shortz pretends to like eveyrthing ppl here make

lol no i'm just gonna throw all my EP's together with a couple of other tracks I made

Cripples Crossing Highways - [I]Complete Discography[/I]

^Aw, dangit. Well either way, I haven't heard anything other than [I]No Cake[/I] so I still look forward to it. It'll be interesting to see the progression, I guess

@ lim: I don't like everything, and I don't pretend, what's the point in that. If something needs work or I didn't care for something I'll say it, but for the most part the music people post on here is good.

do check out those songs I posted in the photoalbum thread I made when I was like 14 lol

[url]http://www.box.net/shared/javn16umi8pdm5rqrl46[/url]
[url]http://www.box.net/shared/sc2ch1rvuqe086e7m5cb[/url]
[url]http://www.box.net/shared/k1vhlbjtu7u8fr0r8bzb[/url]
[url]http://www.box.net/shared/bjatq337cd15kdm9risa[/url]

shortz is liar

^Just because I'm black don't make me a liar :(

Yeah I listened to them, they're pretty awkward pop for sure haha.

[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18647064][url]http://liesofamurderer.bandcamp.com/[/url]
[/QUOTE]

yeah so this is really good man, sounds so much better now that it's mastered

give us a mediafire link so we can pirate your album maps

[QUOTE=MalleusMaleficarum;18648044]give us a mediafire link so we can pirate your album maps[/QUOTE]

^^^

http://www.mediafire.com/?87pdlc24jhcz94i

yeah i don't mean to like spam this but i'm genuinely looking for feedback on this so if someone could find it in their heart to take 30 minutes to listen (to the whole thing) and tell me what you think i'd mightily appreciate. i always listen and give feedback to other peoples' stuff
[url]http://anthonypandolfino.bandcamp.com/[/url]

here i'll make it all eye popping and marketable like adb

[IMG]http://f.bandcamp.com/z/39/24/3924547574-1.jpg[/IMG]
Anthony Pandolfino - How Desolate Our Home, Bereft Of Thee

1. Celestial Glare 06:10
2. Symbols Of Your Degradtn 07:00
3. Tell My Children That I Loved Them 06:36
4. Tossed Into The Apothetae 07:15
5. Used To Pray Here 06:24

Downtempo IDM/Ambient Drone

it's good i promise

everyone shut up especially you high and driving you scrawny nerd

[QUOTE=Nepenthe;18648058]yeah i don't mean to like spam this but i'm genuinely looking for feedback on this so if someone could find it in their heart to take 30 minutes to listen (to the whole thing) and tell me what you think i'd mightily appreciate. i always listen and give feedback to other peoples' stuff
[url]http://anthonypandolfino.bandcamp.com/[/url]

here i'll make it all eye popping and marketable like adb

[IMG]http://f.bandcamp.com/z/39/24/3924547574-1.jpg[/IMG]
Anthony Pandolfino - How Desolate Our Home, Bereft Of Thee

1. Celestial Glare 06:10
2. Symbols Of Your Degradtn 07:00
3. Tell My Children That I Loved Them 06:36
4. Tossed Into The Apothetae 07:15
5. Used To Pray Here 06:24

Downtempo IDM/Ambient Drone

it's good i promise[/QUOTE]
will report back in half an hour

felt the first two tracks were a little overlong
the stuff done with vocals was really cool
drum tracks and ambient layers were great, the melody (or however you want to classify it) stuff didn't seem at their level
third song is the best
fourth seems a little aimless

nitpicking to provide some criticism, I liked it but it missed moments to raise it up like the end of the third track (minus the prominence of the 2 note melody forever)

drums and ambience are good but melodies could be better and there could be more attention-grabbing/dynamic parts, is what i'm getting from that. much appreciated man. these are the first 5 tracks i've made that i truly feel good about it and am happy with the style/sound, so i'm definitely going to continue progressing/refining this way.

[QUOTE=Haz;18647664]can you explain them, please? what is the significance of the "icon"? it reads as if if it is what they came to the planet to search in the first place. and why would the Ma-kashic need laser swords I thought their preferred method of butchery was their "carbonised mandibles"? I suppose a secondary weapon is not unheard of but it did read like this is what the humans were wielding.

if you are going to have an overarching concept that ties everything together you need to develop this before you write any of the songs so it isn't incomplete and refine the lyrics so they make sense, the descriptions were vague and you demonstrated absolutely no ability towards presenting things in a logical, non-ambiguous manner that could be read easily. as Mappy said earlier it read autistically and was disjointed enough that it really was the best one could piece together out of that mess that was your writing, I am unwilling to believe you are the David Lynch of writing slam death concept albums and there is supposed to be meaning to uncover under there which makes sense to anyone other than the guy who wrote it.

you should also try and google certain words before you use them, and no i'm not going to tell you which ones, because they read out of context or tentative in their use which makes you sound far more like a retard than guys like Paul or Jason you mock on the regular for being "autistic" because fuck, [I]you spent time on this shit.[/I]

That is all.[/QUOTE]

You're dumb dude.

