[url]http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=03UIVVDNBQKDW3RLI4QZRUJ5OV[/url]

Another incomplete screenplay. This is Act I, Sequence I of Stare Into the Abyss, which I mentioned a few months back.

[QUOTE=Steerpike][url]http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=03UIVVDNBQKDW3RLI4QZRUJ5OV[/url]

Another incomplete screenplay. This is Act I, Sequence I of Stare Into the Abyss, which I mentioned a few months back.[/QUOTE]
I read it. Is it odd that I pictured Miles as Morgan Freeman and Sam as Brad Pitt?

[QUOTE=jpjrulestheworld]I read it. Is it odd that I pictured Miles as Morgan Freeman and Sam as Brad Pitt?[/QUOTE]

Interestingly, I actually pictured Liam Neeson and Tom Welling, respectively.

For Mayor Paul Ward and Katrina, by the way, I was thinking of Ray Liota and Jessica Alba.

[QUOTE=Steerpike]Interestingly, I actually pictured Liam Neeson and Tom Welling, respectively.

For Mayor Paul Ward and Katrina, by the way, I was thinking of Ray Liota and Jessica Alba.[/QUOTE]
Well, as soon as I read Miles I just pictured him as being black, and who better to play an experienced black detective than Morgan Freeman.

[QUOTE=jpjrulestheworld]Well, as soon as I read Miles I just pictured him as being black, and who better to play an experienced black detective than Morgan Freeman.[/QUOTE]

Hmm. It's something to think about.

Did you read the other two I put up, by the way?

[QUOTE=Steerpike]Hmm. It's something to think about.

Did you read the other two I put up, by the way?[/QUOTE]
I didn't see them. What pages are they on?

580. One's a short story, and one's an incomplete screenplay.

ATM YSI the commercial. :p

[QUOTE=Steerpike]580. One's a short story, and one's an incomplete screenplay.[/QUOTE]
I liked them both, especially the screenplay. It's a very interesting idea.

[url=http://s4.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0BLUYV6CNDZKV3AG4KS49TBVOU]Fruity Loops at it's finest[/url]

That has to be one of the funniest thing I've ever heard. :cool:

[QUOTE=Dr. Jake Destructo][url=http://s4.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0BLUYV6CNDZKV3AG4KS49TBVOU]Fruity Loops at it's finest[/url]

That has to be one of the funniest thing I've ever heard. :cool:[/QUOTE]

:eek: It says ****** at :32. Banned.

[QUOTE=madeyadams]WTF?

YSI it.


MX needs a :WTF: smiley.[/QUOTE]

/me uploads

It is so weird.

[QUOTE=jpjrulestheworld]I liked them both, especially the screenplay. It's a very interesting idea.[/QUOTE]

Anything that could be improved? The re-write process is long and grueling.

:shifty:

Erm...no!../panics

It's litter! Not ******!

/creates alt account

EDIT: [url]http://s4.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0BLUYV6CNDZKV3AG4KS49TBVOU[/url]

Just in case you guys missed it on the bottom of the last page. The last 3 posts on each page in this thread are so friggen useless. :angry: The song is a 1 minute little deal that was Chris (307) found on his computer.

[url]http://s45.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3J2SJ00WU7PDT1H8IZ7HM4PEE2[/url]

lmao you have to hear this

[QUOTE=Steerpike]Anything that could be improved? The re-write process is long and grueling.[/QUOTE]
I'm not too good with constructive criticism. Sorry :-/

I do have a question though. What exactly was Abdel a crew member on?

[QUOTE=jpjrulestheworld]I'm not too good with constructive criticism. Sorry :-/

I do have a question though. What exactly was Abdel a crew member on?[/QUOTE]

It was supposed to be a flying ship. I thought I described that somewhere in the text, but I might have forgotten to put that in in my effort to finish.

[QUOTE=Steerpike]It was supposed to be a flying ship. I thought I described that somewhere in the text, but I might have forgotten to put that in in my effort to finish.[/QUOTE]
It did mention it, but I was unsure about it. So I guess it's a futuristic story?

