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Liebensaft 11-27-2006 12:07 AM

123, he does. Also, I finished my poem for English. If you were in the 'hubub, you would know what it's about.

An Unspoken Elegance

A brisk November afternoon, just cold enough for a sweatshirt
Led her to her bicycle and out into the empty street.
Off she pedaled to befriend the soft soil and the dirt,
Soon finding herself amidst an infinite, rolling green.

She gently guided her alloy friend with her from the road
And into a wooded clearing where she laid him to rest
Upon a bed so soft, of naught but grasses, twigs, and stone.
She silently thanked the trees for welcoming them as guests.

Under the blanket of tranquility, she felt so at ease
That in that exact moment, the entire world had just stopped.
She feared time’s renewal, hoping to spend an eternity
Leaning against that wooden stranger, cursing the loathsome clock.

The brilliant light on this autumn day painted the sleepy earth
A color incapable of being captured by photo lens.
Her raucous schoolmates, out with friends, in their gaiety and their mirth
Will never see that beauty, laughing as the means to meet their ends.

Alone in her shelter of solitude and absolute bliss,
She was left to ponder the existence of all things large and small.
Her eyes were left to wander, and so they did, into the abyss
Of branches, leaves, grass and trees, desiring to ponder them all.

But the world had not stopped forever as she had so dearly hoped.
In a jolt that could be felt miles away, it started again.
And she was reminded of a very old grandfatherly quote.
“Find beauty in all that you see and you’ll never feel sad again.”

World Burns To Death 11-27-2006 12:09 AM

[QUOTE=Crack-Rock-Steady;13706886]123, he does. Also, I finished my poem for English. If you were in the 'hubub, you would know what it's about.

An Unspoken Elegance

A brisk November afternoon, just cold enough for a sweatshirt
Led her to her bicycle and out into the empty street.
Off she pedaled to befriend the soft soil and the dirt,
Soon finding herself amidst an infinite, rolling green.

She gently guided her alloy friend with her from the road
And into a wooded clearing where she laid him to rest
Upon a bed so soft, of naught but grasses, twigs, and stone.
She silently thanked the trees for welcoming them as guests.

Under the blanket of tranquility, she felt so at ease
That in that exact moment, the entire world had just stopped.
She feared time’s renewal, hoping to spend an eternity
Leaning against that wooden stranger, cursing the loathsome clock.

The brilliant light on this autumn day painted the sleepy earth
A color incapable of being captured by photo lens.
Her raucous schoolmates, out with friends, in their gaiety and their mirth
Will never see that beauty, laughing as the means to meet their ends.

Alone in her shelter of solitude and absolute bliss,
She was left to ponder the existence of all things large and small.
Her eyes were left to wander, and so they did, into the abyss
Of branches, leaves, grass and trees, desiring to ponder them all.

But the world had not stopped forever as she had so dearly hoped.
In a jolt that could be felt miles away, it started again.
And she was reminded of a very old grandfatherly quote.
“Find beauty in all that you see and you’ll never feel sad again.”[/QUOTE]
that's deep, joseph.

lynch_me 11-27-2006 12:16 AM

Hey It Didn't Even Rhyme!

Flagjacket 11-27-2006 02:29 AM

That's okay Joe.

coheneran 11-27-2006 04:33 AM

Lol. I went to a kickarse party last night, you're all the worse off for missing it. There were punk bands, live drum'n'bass, assorted dance music, Inner Terrestrials, Itchy Tits (who were alright), Crowzone (boring), and Head Jam, who were easily the best of the lot. And I mean GOOD. There was a DIY skate park there as well (it was in a warehouse that some punks squatted four years ago), so did a bit of blading. And had loads of drugs, three out of four of them I've never really had before. It was amazing. Really amazing. You all suck.

Liebensaft 11-27-2006 03:26 PM

[QUOTE=lynch_me;13706986]Hey It Didn't Even Rhyme![/QUOTE]

Yes it did, but I managed to compose something without using the overly generic AABB rhyme scheme.

Jessizzle 11-27-2006 03:28 PM

raise yer hand if you care about erans party!

Liebensaft 11-27-2006 03:32 PM

[QUOTE=coheneran;13707760]And had loads of drugs, three out of four of them I've never really had before. It was amazing. Really amazing. You all suck.[/QUOTE]

Cocaine, 2c-b, and LSD or one of those tryptamines with a number/letter name that the U.S. government makes emergency procedures to outlaw when they discover kids can buy a bunch on the internet. Amirite?

Also, bragging about drugs or talking about them without the conversation being on the topic already or having someone directly ask you is only going to make people dislike you. Srsly.

AIRIC 11-27-2006 03:32 PM

I do because the Inner Terrestrials are one of the best anarcho bands ever.

And seriously that's not going to make people dislike him anymore than people all ready do. If I went to a party and tried a knew drug I would sure as hell post about it. Kids do drugs. It was probably a signifigant part of his night just like it would be of yours or mine. It's not bragging it's just telling it how it is.

