[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18649153]you're jealous of my limber bod[/QUOTE]


ura F___A___G___G___O___T

i see you're jelly too

jelly hayder

[QUOTE=adbforever;18649086][url]http://soundcloud.com/carbonizedicon/incubation-to-onset[/url][/QUOTE]

as much as ppl have been hatin on this, I actually thought it may be not that bad.

I was wrong.

props for effort tho.

thanks

"effort"

[QUOTE=adbforever;18648994]you must be legally retarded then.


[/QUOTE]


loooooooool

haz posts mockery of a review on sputnikmusic.com

not many people read it

[I]all that publicity[/I]

[quote]how does this matter at all? His music is completely generic osdm [/quote]

it matters a lot because his music doesnt fucking suck

[quote]
wait a fucking second here, the pretentious hipsters at sputnik music don't like slam death metal?!!?!? This thread is proving to be quite the revelation. Go back to listening to and creating god-awful "crust" or whatever the fuck you call the talentless music you play dude.[/quote]

hahaha

I'M NOT BUTTHURT IVE JUST BEEN TROLLING U GUYS FOR YEARS

[I]go back to listening to and creating god-awful "crust" or whatever the fuck you call the talentless music you play dude[/I]

guess you aussies have never heard the phrase "any publicity is good publicity" LOL

and ya, the music you've posted is really boring and repetitive.

lol oh realy i didnt kno that do continue

this guy is gonna have the best memoirs ever

cheers for the positive comments guys, and lol at the last 10 pages or so.

the stuff on our soundcloud was recorded prior to me joining the band, but we're aiming to get four new tracks recorded and online by the end of the year, with the fourth album out sometime next year.

[QUOTE=adb]and it's sci-fi bro. You know? Fiction.[/QUOTE]WHOAAA

fiction's gay LOOK AT ME IM CAUGHT UP IN AN IMAGINARY UNIVERSE

[I]nothing I say contradicts anything else I say[/I]

reading and watching fiction sux

writing it is cool

maybe it you did the first two more often you would have a clue about what you are doing wrong

GORE, not CORE

[IMG]http://bridgetsbooks.files.wordpress.com/2011/08/christine.jpg[/IMG]

took me ages to finish that book

[QUOTE=Brew;18648524]just created a soundcloud page for the death metal band I recently joined

[URL]http://soundcloud.com/cachexic[/URL][/QUOTE]

K, giving this a proper listen now.

I really like Devil Reborn. Especially the part at 1:22. It's a nice break from the chugging. It flows nicely from riff to riff. The other tracks didn't really do much for me, though. :\

[QUOTE=adbforever;18648811]the greatest irony is you guys complain about my music not having good production then say this is stuff is good.

Brew's band has flat tone and the snare sounds like ass. The vocalist is better than me though.[/QUOTE]

I just don't really like the random transitions often found in the type of dm of the gnawing mandibles album and the guitar tone just kinda kills it. Also, the drums need some EQ-ing to settle in the mix better. I think some EQ-ing would make the whole thing sound that much better.





Also, pointing out that some other band makes music that isn't mindblowingly innovative doesn't make your music any better. No, OSDM generally isn't very innovative, but if it well executed and has the right feel, it's good DM.

[QUOTE=Haz;18649241]maybe it you did the first two more often you would have a clue about what you are doing wrong[/QUOTE]

ahahah srsly

I don't know how anyone could possibly try their hand at an art they see no value in being an audience for

I disagree, tbh. In fact, I think the pursuit of creating art is most pure when it's done for its own sake, and not with pleasing an audience in mind.

[QUOTE=Morumbar;18649286]I disagree, tbh. In fact, I think the pursuit of creating art is most pure when it's done for its own sake, and not with pleasing an audience in mind.[/QUOTE]

Well that's not quite what I was arguing against.

If Brent claims immersing yourself in a world is for retards and mocks people for enjoying fictional creations, i'm not sure why he would see any value in using his limited creative output to regurgitate his own.

