Greetings, World. I'm new at this whole posting idea, so if I do anything wrong, I'd appreciate being told... I read the rules and everything, but I'm still convinced I must have done something wrong...

And by the way, SubtleDaggers, I've read alot of your work, it's awesome... How long have you been writing lyrics for?

Well the first thing you did wrong is...no sucking up ;)

[QUOTE=JaveryAM]And by the way, SubtleDaggers, I've read alot of your work, it's awesome... How long have you been writing lyrics for?[/QUOTE]
I have no idea how to answer this.

Oh, I'm not sucking up, BBB, I'm just saying it. I read his essence entry and I enjoyed it. I also saw his entry for mordant or whatever it might have been. But How long have you been writing SD?
Years? Months? etc etc...

I hope that makes it easier... If not, I dont know. I've only been writing for half a year..
I still have a lot of work to do..

Don't double post.

I've been writing here for like a year and a half.

Happy birthday, Dfelon.

Happy birthday to you, Dfelon!
* Hands you a blood covered rose... A blood covered rose of doom.*

Oh, boy, it's been a long time since I've been in a lyrical challenge. Hope you enjoy mine, I can already say I enjoy many of yours. :thumb:

looks like i won't be entering. a little uninspired this time around.

Good God....who let the n00bs out for this challenge. SD look what they've done to your topic word!!!

[QUOTE=Bigbadbob]Good God....who let the n00bs out for this challenge. SD look what they've done to your topic word!!![/QUOTE]

Tragic, really.

I just started a new job and moved to a new apartment, so I didn't have time to enter. But I may decide to do some snarky crits...

[QUOTE=Bigbadbob]Good God....who let the n00bs out for this challenge. SD look what they've done to your topic word!!![/QUOTE]
Ah well. We still got some good songs out of it.

Your crits are some of the best I've seen on the site by the way.

[QUOTE=yay4beingbanned]wow, this thread sure did die down after we left...what happened to all the threatening posts, diragitive arguments, pointless critics, and odd side conversations?[/QUOTE]
You see why I banned you guys now?

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]You see why I banned you guys now?[/QUOTE]
yeah that cleaning house helped everyone stay on topic in this thread the way it should be.. anyways good luck to you guys and your peices

Please, don't whoop. This isn't the Arsenio Hall Show.

Benny Hill !!

no one seems to be voting on the challenge... we only have like... 3 of em right now

oh... i got them in as fast as possible in fear of getting grounded off the pc for a week or something... then id get DQed for not voting or something

just a note to RunAmokRampant: The format style I used to write my "Sonnet" is actually inspired from an ee cummings sonnet entitled "next to of course god america i"
where the rhyming scheme is [I]abab cdcd efg efg[/I] and there isn't a set 10 syllables per line, and also the use of satire... Anyways. I'll be getting to the voting later. :)

alright then, thanks WhatIliveFor, I'll take note of that. I guess I have been studying Shakespeare for too long.

Just a note on my song, people once again are lost on my song. The message is simple: When you don't stop to help others and speed off, then when you are stuck what are you going to do because no one is going to stop for you.

[QUOTE=JaveryAM]
2. "DEATH, DRUGS, POWER."
i guess i just thought there was a different meaning to the song, but after this part, the song seemed to turn to a different topic. It had a different texture to it. (if youre following me)
[/QUOTE]

yeh the song is not really ment to be about the poverty and their hard lives, its about the fights itself, they fight for a monopoly on drugs trade in their area.
actually to be really fair, what is there is just a rough idea. I'm touring through belgium and holland at the moment but there was no pen to be found on the bus so i just put it on the thread when i was in an internet cafe so i could go through it and improve bits everytime i managed to find an internet cafe. by the time i remembered to buy a pen and wrote everything down and finished it, the thread was closed and didn't get to put the final piece on.

shoot me.

[QUOTE=pixiesfanyo]shoot me.[/QUOTE]
Bam bam Bam

ive never even looked at the challenge stuff before. how does the challenge work?

Compliment my new avatar, paeons!

[QUOTE=super deluxe]Compliment my new avatar, paeons![/QUOTE]
Okay. I had almost the exact same thing almost a year ago.

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]I think in here we don't talk about actual music enough. I'm thinking about making a You Send It thread for S&L. Yay? Nay? Gay?[/QUOTE]
how about a forced listening and the users can just download the songs and give a sort of report of what they like about the song and what they don't I'm pretty sure the genre forums have this

I say yay.