The icon or "key" is something the humans think exists, it's basically something that makes you immortal.

They use the swords to kill or just use their claws. The carbonized mandibles have nothing to do with killing, the mandibles are carbonized as a sign of valor and before they are able to be teleported to get to their home planet (which is where the humans want to invade).

I've completely explained all your fucking dumbass questions coherently, but if you want to keep asking and look like an ass then go ahead dude. I really am laughing at how much effort you're going through to call me out and burst my bubble.

[QUOTE=Nepenthe;18648174]drums and ambience are good but melodies could be better and there could be more attention-grabbing/dynamic parts, is what i'm getting from that. much appreciated man. these are the first 5 tracks i've made that i truly feel good about it and am happy with the style/sound, so i'm definitely going to continue progressing/refining this way.[/QUOTE]

yeah, I definitely see your stuff being really good after a bit of refinement, gj dude

[QUOTE=adbforever;18648191]You're dumb dude.

The icon or "key" is something the humans think exists, it's basically something that makes you immortal.

They use the swords to kill or just use their claws. The carbonized mandibles have nothing to do with killing, the mandibles are carbonized as a sign of valor and before they are able to be teleported to get to their home planet (which is where the humans want to invade).

I've completely explained all your fucking dumbass questions coherently, but if you want to keep asking and look like an ass then go ahead dude. I really am laughing at how much effort you're going through to call me out and burst my bubble.[/QUOTE]

I really am laughing at how much effort you're going through to play it cool :p

utterly pathetic as usual, A+

guys we must inception the shit out adb on this

[QUOTE=Haz;18648246]I really am laughing at how much effort you're going through to play it cool :p

utterly pathetic as usual, A+[/QUOTE]

I'm not putting through any effort, youre just bad at reading comprehension

I never said shit about the mandibles were used to kill. Like wow.

I said "carbonized mandibles in motion as they slice" which is where the name is derived from. "carbonized GNAWING mandible" they gnaw/grit their teeth as they kill. So yea.

adb im laughling ye4s laughling at mandiblbles

[QUOTE=adbforever;18648252]I said "carbonized mandibles in motion as they slice" which is where the name is derived from. "carbonized GNAWING mandible" they gnaw/grit their teeth as they kill. So yea.[/QUOTE]

cause this is so obvious right

you know writing is mediocre when you have to explain missing details and clarify ambiguous meaning to people like this, right? :rolleyes: just own up

adb is very close to destroying the entire forum

i thought i would have done that myself upon my first reflection of this place o'
a decade ago...

[I]..lest adb be circumvented we're doomed...[/I]

thing is when Brent backs himself into a corner he just forces he way through the wall with his superpowers into another corner

it's a whole lot of jumping through walls. but at least he never gets cornered, I think he is proud of that

guys its so fucking obvious why dont you get it you stupid fucking bastard take your head out your ass and LOOK i arbitrarily decided that they randomly GNAW with their MANDABLES while they kill

any one could ascertain this

[QUOTE]thing is when Brent backs himself into a corner he just forces he way through the wall with his superpowers into another corner

it's a whole lot of jumping through walls. but at least he never gets cornered, I think he is proud of that[/QUOTE]

and then he denies being in the room in the first place

well when his boooorish trolllololololiung

gets in its sway...

[I]the psychology of brent[/I]

you guys are a joke. In reality:

you call me out on some really dumb bullshit in attempt to prove me wrong

I completely refute you

then you do shit like this lmao, like I care. It's always the same mob mentality zzzzzzz

yeah man lmao

[QUOTE=adbforever;18648290]you guys are a joke. In reality:

you call me out on some really dumb bullshit in attempt to prove me wrong

I completely refute you

then you do shit like this lmao, like I care. It's always the same mob mentality zzzzzzz[/QUOTE]

[img]http://s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/photos/images/newsfeed/000/010/836/lol-and-order-butthurt-anons-unit.jpg[/img]

1. haz says album concept makes no sense
2. adb says it does and fills him in on things that were not explained
3. adb thinks the unexplained things are obvious
4. according to adb, this is him 'refuting' haz
5. adb wins 'the argument'
6. adb takes home the prize because he is far gooder at [I]reading comprehension[/I]

because that's what good writers do. they read comprehension.

who the fuck is that guy :lol:

[QUOTE=adbforever;18648313]who the fuck is that guy :lol:[/QUOTE]

me? I'm 1338 h4x0r ... I take it you're adbutthurt

lawl

well when his boooorish trolllololololiung

gets in its sway...

hey brent, i didnt listen to the album, but it sucks dick!

[QUOTE=Bagehot;18648321]me? I'm 1338 h4x0r ... I take it you're adbutthurt[/QUOTE]

thought i recognised the username

Bagehot is actually an imitation of one of Iskandurr's nyms