i uploaded that carbonized album awhile back

[QUOTE=Hbp;15572058]large bundle of sticks, plz stop gloating about your gay scene fag vocals in your gay scene fag bands that people on the forums really think suck but are nice to you about anyway.[/QUOTE]

[url]http://www.myspace.com/paraphiliasoontochange[/url]

How the **** is that scene in any way? This discussion started when I asked somebody who lives near me if they wanted to come to my band's show. OMG.

^Tell me what you think of my song nao mappy.

[url]http://www.mediafire.com/?eubbdxwmxmu[/url]

It's decent, could use a little bit more variation at some points, but the breakdown type part at the end was awesome.

It's unfinished :p

I don't know what you mean "variation" though, I don't want it to be forgettable like that Paraphilia song. :p

Hahaha. :(

I just thought the opening riff ran on a bit too many times. If you shortened that part i think it would sound better for some reason.

Ah.

Well, with vocals, it probably will not sound so repetitive.

Plus, the beginning is very much grindcore, which can have that sort of sound.

Also, I think it's an awesome riff, and will probably lead out the song as well. :p

Sorry about the Paraphilia dig.

If you would like to read the lyrics I have written (I know I'm really whoring myself) I'll post them here too.

Alle ist gut mang.

Read edit.

Sure post away.

"Raze the Rays of Blackened Days"

Black are your rays
As are the hearts of those you shine upon
Bring me death, oh rotting sun
So I may gain eternal darkness
Let me float through the veil of the frozen continuum
Rather than face your blistering fire
Thank you for complying
I am gone
Subconscious dissolution
Of my soul

i liked the song, luc

[QUOTE=Invicta_Veritas;15572872]Therion is boring[/QUOTE]

ITT: BRA verges on a perma-ban.

[QUOTE=Luc214;15573587]"Raze the Rays of Blackened Days"

Black are your rays
As are the hearts of those you shine upon
Bring me death, oh rotting sun
So I may gain eternal darkness
Let me float through the veil of the frozen continuum
Rather than face your blistering fire
Thank you for complying
I am gone
Subconscious dissolution
Of my soul[/QUOTE]

With these types of lyrics, you really have to give an indication of their timing and delivery. To my eyes, these are somewhat childish, but have potential. However, to my ears they could be exactly what the song needed.

Also, the title is really unwieldy. You need to lose either the "raze" or "rays".

[QUOTE=Hbp;15572058]large bundle of sticks, plz stop gloating about your gay scene fag vocals in your gay scene fag bands that people on the forums really think suck but are nice to you about anyway.[/QUOTE]

you're so ****ing stupid and immature, his band is actually pretty good.

They could really use a default pic change though, it makes me giggle every time I see it :lol:

lol

Who was it that said Obscura was hard to get into?

Everyone I think.

I actually got into Obscura right when I was getting into dm, if we're talking about the Gorguts album.

it wasn't hard to get into
it just sucks

[QUOTE=Eliminator;15574612]it wasn't hard to get into
it just sucks[/QUOTE]

Yeah

Obscura is easy to get into for some I guess, I just dislike it. :p

[QUOTE=Ghoul Hunter;15574614]Yeah[/QUOTE]

I like it, f u.

Obscura sucks.

[QUOTE=Riva;15574076]With these types of lyrics, you really have to give an indication of their timing and delivery. To my eyes, these are somewhat childish, but have potential. However, to my ears they could be exactly what the song needed.[/quote]

True. I haven't "converted" it from a poem to lyrics yet.

Childish, maybe. It was written around the emotion of bitterness.

[quote]Also, the title is really unwieldy. You need to lose either the "raze" or "rays".[/QUOTE]

Eh, I thought it was clever. :-\

Morbid melody for the deceased with salt to taste btw.

[QUOTE=Riva;15574076]ITT: BRA verges on a perma-ban.



With these types of lyrics, you really have to give an indication of their timing and delivery. To my eyes, these are somewhat childish, but have potential. However, to my ears they could be exactly what the song needed.

Also, the title is really unwieldy. You need to lose either the "raze" or "rays".[/QUOTE]
agreed on both points. the lyrics have potential, i think they need a bit of tweaking though. the song was pretty good. i like the riff towards the end.
and BRA is retarded.

Who's BRA?

Has anybody heard the new Despised Icon, it's absolutely sick.

Invicta Veritas, aka Behemoth Rules All.
never heard, might check it out.
i like Obscura.

The drummer's seriously so insane, and the singers are so brutal.

Ugh, Despised Icon is really bad. I don't think you'll find many fans of them here.

How are they bad? Listen to In The Arms Of Perdition, that song is so brutal. The mix of the metal guy and the hardcore guy is so original, it's awesome.

What about The Faceless and Knights Of The Abyss, you must admit they're pretty sick. And both of them have an old Job For A Cowboy drummer.