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TojesDolan 05-05-2009 10:36 AM

yo slutty sloth

*tips hat*

*remembers he didn't bring a hat at all*

14CAPITALLETTERS 05-05-2009 10:55 AM

i found this poem today i lold

[B]The Pope's Penis[/B]

It hangs deep in his robes, a delicate
clapper at the center of a bell.
It moves when he moves, a ghostly fish in a
halo of silver sweaweed, the hair
swaying in the dark and the heat -- and at night
while his eyes sleep, it stands up
in praise of God.

Sharon Olds

TojesDolan 05-14-2009 12:36 AM

damn guys, i missed writing and crit0ing

having a girlfriend helps nothing in writing for me

being a completely dumb, lady-lame dude does, tho

TojesDolan 05-15-2009 02:02 PM

hey girls also tell me i'm more of the friend type

\0/

kitsch 05-16-2009 12:32 PM

[QUOTE=Herbert;17222115]That's true. I much prefer/find it easier to write within forms and find the restraint of technical aspects to poetry really interesting to study... so it probably would be a good choice.[/QUOTE]

yea man i've actually been more and more interested in forms as of late. i agree with you. the restriction forces me to find the best possible way of saying things.

kitsch 05-16-2009 06:41 PM

[QUOTE=TojesDolan;17241160]damn guys, i missed writing and crit0ing

having a girlfriend helps nothing in writing for me

being a completely dumb, lady-lame dude does, tho[/QUOTE]

you lost yr starving artist sex drive

FVG27 05-18-2009 10:37 AM

Does anyone else get bored and make newpaper blackout poetry? I'm enjoying it at the moment whenever I have to kill time between lectures and stuff.

http://www.austinkleon.com/category/newspaper-blackout-poems/
for those who don't know what I'm on about

kitsch 05-18-2009 11:50 AM

yes theyre tight as hell

hismajestythepope 05-23-2009 01:41 AM

blowjesblowan

kitsch 05-27-2009 11:49 PM

sup s&l?

havent had much time for critiquing/posting but im done with school now so i should be able to get back to it.

uncus_my_son 05-28-2009 01:15 AM

[QUOTE=Herbert;17249374]Does anyone else get bored and make newpaper blackout poetry? I'm enjoying it at the moment whenever I have to kill time between lectures and stuff.

http://www.austinkleon.com/category/newspaper-blackout-poems/
for those who don't know what I'm on about[/QUOTE]

that seems cool but i wouldnt want to spend the time
i do like to make little poems out of the random word magnets people sometimes put on their refrigerators
that seems like somewhat the same tactic

kitsch 05-28-2009 07:59 PM

[QUOTE=Pop music sucks;17265949]Hah, this has like a coffee house feel. The same regulars sitting in couches and recliners opposite of said couch, listening to chilled acoustic versions of catchy pop songs, talking of random things.

*sips tea*[/QUOTE]
so how about that new album from the smog guy?

can i buy you a drink?

kitsch 06-02-2009 03:45 PM

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=574773

kitsch 06-04-2009 05:09 PM

hey guys, im leaving tomorrow to go on a camping/fishing trip in northern ontario. hopefully ill have a lot of nature image poetry when i return.

foreverendeared 06-04-2009 05:19 PM

cool man have fun. nature poetry can be cool if done right

kitsch 06-04-2009 10:11 PM

this is one i wrote when i went to florida for spring break:


[I]Eons of waves curl and smooth
across millennia old sand
lined with miles of condominiums
[/I]

kitsch 06-12-2009 06:28 PM

kind of ran out of steam, but i restarted it with a more open ended line

Surf 07-12-2009 03:53 PM

Hello forum

Finished my degree which was fun

what's up round here?

kitsch 07-12-2009 08:35 PM

so does this mean you can actually post things now

Mr. Pickle 08-24-2009 05:26 AM

This thread should be used more.

Surf 08-24-2009 10:13 AM

I never post here any more

i read some stuff

but never post

maybe later

Mr. Pickle 08-24-2009 08:43 PM

Nah, post stuff now.

FVG27 08-25-2009 07:34 AM

I'm taking a 'Creating Poetry' module next year which will need to include a portfolio of about 6-7 poems so I'll be posting a lot pretty soon.

TojesDolan 08-26-2009 10:50 PM

nothing much surf, I have a blog now

and there's where I post stuff

i have a website too but there's no feedback there, ugh

maybe you should make a blog too serf

Mr. Pickle 08-28-2009 10:55 PM

don't do it, serf

Surf 08-31-2009 11:08 AM

maybe i will tojes

[I]maybe i will[/I]

[QUOTE=Aklerc;17467714]I'm taking a 'Creating Poetry' module next year which will need to include a portfolio of about 6-7 poems so I'll be posting a lot pretty soon.[/QUOTE]

did that, took loads of them. then a creative writing dissertation and now a creative writing masters

basically i don't want a job and i'm not doing anything to get myself one

Mr. Pickle 09-01-2009 01:47 PM

You guys like boobs?

Surf 09-02-2009 09:37 AM

Tits and bras, menage-a-tois, sex in expensive cars

Mr. Pickle 09-02-2009 04:24 PM

cool, cool

bowl of oranges 09-12-2009 11:45 PM

my head is lead, i don't ever want to go to bed.


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