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BlacklightGuitarist 01-11-2004 07:29 PM

The strictest sense could well be flawed,
Propriety denies truth's sword,
Wretched run off to their deths,
And Steve has been condemned of theft.

Seeking
One
Good
Singer

A Torn Theory 01-11-2004 07:47 PM

for seeking the prize with wishful hands
you've only recieved one lick of praise
cause good is bad in a rewritten phrase
and this singer only sings for worst to come


eight
clot
machines
disfunction

drifting away 01-11-2004 08:31 PM

now the clock striks eight
with a clot in his heart
the machines falls apart
to its normal disfunction

only
in
good
time

lanax87 01-11-2004 10:12 PM

the only son of a muderer
his dad in jail before he was two
with good reason but no hatred
he took the time to visit him

hello
empty
shallow
grave

drifting away 01-11-2004 10:21 PM

the corps said hello
with empty words
he had a shallow mind
that dug its own grave (sarry it sucks)

The
wave
breaks
up

joshmay 01-12-2004 10:34 AM

the one ambition i pursued, failed
wave goodbye to another fear assailed
an apparition breaks my train of thought,
clouds up all hope of everything i've sought

who
is
more
welcome

A Torn Theory 01-12-2004 01:33 PM

for who is here is always gone
too often than it is likely sought
the more you bend the less you feel
you're welcome for the lovely thought


privilege
subscribe
denounce
subconcious

joshmay 01-12-2004 02:40 PM

[quote]
the more you bend the less you feel
[/quote]

GENIUS!!!!

what a privilege im granted
faced with another anonymous subscription
denounce your past, infidel
or will you subconciously abbhor?

blue
daffodils
beget
envy

A Torn Theory 01-12-2004 03:29 PM

so blue is the color of my makeshift grin
dying the daffodils to match the mood
beget the wind, the sun, and sky
and envy the mother of the moon

benthic
lingo
spine
coal

orex 01-12-2004 05:47 PM

first time at this

my hart is at benthic
cause i dont understand your lovers lingo
you have got me by the spine
your intentions are as dark as coal

i think thats right


hatred
fire
love
water

drifting away 01-12-2004 05:58 PM

for now he's filled with haitred
its like a fire burnind inside
though he use to know what love was
water washed it all away

leaving
far
now
done

A Torn Theory 01-12-2004 08:16 PM

leaving but only a drop of bad luck
that's already drying from the sun out far
and everything once reliable, now blinks away
slowly blinking away, fading, dead, now done

palm
view
experience
busted

socialanxiety 01-12-2004 08:36 PM

palm
view
experience
busted

Tears of sorrow fell into your [I]palm[/I]s,
You seemed to drift away, further and further from my [I]view[/I],
I had yet to [I]experience[/I] such heart felt agony,
I turned to the trophee, your heart, and [I]busted[/I] it on the wall.

Daydreams
Nightmares
Hatred
Confusion

BlacklightGuitarist 01-13-2004 05:01 PM

His daydreams filled with him succeeding,
Nightmares held to all his thoughts,
Hatred ever superceding,
Confusion speaks in ones and noughts.

Be
Ee
Ay
Utiful

drifting away 01-15-2004 07:35 PM

befor i left school
all i got where ee's
ay story for what is gone
its all thats utful (it sucks but so did the words)

youth
as
tragic
horror

RunawayForToday 01-15-2004 07:51 PM

A corrupted youth
Blinking as he watches his end
With magic so tragic
And an eyeful of horror.

Leave
Then
Behind
Forever

A Torn Theory 01-15-2004 07:54 PM

the bible stole my youth with ease
as ambitious thieves break all the rules
and this tragic euphoria that's upside down
brings horror to my wounded eyes

epitaph
pencil
speaker
disconnected

joshmay 01-22-2004 04:43 PM

no pulse left in that epitaph
the penciled-in memories rub away
deaf to this vivid speaker's wrath
disconnected from stark reality

it
a
of
an

Jorian 01-22-2004 06:43 PM

it never seems
a feeling fades
of past experience
an emotion slayed

one
note
ascension
raised

theseen 01-22-2004 08:37 PM

****
 
:angry: How the **** do you come up whith these lyrics i tried to write something the only thing i could come up with was this

[I]I FEEL LIKE IM LOST
I CANT FIND A WAY
TO TELL YOU IM SORRY
FOR ALL THAT IVE SAID[/I]

im still triying to work on it but i stink at this maybe you should give a hint, a little help. :confused: :confused: :confused:

joshmay 01-22-2004 09:03 PM

^different thread please :)

one fear aside, the rest taken in
note the repentance, beware the sin
preparation for the final ascension
"bon voyage"- off to raised dimensions

wow
that
was
terrible

Jorian 01-23-2004 05:46 AM

wow my heart feels overun
with feelings from that tragic end
there was no way to stop the gun
that terrible sound that did befriend

never
quick
forgo
event

Bleeding4You 01-23-2004 02:17 PM

[QUOTE=Jorian]wow my heart feels overun
with feelings from that tragic end
there was no way to stop the gun
that terrible sound that did befriend

never
quick
forgo
event[/QUOTE]

I never want to see you again,
So quick to go through the door,
Forgo, I don't know what it means
What a catastrophe event.

Cheese
Clown
Masterbate
Trumpet

joshmay 01-23-2004 07:13 PM

cheesy super-hero cliche lines
clown around within my mind
its another mental masturbation
trumpets sound, internal jubilation

where
is
polyphonia
today

joshmay 01-24-2004 09:04 AM

babump...come on guys, has the lyrical forum disintegrated into this nothingness, of all taking and no giving, posting new songs but never critiquing others?

cytoplasmicblob 01-24-2004 10:16 AM

oh, i have no clue
where is my pencil
did polyphonia engulf it
today, thats quite unlikely

im so glad we revived this thread

cup
clock
suction
blink-182

joshmay 01-24-2004 10:22 AM

cup your hands o'er your ears
the ear-shattering tick of the clock goes on
a black hole suctions the life away
the world pops in another blink-182 cd

speak
from
the
heart

cytoplasmicblob 01-24-2004 10:25 AM

i own a speaking nail vacuum cleaner
words come out of the noise
the message is clear though:
"i will suck your heart out"

light
late
leach
beer

joshmay 01-24-2004 10:43 AM

light shatters your soul
a late remedy to evil
leeches burst into sight
drink your prophetic beer, wait for upheaval

bland
resonance
fool
pity

A Torn Theory 01-24-2004 09:01 PM

well everything i taste is bland
the resonance of your laughter rings
that i was a fool and you were a king
and you'll pity me til the day i'm royalty


telephoto
miosis
yellow
rustic


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