[QUOTE=ArrestThisMan][url]http://s45.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3J2SJ00WU7PDT1H8IZ7HM4PEE2[/url]

lmao you have to hear this[/QUOTE]

HAhahahah

"Nobody can do it like McDonalds can, Nobody else has the taste of a Big Mac, nobody has the hamburgers to keep you coming back"(random oos and ahhs harmonizing in the background)


Then the R&B version lol. All funky and broken down. The random backup singers and the clappers.

This is too funny.

Chris- Do you know where you got the commercial from?

[QUOTE=jpjrulestheworld]It did mention it, but I was unsure about it. So I guess it's a futuristic story?[/QUOTE]

More of a fantasy actually. I got the image of a sailing ship soaring over a desert while listening to Kashmir by Led Zeppelin one day and decided to write a story around it.

[QUOTE=Dr. Jake Destructo]Chris- Do you know where you got the commercial from?[/QUOTE]

My uncle sent it to me.

Anyone else's web browser come to a complete stop when its trying to load in your avatar?

[QUOTE=RippingCorpseAttack]Anyone else's web browser come to a complete stop when its trying to load in your avatar?[/QUOTE]

No.

Well, looks like I'm going to go avatarless like Corporal and FP.

[QUOTE=Steerpike][url]http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1NUVN8K4FDR8J3SEK6DCR0MDCH[/url]

A short story I wrote recently. Still haven't gotten around to the re-writes, though.[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE=Steerpike][url]http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2U0EGT58XU88J2QX4UPDM1VHP6[/url]

Incomplete screenplay. Just so you know, it's only supposed to be ten pages long when finished, and it's very surrealist.[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE=Steerpike][url]http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=03UIVVDNBQKDW3RLI4QZRUJ5OV[/url]

Another incomplete screenplay. This is Act I, Sequence I of Stare Into the Abyss, which I mentioned a few months back.[/QUOTE]

I'm not giving up yet. I've heard on numerous occassions "Oh you're a writer? Why don't you post some of your work?" Now I finally get off my lazy [size=2]a[/size]ss and decide to get over the dread that comes with having other people read your work, and only two people show interest.

If nothing else though, I'm stubborn. You clowns won't be rid of my shameless self-promoting so easily.

So, new server, hey?

Looks good.

Alex, I'll definitely look into your shameless self-promotion soon.

[QUOTE=madeyadams]So. Exciting news. My brother works for a computer retail place called CompUSA, and he might be able to get me a job there as a cashier! Yay! Easy summer job.[/QUOTE]

CompUSA?
Exciting?

:amaze:

Yea, making fun of nerds is always fun.

You should try and seduce them just to make their lives more exciting.

Starting tomorrow, I work the graveyard shift doing overnight stocking at Target. This should be interesting.

/Doesn't plan on getting a job

/Realizes that his terrible employee behavior is his own fault

Is the pay any good?

I am such a lazy hippie. Instead of getting a real job, I'm going to do a lot of little one-time jobs. Like for example, Thursday night I am getting paid 75 dollars to do a survery about driving a Ford. :)

work sucks, being a photographer is like not working at all, you just have to take pictures and the film part is done by other employes.

Can anyone tell me a good site for metal band's tour dates? Please.

[QUOTE=madey]Ray: That's cause you're black. 'nuff said. rite?[/QUOTE]

Um...sure.

The real reason is that A) I have minimal tolerance for people I think I am smarter than (and in a retail store/grocery store, that would be just about everyone in the store) and B) I can't force myself into doing menial work (which is just about everything in a retail store/grocery store)

[QUOTE=madeyadams]I don't know, I just mentioned it to him tonight. Hopefully it'll be more than minimum wage (which is $7.35 here), but I dunno. I'd be happy with that, I'm so poor.

Yeah, you are a hippy. Hippies are gay. Get a real job Chris, or I won't talk to you.[/QUOTE]


:(

What's wrong with filling out surveys for a living?

[QUOTE=ArrestThisMan]:(

What's wrong with filling out surveys for a living?[/QUOTE]

That's basically on the same level as being a sperm donor. In other words, it screams "I'm desperate for cash!"

Meh, it's easy money.

[QUOTE=madeyadams]No one likes hippies.[/QUOTE]

why? they aren't as annoying as rappers

[QUOTE=heavy metal kid]why? they aren't as annoying as rappers[/QUOTE]

And rappers aren't as annoying as close-minded faggy metalheads