Tojes flies a rofflecopter to work. I'm returning some crits I owe, remind me now if you need one.

There's a LOT to crit this days, but there are about 0 replies worth reading, and it's a waste of energies making a good, proper critique.

What happened to that week when there were a lot of crits? :(

And no, I go to skool in in Roflerskates.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]Tojes flies a rofflecopter to work. I'm returning some crits I owe, remind me now if you need one.[/QUOTE]

I can't remember if you returned one of mine from ages ago or not. My last one was Aquamarine Dreams if you can find it and find it worth a crit.

And Tojes: I've been lazy because i've been writing a lot of songs for my "band". I'll be critiquing good and proper soonish, just have to get some stuff finished first. :thumb:

I have just skipped so many songs because they are really lame, and they tend to go really way odd... And I have like a thousand projects for Chemistry, Physics, Math, Psycology... Freaking school.

I've been lazy lately too.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]Tojes flies a rofflecopter to work. I'm returning some crits I owe, remind me now if you need one.[/QUOTE]
/points at self

I'm wondiering, have their even bee rap lyrics in here, that you could tell were rap, that were good? I'm listening to Aesop Rock so I need to know.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]I have just skipped so many songs because they are really lame, and they tend to go really way odd... And I have like a thousand projects for Chemistry, Physics, Math, Psycology... Freaking school.

I've been lazy lately too.[/QUOTE]

I've got uni work, but not so much that i actually have to do it just yet :p

The music stuff is more of a priority just now. Really need to get it done and then audition band members. I've been lazy with practicing guitar recently also. Barely picked it up lately and that's crazy for me when i usually practice several hours a day and play whenever i'm sitting down for more than a minute.

[QUOTE=Dancin' Man]/points at self

I'm wondiering, have their even bee rap lyrics in here, that you could tell were rap, that were good? I'm listening to Aesop Rock so I need to know.[/QUOTE]

Ther were two different guys who wrote rap lyrics but i can't remember teir usernames now...

One was good, the other sucked the big one.

[QUOTE=Dancin' Man]/points at self

I'm wondiering, have their even bee rap lyrics in here, that you could tell were rap, that were good? I'm listening to Aesop Rock so I need to know.[/QUOTE]

113 wrote some pretty good rap lyrics.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]113 wrote some pretty good rap lyrics.[/QUOTE]

That was his name!

That's been bugging me. :thumb:

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]I've got uni work, but not so much that i actually have to do it just yet :p

The music stuff is more of a priority just now. Really need to get it done and then audition band members. I've been lazy with practicing guitar recently also. Barely picked it up lately and that's crazy for me when i usually practice several hours a day and play whenever i'm sitting down for more than a minute.[/QUOTE]
Ha, that happens quite often. I'm not even playing and I have my guitar in my lap. it's soothing, I guess.

And yeah I saw some rap lyrics... But I baffled one because it was something like

[QUOTE=Creepy guy]
Yo' man
get the bithcis undresed
playin hos and pimps
with tittes 2 suk

yeah boy
[/QUOTE]

or something like that... Crap, it sucked big monkeys sweaty balls.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]Ha, that happens quite often. I'm not even playing and I have my guitar in my lap. it's soothing, I guess.

And yeah I saw some rap lyrics... But I baffled one because it was something like



or something like that... Crap, it sucked big monkeys sweaty balls.[/QUOTE]

I listen to rap amongst everything else, and 113's stuff was pretty decent IMO. There have been one or two others who post some good rap stuff, but there aren't many who solely write rap on here.

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]I listen to rap amongst everything else, and 113's stuff was pretty decent IMO. There have been one or two others who post some good rap stuff, but there aren't many who solely write rap on here.[/QUOTE]

Yeah, there were som lyrics that were just so bad I told the kid to get out and die... Maybe he followed my advice. Hopefully not.

Anyhow, Isn't it weird that I get from google Ads, stuff abou hello kitty? wtf. My avatar must be the one to blame.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]Yeah, there were som lyrics that were just so bad I told the kid to get out and die... Maybe he followed my advice. Hopefully not.

Anyhow, Isn't it weird that I get from google Ads, stuff abou hello kitty? wtf. My avatar must be the one to blame.[/QUOTE]

:lol:

I meant to mention that a few posts ago. :thumb:

Tojes, I'm not sure I approve of this new Avatar.

113 wrote good rap lyrics, especially as he was exclusively rap. /late

It was definitely nice to have that variety on the forums, plus he gave pretty decent crits. Oh well.

/goes back to lurking

I've been listening to The Beloved a lot recently. The Running EP has such good screaming. Any thoughts?

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]I've been listening to The Beloved a lot recently. The Running EP has such good screaming. Any thoughts?[/QUOTE]

What kind of band are they? I 've never heard of them.

The broke up a while ago, but I believe you could consider them metalcore.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]The broke up a while ago, but I believe you could consider them metalcore.[/QUOTE]

Ah. In that case i may try to *ahem* get them. :D

Alrighty guys, I lost your respect b/c of Micheal Jackson Tribute, but now I am back, And I got something new. Come on, Check it out for me! If its trash fine tell me, and I will give up. Just let me know ok? ~Jade

[QUOTE=jade858907]Alrighty guys, I lost your respect b/c of Micheal Jackson Tribute, but now I am back, And I got something new. Come on, Check it out for me! If its trash fine tell me, and I will give up. Just let me know ok? ~Jade[/QUOTE]
Alright. I'll try and trust you.

I didn't know you were... a girl?

Hello thread.

I owe atabner a crit, which I will be doing after this post (assuming there is nothing outstandingly interesting in the main forum when I leave this thread), and dubious steve (or whatever his name is... I forget) is also owed a critique.

After that, I may write something - I've had a few good lines floating round this week.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]Alright. I'll try and trust you.

I didn't know you were... a girl?[/QUOTE]

Yes, I am a girl... And thank you,

Dammit Subtle, he was about to crit mine! :lol:

He was also a moron.

I banned him for flaming FF by the way.

I doubt his critique would've been of any use to you anyways EM.

I'm not really bothered. It was just comedy timing. :D

APS, i'll be doing your piece tomorrow :thumb:

*comedic

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]I'm not really bothered. It was just comedy timing. :D

APS, i'll be doing your piece tomorrow :thumb:[/QUOTE]

I would've said ER, but I didn't want NBC on my buttocks.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]I would've said ER, but I didn't want NBC on my buttocks.[/QUOTE]

:lol:

Em makes me sound like eminem. F[SIZE=2]u[/SIZE]ck that.

Suble: I'd venture that both comedy and comedic are correct, but i might be wrong.

Comedy is a noun. Comedic is an adjective.

So yes, you would. >:|

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Comedy is a noun. Comedic is an adjective.

So yes, you would. >:|[/QUOTE]

So i lie sometimes :-/

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]So i am really an orangutan :-/[/QUOTE]

Yes.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]Yes.[/QUOTE]

Play nice. It isn't the pit :p

I messed up, but considering it was way too early in the morning i think you should let it slide. Your post also reminds me i've to crit your piece. I will get round to it in the next day or so.

Unless you don't want crits from monkeys...

Edit: i'm fully expecing you to point out that it's an ape.

I am a baNANa!

Tuesdays coming did you bring your coat?

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]I am a baNANa![/QUOTE]

Are you trying to say that you are a fruit? :p

Refer to Rejected by Bitter Films.

So.... sup thread. I've been writing soem decent stuff, but my computer and internet are conspiring against me, acting gay and not letting me do a lot. I'm at a friend's right now.


yeah.

well you'd better post that stuff sooner or later *shakes fist at you* ;)