects processor, and start recording bass. I want more finished crap, and hey, since I have the capabilities of doing so, why not use it? :p Granted, my tone may not sound as gold as Justin's, but hey, some bottom end is better than no bottom end.

[QUOTE=letmypeopleho]Okay, I got done with the second chorus, so here's my ****.

[url]http://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2B7DGVIKA6XTS3P0P28W200LMC[/url]

Please critique with anything you want to say. Whether you like my vocals or not I'll take what you say into consideration.[/QUOTE]
I thought they were good enough to be used. . .just be more agressive and perhaps the double tracking on the verse was a lil weird but. . . tis was good

i might be able to start recording drums again. i recently joined a band, and the bass player has a mixer, and the program cubase. ill have to see if i can record some tracks next time im over there.

New Band = Time away from MX (why my posting has suddenly decreased) :upset:

There was a time where I was in three bands all doing different things in them (plus a girlfriend).

Takes alot of time, but now two of them fell through. So now I have a band and a girlfriend.

I wish I had a band.. Or a girlfriend.. But it seems that both things are impossible to acquire when you're living a crappy place like me

Where do you live ? I live in the ghetto of Milwaukee Wisconsin in America.

we practice 20+ hours a week. and are going to start playing at top 40 bars. we have already played the Pegasus and Brass mug. hopefully when we stop being lazy we will write some originals, cause top 40 drumming is all pretty bland.

lol am in 2 bands and posibly a thrid one. . .am working on a girlfriend :cool:

I live in Denmark.. In a small town where the last bus to a real city drives at 6 pm

[QUOTE=faith+1]we practice 20+ hours a week. and are going to start playing at top 40 bars. we have already played the Pegasus and Brass mug. hopefully when we stop being lazy we will write some originals, cause top 40 drumming is all pretty bland.[/QUOTE]
Sounds cool. My band has this habit of not getting together. It sucks.

wow lol poor you dude. that must suck. I live on the capital. . luckily. . .do you get concerts often from popular bands on denmark?

[QUOTE=herbtones]wow lol poor you dude. that must suck. I live on the capital. . luckily. . .do you get concerts often from popular bands on denmark?[/QUOTE]
We get awesome bands all the time, alot of metal, but no Sounds of the Underground this year.

[QUOTE=herbtones]wow lol poor you dude. that must suck. I live on the capital. . luckily. . .do you get concerts often from popular bands on denmark?[/QUOTE]

The only chance I really have to see big bands is roskilde festival.. But that does rock quite alot

tool is annoying

[QUOTE=stinkydink]tool is annoying[/QUOTE]

So's your mom

[QUOTE=stinkydink]tool is annoying[/QUOTE]
Explain.....

[QUOTE=letmypeopleho]Sounds cool. My band has this habit of not getting together. It sucks.[/QUOTE]
:cool: very fun, but would be better if our singer was better. (he has a problem of being very pitchy at times) the rest of us play together really well, and all the guys have nice gear, jobs, and cars (makes getting together much more fun and very easy)

[QUOTE=letmypeopleho]Explain.....[/QUOTE]

i dislike there music