adb is a lot like a grilled cheese sandwich he's grilled and a litttle too cheeesey haha!

:lol:

just like his stand-up, noon gets sympathy laughs from the crowd :/

I had to pause it to listen to something else but I'll get back to it

OK, I'll try to be nice:

I legit liked, maybe two riffs, but that's because I'm a dumb redneck.

The mix sounds like a dog shit onto a pile of horse shit, but if that's the effect you were going for, I respect that.

Your vox aren't terrible, per se, but they are weak in some areas. Keep practicing and you'll be at Mappy's level in no time.

I don't like the rain at the end. Perhaps go for a weather phenomenon sample that's less-used in heavy music. Like, say, sample a fucking hurricane and the cries of old people watching their homes get ripped apart by motherfuckingnature. I would guess that's more "slam" then piddle-paddles of rain. But, again, if it's suspense you're building up towards another track, more power to you.

I can't hear the drums, oh god where are the drums

Guitarist needs to tune his guitar, also needs more sweeps in between "juns".

Hope you take this to heart and don't get mad, bro :(

yeah use a different weather like a sunshine sample in your metal

[quote=(*the noonward race*);18649105]yeah use a different weather like a sunshine sample in your metal[/quote]

not slam enough

dude man turn durn the siunshine i cant hear the bass

id sample clouds but i dont wanna get sued......... :upset:

I legit want hurricane samples.

Also sleet samples. sleet is pretty slam

it's the last song on the album, It's building up to the next album I guess

[QUOTE=adbforever;18649110]it's the last song on the album, It's building up to the next album I guess[/QUOTE]

too deep, heart exploded

does it rain on that planet what is the atmosphere made of

Planet Slam only has one atmosphere.

icon is a cool word

[QUOTE=nodding;18649112]does it rain on that planet what is the atmosphere made of[/QUOTE]

acid rain actually. the aliens live underground though so they dont fukken care

this is what I got so far:

Clashing plasma disturbing the silent sky
Peaking sound waves erupting like gunfire
Acidic downpours flooding, ingesting what has grown
Uninhabitable lands decimated by tumultuous conditions
Slowly but mercilessly eating away into the mantles
Down below the fortress intact, shielding the inevitable
Systematic pulses driving toward carbonization
As one process ends, the other remains continuous
Seasonal modification giving way to respite of scorching
Inquisitive humans lured by their imperial nature
Coincidental timing fueling communication
A brief window of opportunity facilitating reconnaissance
Teams gathered to investigate, braced for opposition
Scientists escorted by flanking squadrons
Touching down conspicuously in a single cruiser
No threat of resistance, corroded landscapes
Navigating barren earth on an uncharted planet
A single translucent archway the only sight
All units converged to examine, immaculate opportunity for ambush
Forming a circle, invisible guardians pounce
Stealth brutality
Carving up the unaware, slashing limbs, spearing flesh
Soldiers entering mounted chain guns decapitated
Before pulling triggers a disconnection of skull and spine
The rest of their motionless bodies still standing in the hatch
Others firing bursts of ammo at thin air in desperation are clawed and ripped apart
The unarmored lasting seconds longer, simple swipes before they die
Muffled comm lines falling upon terrified Intel
Hearing only agonizing screams before silence
Introduction phase – first steps in retrieval complete without hitch
Leaving behind their first taste of combat
Knights kick aside chunks of flesh and enter the arch
Coordinates set for return to core

what the fuck does shielding the inevitable mean?

Quit the whole marketing thing and get a job making C movies for Mexican scifi channel or something, it's your destiny.

those have to be the worst lyrics ever :lol:

tl;dr

[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18649123]what the fuck does shielding the inevitable mean?[/QUOTE]

the acid rain is eating away the layers of earth. It's inevitable that it will eventually melt into the core where the aliens dwell so they built a shield thingy :thumb:

[size="7"][font="system"][color="cyan"]stealth brutality[/color][/font][/size]

earths gore not core

lmao mexican scifi

[QUOTE=adbforever;18649128]the acid rain is eating away the layers of earth. It's inevitable that it will eventually melt into the core where the aliens dwell so they built a shield thingy :thumb:[/QUOTE]

oh, so you mean "shielding [I]from[/I] the inevitible"

and that's not how acid rain works you fucking idiot, look at venus

nah.

and it's sci-fi bro. You know? Fiction.
[QUOTE=Angmar;18649129][size="7"][font="system"][color="cyan"]stealth brutality[/color][/font][/size][/QUOTE]

indeed, I took that line out because it sounds quite funny then took it out then put it back. This is just a rough draft :thumb:

this is pure acid in rain form lol DUMBASS :thumb:

this guy will cut your face off but you wouldnt notice it until it's too late!

hey guys wanna hear my band though

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cIFU6jFwjro

thsi just a rough video demo lol

shit dude, you guys are tight.

You know how hard it is to hop in place like that? That's some 4th grade P.E. shit, bro!

dat production

I could hate step so much harder than you bro.

[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18649144]I could hate step so much harder than you bro.[/QUOTE]

Yeah but could you touch your toes when you bend over

i touch my toes when i do high kicks in the pit

That's cheating. Cheater cheaterton

you're jealous of my limber bod

I really am :/