didn't realize the grunts were words I thought it was Brent sitting there on the John hoping the Ducolax would kick in

[QUOTE=adbforever;18647012]So much wrong. It'll take me some time to point out how wrong you are.[/QUOTE]
You seem to have this issue where you assume people can read your thoughts through broken sentences...

[QUOTE]There was some mission involving marines, invading a planet. [/quote]

yes, they wanted to invade a planet


[QUOTE]There is some level of risk involved, but it's totally worth it, for what however is unspecified.[/QUOTE]

They're looking for something, yes.

[QUOTE]
They come across the aliens, there is an exchange of fire and one man emerges from the bloodshed, a "pile of human gore" if you will[/QUOTE].

They knew the aliens existed, but I'm telling that in the next album. It'll be the prequel.

[QUOTE]They are in a steel vault, and through the horror of what he just went through the survivor awakens to heightened senses[/QUOTE].

no, he doesn't have heightened senses, the aliens do. Hence why they find the guy so easily after he emerges.


[QUOTE] Now this steel vault seems to be anchoring a docking bay of some kind, the Marine (referred to as a "gelatinous base") steps onto the surface of the homeworld attempting to move through a metropolis, no less.[/QUOTE]

Fucking idiot, it's a ship. They're on a ship.

The gelantinous base is the ground of the planet, there is a metropolis on the planet with a lot of alien arcitecture.

[QUOTE]Infrared vision guides this human through the desolated terrain of the very large and densely populated city.[/QUOTE]

Yeah

[QUOTE]This man probes for what is described as "an icon that may or may not exist", amongst the landscape of this indescrible, uncomprehending architecture. [/QUOTE]N

Uh huh

[QUOTE]ow somehow the location has been changed to ancient egypt, cause there are Hieroglyphics up here.[/QUOTE]

They're alien hieroglyphics, derp

[QUOTE]An aura illuminates the night sky, and more Ma-kashic appear. This event is referred to as Genesis, for some reason, and signals something vaguely referred to as the "origin of another stage". [/QUOTE]

You realize the name of the song is "Light Cycle Initiated right? Derp. Genesis means the beginning of something. Stop being retarded (or trolling, can't tell)

[QUOTE]Instead of just killing him this time around the survivor is captured on a life support system involving some sort of oxygen apparatus, despite having being labelled as "effortless slaughter".[/QUOTE]

More idiocy. No. His apparatus is how he's breathing hurr dur. He's an effortless slaughter because he..is...

[QUOTE]To what end, nobody knows. "His survivability a shame" is repeated at least twice, emphasising the helplessness of the situation but there seems to some reinforcements on the way, thanks to a tracking device the Marine is carrying with him. But it seems all is not good here either cause these backup cruisers seem to be already boarded by squadrons of Ma-kashic and there is such pressure on their forces that they can't even enter the atmosphere. [/QUOTE]

Yeah.


[QUOTE]The Ma-kashic can apparently shape-shift, with their carbonised mandibles they favour decapitation as their "prime method of butchery". A little bit of backstory is explained, the Ma-kashic see themselves as the imperalistic "Knights of Genocide" who want to destroy humanity, though at the start of this story the humans were the ones who invaded their planet.[/QUOTE]

It doesn't start off as an invasion, It'll probably be explained in the next album, as I stated earlier.

[QUOTE]This is all done in the name of having secrets to keep, to preserve. There seems to be some kind of a sacrifice ritual to this end[/QUOTE]

Yes, the Ma-kashic have been invaded by a lot of species and there always is a token survivor. They capture the survivors and harvest their organs and create their own "monument" to their superiority. Hence the title "Harvested and Disposed"


[QUOTE]There is some talk about how the human weaponry of plasma blades are useless, and described as "unequivocal" against the horde of Ma-kashic forces. There is a closing dialogue how the humans never knew what was coming. And if I remember correctly the album ends with samples of a thunderstorm. The end.[/QUOTE]

plasma blades are what the aliens use, derp. The thunderstorm is the beginning of the next album. It'll be explained relax :thumb:

[quote]The icon the marine was searching for seems to have been forgotten along with the marine, wtf. Why would the Ma-kashic closely observe humanity for millions of years until they actually became a viable threat enough to be able to invade their home planet, in the name of "preserving their secrets"? Humanity apparently never knew of their existence in the first place. [/QUOTE]

There was no icon, or is there? Stay tuned

tldr;

Yes, Haz is retarded because he can't follow an incredibly disjointed rant telling an incomplete story.

damn, maybe I should have played generic metalcore instead of generic brutal death metal. Maybe then I would have gotten less 1's on the review site.

Your music is just as bad, if not worse lol. It's horse shit :lol:

"Lies of a Murderer" :lol: Rasta colors so cool :lol:

weed and beer :thumb:

Mappy's stuff isn't bad at all, you just aren't listening correctly

[url]http://www.sputnikmusic.com/review/45564/Carbonized-Gnawing-Mandible-Harvested-and-Disposed/[/url]

After I wrote you this positive review Brent?

[QUOTE]Mappy's stuff isn't bad at all, you just aren't listening correctly[/QUOTE]
my stuff isn't bad at all either, plow even said it was decent but gave it a 1 just because it's made by me, he's trying super fucking hard to embarass me. He did w/ Drifting Icon and he's doing it again. Yawn.

I'm utterly shocked everyone is giving it a 1. I'm [I]totally shocked[/I].