I feel you must be encultured to a degree in an artistic pursuit to have at least a vague conception of how you personally receive and interpret the work of others, if you are going to make any attempt at carving out your own niche even if it is ultimately a self-satisfying endeavor. Otherwise, you consider the medium completely worthless apart from your own dreadful output and demonstrate zero respect for yourself by not understanding how to competently use the tools you have to make something that has a level of sophistication to it. Otherwise, it smacks of putting no effort in or having an inability to do better.

In this case, Brent is presenting a fictional story. It's full of plot holes, it's full of big words that make no sense in their placement, it's full of misleading, ambiguous descriptions. I tried to weed out a simple timeline from the text, but he claimed it was all wrong, wrong, wrong, we were all stupid, stupid, stupid. What this tells me is that he has a strong concept and fleshed out progression of events in his mind, but the words he has written [B][U]do not adequately describe what he is trying to get across[/U][/B]. He argues this is due to poor reading comprehension on our part, but fact is he has no understanding of how on the most base level possible the audience receives a story and the respect you must pay to language and how we use it to set the scene, convey meaning, and avoid distorted communication.

If you don't have an understanding of where you are coming from, you don't know where you are going. Brent shuns fiction, writes it, and is genuinely shocked when nobody has a clue wtf he is talking about.

Ah, okay. I misunderstood what you were saying then. Yeah, I agree with that.

see, if I had written what I was trying to get across adequately in the first place I would never have needed to write all that to clarify my original meaning

Brent, pay attention

that was a pretty terribly written post tho

ioi

Luke loves it too. The very fact that we know it's not a serious post, but just something we did for fun. We don't give a shit if anyone likes it but enjoy the negative press.

Like really, do you actually think a post with all improvised messages written on a desktop computer by a complete idiot is serious?

So to answer every faggot who's asked: No, it's not serious. I wrote a post with my friend because it was entertaining and we liked it.

luke was telling me this crazy story the other day i had such a laff

have you done things with luke ??

i heard luke is p whitebread

find it amusing my vox made brent l-o-l.

not enough reverb

whos luke is he a new mxer

brent's partner in crime

im luke i admit it

plow, you are entering mappy level's of thick-headedness. I cannot grasp how utterly try-hard you've been and continue to be :lol: You have taken my motives and dissected them to the point where it's literally hilarious - not only because every opinion you've just posted is awful, but the mere fact you've taken the amount of time to attempt to shoot me down is just incredilbly pititful.

I think you're also hitting mappy-levels of obsession.

You still cannot grasp my half-seriousness in my making fun of fiction. I don't have the attention span to read books or watch movies. I have the attention span to write them myself because it's a decent way to kill time. Art is so much more fun if you do it yourself, who the fuck cares if I have minimal influence? Do you think I give a shit? You're so butthurt, I never thought me posting my lyrics would cause this, but in hindsight...I should have known you would have...because of Drifting Icon.

If you cannot comprehend my story after I've completely answered all of your idiotic interpretations....then lol

[QUOTE] but the words he has written do not adequately describe what he is trying to get across.[/QUOTE]

:lol: you're being a little bitch :lol:

Sorry my story isn't completely straight-forward, if you ever have ANY issues with any lyric, I'll explain it. Take my death metal lyrics more seriously!

[QUOTE]find it amusing my vox made brent l-o-[/QUOTE]

I really don't know how you hit those high notes dude.

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here's the thing - plow puts in the effort and he actually is being hilarious

hxc, you're on the cusp of not even being worthy of the time to respond because youre the complete opposite. Like, holy shit how could somebody be that unfunny.

anyway, getting back to the lyrics issue, I really enjoy how nobody finds mappys lyrics atrocious or brews band (which seemed to be some cliche lyrics about demons/hell).

Nobody really minds, but everyone has so much rage built up toward me they have to let it all out via this thread.

It's the best of both worlds - I made an album I am content with, and have at the same time created butthurt that has exceeded new thresholds

ya we're trying to make u laugh

way 2 evaluate the sitch

yeah adbs writing is seriously flawed its like a half ass instruction manual backstory to a 90s console game for a shitty movie of a moderately okay book