ok just posted a song
this is my masterpiece describing my feelings in life with perfection..
you're going to feel it
anyways check it out
[url=http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=330230]I am not who I am[/url]

:lol: Corupt, I like your style. I'll check out your song. Maybe you can be on this years "summer squad". :lol: :thumb:

lol oh my
Do I get one of those cool patches to put on my sleeves?

ah doesn't matter I may not be aloud around here long enough to make the induction ceremony lol.. theres alot of arguing going on in the challenge 86 replies thread and it just happens to be agianst an old forum member that is an immature child, DFelon, and me

okay, so we have our first battle of the bands tomorrow, and we're play against kids 3 years older than us (we're all 14 playing with 17 year olds), but we feel we really have shot because we wrote two new prety good songs and we practiced the hell out of it, does anyone have any good advice for swaying judges at a battle of the bands?

IOWNU- Good luck. :thumb: you'll kick a$$ no matter what. Some suggestions are, just put alot of energy, or as much as you can, into your performance. That's what my band did, and ask sparky, we took battle of the bands home. We did everything we could possibly think of to make people go "wow!". But with your lyrics, it doesnt matter how old the other band is, it's all up to how YOU are on stage. You can do it, and tell us how it goes. :thumb:

Corupt- If you want a patch, sure :lol:. Now what's the situation with Dfelon? You should explain it, and maybe I can help you. I heard he's a cool guy. :thumb:

thanks thirdeye, btw, do you think you could hook me up with some of your band's stuff, i don't believe i've ever heard any

Yeah, no problem. Do you want me to email it to you? I think I can do that. :thumb:

I have once again brought back, the UPDATED WRITER'S GUIDE TO A GOOD SONG. Read it when you get the chance. :thumb:

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Corupt- If you want a patch, sure :lol:. Now what's the situation with Dfelon? You should explain it, and maybe I can help you. I heard he's a cool guy. :thumb:[/QUOTE]
nah screw the patch it's childish
let's just get drunk and go get tattoos
:chug:

as for the situation
a truce was proposed

by the way Slaveboy after that battle you need to get to work I already have two soings you haven't critiqued

Heavenly Crush
and
I am not who I am

sure, e-mail is [email]IOWNU400@yahoo.com[/email]

Ok IOWNU, will do. I'll get them to you as soon as I can. :thumb:

we lost :upset: . We played a great show though. Where some of the other bands killed us in overall talent we made up ground in crowd support and crowd activity. In the end though, we just dind't have quite the talent.

So tomorrow, my jazz band is competing in Bridewater. Actually, it's not even my band, I'm just doing a feature with the other guitarist on "Oye Como Vay." I get to miss all of school. :) And then I get to miss next Friday again for my original jazz band at school. And sometime I believe I am trying out for Newark jazz band.

So besides jazz, I'm working on a lot of stuff lyric-wise but I can't seem to put it together as a whole. I have great lines but I can't seem to connect them and make a whole song out of them. I also tried to change my style so it is not as boring and cliche as I used to write. So I may be posting soon.

And I just started a band with an awesome bassist, a decent vocalist, and a drummer that doesn't listen to anything besides hardcore. So we're pretty much limited to stuff along the lines of Minor Threat, Bad Brains, Black Flag, and maybe some newer hardcore such as Refused. I actually like playing that style a lot, it's easy to write, sing, and fun to play shows.

And that is all. Sleep.

[Cameo]Hi errrbuddy![/Endcameo]

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So besides jazz, I'm working on a lot of stuff lyric-wise but I can't seem to put it together as a whole. I have great lines but I can't seem to connect them and make a whole song out of them. I also tried to change my style so it is not as boring and cliche as I used to write. So I may be posting soon.

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Ha, I hate when that happens man.

I come with some great lines and try to write songs around them but it never works.

I'm thinking about pulling a Burroughs and just starting to cut and paste lines into a song. :p

[QUOTE=IOWNU200]we lost :upset: . We played a great show though. Where some of the other bands killed us in overall talent we made up ground in crowd support and crowd activity. In the end though, we just dind't have quite the talent.[/QUOTE]
you'll develop it over time don't get down

I have a question guys.

If there was to be a top ten of the best S&L er's of 2005 so far, who would it be do you think? My list is:

1. Zeppelinfan
2. Pixiefanyo
3. APS
4. Sparky
5. IOWNU
6. Spectrumguitarist
7. Mshort
8. Morrissey
9. Attaboy Skip
10. Corupt (for a noob that's not to bad. Well a sort of noob anyway.)

And I have to say that one of the best newcomers I have seen is Corupt. :thumb:
And the village idiot is Thirdeyeisgod.

Oh yes and also, not as though anybody might care. But it's my birthday today! Just thought that I would throw that out there. :thumb:

Happy B day, jerk.

:lol: Thank you metaliq, I can always count on you. :thumb: Thanks really.

Happy B-day, but I think village idiot is king and all his other SNs

[QUOTE=thirdeyeblindislit]Oh yes and also, not as though anybody might care. But it's my birthday today! Just thought that I would throw that out there. :thumb:[/QUOTE]
Happy birthday.

:lol: Thanks guys, I really appricate it. It means alot. :thumb:

[QUOTE=thirdeyeblindislit]
10. Corupt (for a noob that's not to bad. Well a sort of noob anyway.)

And I have to say that one of the best newcomers I have seen is Corupt. :thumb:
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I was here when IOWNU and APS joined
I just went to boot camp that's why I was gone for such a long time
but I appeaciate it none the less ;-)

If only I was a n00b....

Little known fact, zep, APS, metaliq, and corupt are all MY screen names. I just post on different ones because I have dissociative personality disorder.

I actually went to a psychiatrist about this, and now I'm on meds for it. They might take a while to work though.

Little known fact, Renaissance and SubtleDagger are the same person.

P.S. APS is lying because I write much better songs than him.

Even lesser known fact... Jared, Burt and Jiji are actually the same person. Few know about the DBJ connection.