I'm going to be making more music. I have an EP almost done for Drifting Icon but it'll be on the backburner. I have another album in the works with luke as another project, as well as I'm writing another album for CGM.

you have serious ego problems :lol:

you have serious glandular problems :lol:

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/LCTng.jpg[/IMG]

and you sound like you have constipation problems

thanks for the input paul, you can now go back to looking like a dude with down syndrome.

[url]http://liesofamurderer.bandcamp.com/[/url]

I wish this was as professionally recorded and as tight as Brent's shit.

I wish I knew how to scream like him, and I wish we had a drum machine instead of a stupid fucking talented drummer.

so is it down syndrome or cancer now

my bandcamp is being made by luke but his internet sucks. Lossless files are huge.

brent my boy's album is way better than anything you will ever make in your entire lifetime

ahahahahaha what is this shit

[QUOTE=adbforever;18647067]my bandcamp is being made by luke but his internet sucks. Lossless files are huge.[/QUOTE]

what do you need lossless for

its not like there's any fine detail in that shitty production

it's required for bandcamp dumbass
[QUOTE=publicastration;18647068]brent my boy's album is way better than anything you will ever make in your entire lifetime[/QUOTE]

link

im assuming mappy is ethan's boy

[url]http://www.mediafire.com/?tpis15bz98wbe3l[/url]

Brent like... I know you're going through quite a bout of rumpsoreness, but my band's EP was recorded in a PRIVATE STUDIO. By a professional producer. Who's produced bands that are actually relevant to the current hardcore scene. My band mates actually play IN TIME with one another, and we have an actual DRUMMER.

It's not just some nerd from Florida struggling to improv slam (seriously, HOW THE FUCK DO YOU STRUGGLE TO PLAY SLAM?) over absurd drum samples.

[QUOTE=publicastration;18647070]what do you need lossless for

its not like there's any fine detail in that shitty production[/QUOTE]

Bandcamp requires lossless files.

[quote=adbforever;18647027]yes, they wanted to invade a planet




They're looking for something, yes.

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They knew the aliens existed, but I'm telling that in the next album. It'll be the prequel.

.

no, he doesn't have heightened senses, the aliens do. Hence why they find the guy so easily after he emerges.




Fucking idiot, it's a ship. They're on a ship.

The gelantinous base is the ground of the planet, there is a metropolis on the planet with a lot of alien arcitecture.



Yeah

N

Uh huh



They're alien hieroglyphics, derp



You realize the name of the song is "Light Cycle Initiated right? Derp. Genesis means the beginning of something. Stop being retarded (or trolling, can't tell)



More idiocy. No. His apparatus is how he's breathing hurr dur. He's an effortless slaughter because he..is...



Yeah.




It doesn't start off as an invasion, It'll probably be explained in the next album, as I stated earlier.



Yes, the Ma-kashic have been invaded by a lot of species and there always is a token survivor. They capture the survivors and harvest their organs and create their own "monument" to their superiority. Hence the title "Harvested and Disposed"




plasma blades are what the aliens use, derp. The thunderstorm is the beginning of the next album. It'll be explained relax :thumb:



There was no icon, or is there? Stay tuned[/quote]lmao best post ever

[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18647075]Brent like... I know you're going through quite a bout of rumpsoreness, but my band's EP was recorded in a PRIVATE STUDIO. By a professional producer. Who's produced bands that are actually relevant to the current hardcore scene. My band mates actually play IN TIME with one another, and we have an actual DRUMMER.

It's not just some nerd from Florida struggling to improv slam (seriously, HOW THE FUCK DO YOU STRUGGLE TO PLAY SLAM?) over absurd drum samples.[/QUOTE]

your band plays the most fucking generic metalcore I've ever heard

I guess luke should play more metalcore riffs.

Your album doesn't suck because of the genre, it sucks because the dude is clearly an awful guitarist.

I agree, my band is pretty damn generic, but it's not like we're struggling to play simple music, or like we lack energy, or like our music has unbearably poor production and terrible vocals and a drum machine programmed by a nerd with no rhythm.

listening to your boys album luc, what's with everyone in pa playing shitty metalcore? Is that like the scene or something? fuck this

Mappy's vocals make me swoon

adb = so butthurt. :lol:

shortz = <3<3<3

oh wait this is mappys band :lol:

[I]plasma blades are what the aliens use, derp. The thunderstorm is the beginning of the next album. It'll be explained relax [/I]

and might I add mappy has still only heard one of the songs on my album and judging it by that

he's so bad at trolling I feel sorry for him

I can safely assume the rest of the album is as plodding, sloppy, and ridiculous.

I'll try listening to another fucking song if you stop crying, but I'm telling you, I already don't like slam, so it's doubtful that I'll like improv slam played by a really bad guitarist, with your vocals over it.

are you implying that all the songs are radically different from one another?

[QUOTE=witchxrapist;18647096]I can safely assume the rest of the album is as plodding, sloppy, and ridiculous.

I'll try listening to another fucking song if you stop crying, but I'm telling you, I already don't like slam, so it's doubtful that I'll like improv slam played by a really bad guitarist, with your vocals over it.[/QUOTE]

theres a breakdown in song 2!!! you like breakdowns hAHAHA

here u go mappy

[url]http://www.last.fm/music/Carbonized+Gnawing+Mandible/Harvested+and+Disposed/Survival+Vessel[/url]

[QUOTE=(*The Noonward Race*);18647091][I]plasma blades are what the aliens use, derp. The thunderstorm is the beginning of the next album. It'll be explained relax [/I][/QUOTE]

lol

You're getting a bit manic there, kiddo.