yeah Burt looks like Matt Bellamy from Muse, too. We all know Burt likes to cry to Bright Eyes and attempts to sing like Matt in secret, though.

I've been told I look like a lot of people. Rarely singers though, usually like Orlando Bloom or Tom Cruise or something.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]I've been told I look like a lot of people. Rarely singers though, usually like Orlando Bloom or Tom Cruise or something.[/QUOTE]

Subtle the modest mod :p

Can i also have a few pointers on my piece from you ?

thanks

man i'd hate to look like Orlando Bloom... mainly because so many chicks find him hot, and he doesnt have anything masculine about him

plus, what's with him and his bow! ****ing grab a sword and chop some heads off you little *****. Man it must be easy to kill people from a safe distance, you fag. Sure you got aim, but you aint exactly risking your life.

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]man i'd hate to look like Orlando Bloom... mainly because so many chicks find him hot, and he doesnt have anything masculine about him

plus, what's with him and his bow! ****ing grab a sword and chop some heads off you little *****. Man it must be easy to kill people from a safe distance, you fag. Sure you got aim, but you aint exactly risking your life.[/QUOTE]
His name is the same as mine. But I'm not as hot as he is.

I wish I were hot. :upset:

Or at least write something good sometime.

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]man i'd hate to look like Orlando Bloom... mainly because so many chicks find him hot, and he doesnt have anything masculine about him

[B]plus, what's with him and his bow! ****ing grab a sword and chop some heads off you little *****. Man it must be easy to kill people from a safe distance, you fag. Sure you got aim, but you aint exactly risking your life.[/B][/QUOTE]

:lol: :lol:

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom2]Subtle the modest mod :p

Can i also have a few pointers on my piece from you ?

thanks[/QUOTE]
I thought every area where something was in italics came off as melodramatic/annoyingly angsty. The ending line is also really really bad.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]I thought every area where something was in italics came off as melodramatic/annoyingly angsty. The ending line is also really really bad.[/QUOTE]

I meant those lines thto come across as venomously emphasised but i get what you mean. The last line is something most people that critiqued it in the main forum picked up on and it's the first thing i'll be changing.

Thank you.

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]man i'd hate to look like Orlando Bloom... mainly because so many chicks find him hot, and he doesnt have anything masculine about him

plus, what's with him and his bow! ****ing grab a sword and chop some heads off you little *****. Man it must be easy to kill people from a safe distance, you fag. Sure you got aim, but you aint exactly risking your life.[/QUOTE]

I'm such a nerd for saying this, but it's a book. Plus in the third movie (which I've only seen one time), he climbs those elephant things.

"First off, your use of rhyme is not becoming of you."

Dancin' Man wrote this about my lyrics... See, I'm not English-speaking. So while it doesn't show in vocabulary, I can't understand some of your expressions and sentence subtlenesses.

To cut it short: what does he mean? I don't have a clue.

You suck at rhyming. :D

:-*

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger] or Tom Cruise or something.[/QUOTE]


That has a lot more to do with your scientology and desire to stick people half your age.

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]man i'd hate to look like Orlando Bloom... mainly because so many chicks find him hot, and he doesnt have anything masculine about him

plus, what's with him and his bow! ****ing grab a sword and chop some heads off you little *****. Man it must be easy to kill people from a safe distance, you fag. Sure you got aim, but you aint exactly risking your life.[/QUOTE]

Wow...I forgot how lame these threads were....

[QUOTE=super deluxe]That has a lot more to do with your scientology and desire to stick people half your age.[/QUOTE]
I hate scientology and half my age is nine and a half.

So you were half right.

[QUOTE=A_Perfect_Sonnet]I'm such a nerd for saying this, but it's a book. Plus in the third movie (which I've only seen one time), he climbs those elephant things.[/QUOTE]

yeah i know its a book and he's just playing a part... but trust him to be the fag elf that has to shoot a ***** arrow at someone rather than being a man and driving cold steel through their bodies and tearing them apart. Just like in Troy, when he sees archilles and brad pitt starts walking towards him while hes shooting him in the ****ing chest with arrows... what a ***** way to take someone down, its hardly dramatic. Brad Pitt is just like "yeah man, its gonna take more of those to get me on the ground... fagg0t".

i'll stop ranting about my hatred for orlando bloom now... but i cant think of something else worth talking about

[QUOTE=d0ped0g]yeah i know its a book and he's just playing a part... but trust him to be the fag elf that has to shoot a ***** arrow at someone rather than being a man and driving cold steel through their bodies and tearing them apart. Just like in Troy, when he sees archilles and brad pitt starts walking towards him while hes shooting him in the ****ing chest with arrows... what a ***** way to take someone down, its hardly dramatic. Brad Pitt is just like "yeah man, its gonna take more of those to get me on the ground... fagg0t".

i'll stop ranting about my hatred for orlando bloom now... but i cant think of something else worth talking about[/QUOTE]

Ur juzt m@d cuz hes k00lr n hOTT3r den uuuu LOLZ!!!

Lowest scores are dropped and noted.

-1up!- - DQ'd.
EmergencyRoom - 6 4 5 7 6 7 (8) ; 35/6 = 5.83
TojesDolan - 8 7 8 2 (10) 9 10 ; 46/6 = 7.66
Lowridden - 3 3 4 4 (5) 5 2 ; 21/6 = 3.5
d0ped0g - DQ'd.
bowl of oranges - DQ'd.
WhatILiveFor - (10) 7 9 10 6 8 4 ; 44/6 = 7.33
SubtleDagger - 1 2 1 1 (3) 3 1 ; 9/6 = 1.5
ATC - 4 5 (10) 5 9 10 5 ; 38/6 = 6.33
pixiesfanyo - 5 (10) 4 10 2 3 1 ; 25/6 = 4.16
Dancin' Man - (9) 3 6 7 8 2 6 ; 32/6 = 5.33

1. SubtleDagger
2. Lowridden
3. pixiesfanyo
4. Dancin' Man
5. EmergencyRoom
6. ATC
7. WhatILiveFor
8. TojesDolan

I'll have the next challenge up soon. -1up!-, d0ped0g, and bowl of oranges are disqualified from entering the next challenge.

Hey, second place. Not bad. Thanks all.

No problem. You actually did very well, stick around for a while.

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]Says the person who consistently got voted worst writer in all the challenges (s)he entered.[/QUOTE]

I resent that....

btw ya i figured that out and i decided to make that a secondary goal and work on becoming a producer. I guess I'm batter at that cuz I have a label. Funny how things turn out.

Ugh, shut up. Post in the new thread. Also, no one gives a crap about your "label".