[quote=permanent Solution;16563588]someone Should Critique My Piece.

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I'm going to crit some stuff later, so I'll do it then.

man, these boards are really inconsistant. i mean, one day theyres a bunch of crits, next day its nada.

I was going to crit it, but then I went to the pub and forgot.

So I'll try and do it today.

Pubs tend to do that.

Kaki King is so good.

99 cent high gravity.

ill be forgetting tons of **** tonight.

Brass monkeys?

Or even worse, sidewalk-slammer
high grav + sparks
When you finish drinking it, slam it on the sidewalk.

Jagerbombs + Grolsch ftw

...really? I like Grolsch, but jager tastes like toothpaste and brolove.

[QUOTE=Dancin' Man;16576132]Brass monkeys?

Or even worse, sidewalk-slammer
high grav + sparks
When you finish drinking it, slam it on the sidewalk.[/QUOTE]

lol, noice

[QUOTE=Dancin' Man;16576749]...really? I like Grolsch, but jager tastes like toothpaste and brolove.[/QUOTE]

that's why you need to drink it quickly in a jager bomb

as much as i like any spirit, nothing will ever compare to the pure excellence that is vodka. best drink ever. especially with coke.

but i end up drinking lager mostly. grolsch is nice.

Cheap jug wine (Carlo Rossi - paisano) Jim Beam and micro brewed beer are all i need. Bombay Gin ain't so bad either

Go review my vocals/lyrics

i would do more critting but i seem to have no drive to do it at all at the moment

and that means they're usually not up to scratch

[QUOTE=Dancin' Man;16581337]Cheap jug wine (Carlo Rossi - paisano) Jim Beam and micro brewed beer are all i need. Bombay Gin ain't so bad either

Go review my vocals/lyrics[/QUOTE]

my friends and i are having a redneck/white trash party. mad dog 20/20, adderall, triple c's, 8 star, and ultra-buy cigarettes. also: rev out engines in taco bell's parking lot.

god i ****in suck at writing atm

[QUOTE=Surf;16596363]i would do more critting but i seem to have no drive to do it at all at the moment

and that means they're usually not up to scratch[/QUOTE]

Ya I'm having problems with motivation. I know I should but. . . . just cbf

Hey, I'm making critiques guys!

You should too!

I have been. =D

I'll do something now

but yeah what's up s&l? no one talks in here any more

I'm going back to uni in a couple of weeks, for my final year. Half of my stuff is creative writing: writing a short film and a creative writing dissertation.

What're other people up to?

Just finished handing in my poetic manifesto for uni aka 1500 word wankfest over my poems lol.

I'm doing nothing creative. Go me. I quit my job and i'm having a holiday for a bit. I am currently looking for some awesome bands though. Currently spinning God Is An Astronaut. The vids people have made for GIAA songs on youtube are quite awesome.

Some music projects, a lot of school.

Not much of a writer lately, but I'm into writing essays and stuff.

most of my assessment next year is essay based. everytime I leave it until the last minute.

never really got into GIAA. but I do have tickets for sun kil moon in a couple of weeks so that's awesome.

hai gice dont you just hate it when theres that one rebellious guy who always has to give his stupid opinion about stuff

like [size="8"]omfgwtfbbq[/size]

[I]**** man, constructive cristism is all you need to say on these threads. positive feedback before negative. lets think before we come off as a douche bag.[/I]

or you could grow some balls and cop both kinds of criticism like a man idk.

thats my take.

off to see sun kil moon tonight. should be a good gig. no idea if there's any support acts or anything but wtf maybe they'll chuck in some rhp painters songs which would be nice.

Good luck with that. I've tried to give them a listen a few times but nothing is clicking, I think it's the voice.

really? his voice seems pretty good to me - nothing really wrong with it. he sounds really young on the early rhp records compared to now.

gig was good, the venue was an old boat someone turned into a club which was really cool.