Liebensaft 11-27-2006 03:38 PM

[QUOTE=Skrunnch;13709704]And seriously that's not going to make people dislike him anymore than people all ready do. [/QUOTE]
Lol.
[QUOTE=Skrunnch; 13709704]If I went to a party and tried a knew drug I would sure as hell post about it. Kids do drugs. It was probably a signifigant part of his night just like it would be of yours or mine. It's not bragging it's just telling it how it is.[/QUOTE]
Eh. I might mention it in the 'hubub, or ask other people if they had experience with whatever substance it was. Unless other the topic of drugs is already being discussed, I tend to keep my experiences to myself.

pedro durruti 11-27-2006 03:38 PM

Damn, my roomate was gonna get kicked out, but he got another chance.

AIRIC 11-27-2006 03:39 PM

Haha what'd he do?

pedro durruti 11-27-2006 03:42 PM

We all got in trouble for alcohol, putting all of my roomates and me on probation. The conditions of his prohibition were even worse than ours, and he has been caught smoking cigarettes inside, and sneaking in a guest (he lost guest privileges). He was told one more violation he'd be kicked out after getting caught smoking, but apparently not! God damnit.

I know I may sound like an asshole for hoping he would have gotten kicked out, but he's an inconsiderate, stupid asshole.

Jessizzle 11-27-2006 03:52 PM

leave a empty bottle of alcohol with smoke butts in it on your doorstep. then if someone sees it they think its your roomate.

AIRIC 11-27-2006 03:55 PM

Some people are idiots. Why wouldn't he be more careful if he had only one more chance.

DaveToopes 11-27-2006 05:48 PM

I thought college would be way more laid back that that! You live in Harlem for Pete's (hehe) sake!

SantaDuJuan 11-27-2006 06:29 PM

I found this, more funny than a comedy central as a whole.

[18:11] Kati: i mean. relationships are based on physical attraction.
[18:12] SantaDuJuan: i mean.
[18:12] SantaDuJuan: you sucking deez nuts is based on physical attraction.

DaveToopes 11-27-2006 06:35 PM

So modest...

Flagjacket 11-27-2006 06:55 PM

Look at how funny I am!

DesksVsBikes: HEY ETHAN
DesksVsBikes: DEEZ NUTS?
Dave Toopes: oh my god that is so funny!
Dave Toopes: that's physical attraction!
Dave Toopes: ha ha ha!

AIRIC 11-27-2006 07:01 PM

Eran is your daddy a famous Israeli spy?

DaveToopes 11-27-2006 07:02 PM

Kevin makes me feel like an internet thug. I don't like it at all. What ever happened to that nice DaveToopes guy who is gone now?

Flagjacket 11-27-2006 07:03 PM

[QUOTE=Skrunnch;13711658]Eran is your daddy a famous Israeli spy?[/QUOTE]
Eric Cohen is to Jewish is as is Wong to Chinese names.

SantaDuJuan 11-27-2006 07:03 PM

[QUOTE=Flagjacket;13711603]Look at how funny I am!

DesksVsBikes: HEY ETHAN
DesksVsBikes: DEEZ NUTS?
Dave Toopes: oh my god that is so funny!
Dave Toopes: that's physical attraction!
Dave Toopes: ha ha ha![/QUOTE]

HAHA I HAVE TO BE AN AS[SIZE="2"]S[/SIZE]HOLE ON MX TO FEEL LIKE I'VE DONE SOMETHING REWARDING.

DaveToopes 11-27-2006 07:08 PM

I'm sorry Juan that was uncalled for. No sarcasm either bro this is from the heart.

Flagjacket 11-27-2006 07:09 PM

[QUOTE=SantaDuJuan;13711678]HAHA I HAVE TO BE AN AS[SIZE="2"]S[/SIZE]HOLE ON MX TO FEEL LIKE I'VE DONE SOMETHING REWARDING.[/QUOTE]

Juan how do you see through my shallow attempts at getting attention? It's true, you've uncovered the motivation behind my actions, it is my insecurity and social awkwardness tha tleads me to do such things ont he internet. I apoligize wholeheartedley, and I hope that you can help me with more of my psychoilogical internet problems over the future. I recently started making toddlers Paypal me lunch money, can you help me with that???

DaveToopes 11-27-2006 07:12 PM

Kevin where did you ever get to be so sarcastic?

Danger Bird 11-27-2006 07:15 PM

I don't understand everybody's attitude toward walking. If it's over half a mile they act like it's impossible. I just walked 4 miles home from school and it's like 35 degrees outside. I feel great.

AIRIC 11-27-2006 07:15 PM

Being a complete as[COLOR="White"]s[/COLOR]hole must be gratifying in some way to him. He hasn't made a nice or non sarcastic comment in months.

It's not really amusing anymore.

And I like to walk. I used to walk home from school which is a mile or two a lot but now everyone drives so I don't need to walk.

Flagjacket 11-27-2006 07:18 PM

Eric I make nice comments all the time!

AIRIC 11-27-2006 07:19 PM

No you don't you're an a[COLOR="White"]s[/COLOR]shole.

That doesn't even matter though more importantly you are not funny with your a[COLOR="White"]s[/COLOR]sholery.


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